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Funny you bring that up, the first chapter was actually a one-shot at first, some folks prompted me to write more so I went with it. I love seduction, so if I were to go back and write it with a story arc in mind, I might have written it differently.

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Well, it's a good story, so...

I was actually uncertain at first, since the first chapter sorta rushes things and Rarity hooks up with DT with rather little introduction and motivation. But it makes up for it in the later parts by fleshing them out a lot more.

Hi and thanks for the favorite on my story! Glad you're enjoying it!