From Bad to Worse
Two months later…
“It WILL work!”
“It won’t…”
“Fluttershy, a little support, please? I’m finally doing what you wanted; I’m telling Trixie the truth. Why are you being negative?”
“Because… you should have told her two months ago. When she learns that you have been hiding this from her for so long, she won’t be happy.”
“That’s why I’m going on a date with her first. So she doesn't gets as mad at me.”
“Do you really think so, Rarity?”
“I do. Trust me, it will end up just fine.”
They were having this discussion while they were having a mud bath at the spa. Rarity had admitted to Fluttershy that she couldn’t keep lying to Trixie any longer. She spent the whole past day thinking on how to make her marefriend so happy that she wouldn’t get too mad at her. At least, that’s what Rarity hoped.
“I hope you’re right, Rarity. Have fun in your date today and… good luck.”
“Thank you, darling. You are going out with Twilight tonight as well, right?” Fluttershy nodded happily. “Have fun you two!” Rarity smiled. Both mares spent the rest of the session relaxing and talking about various themes, including a special order that Rarity received from a celebrity which was due a week later. Once the session was over, it was time to say good bye for the day. Rarity had to pick Trixie up and Fluttershy had to head to Golden Oak. When Rarity arrived, she knocked on the door and waited for Trixie to answer it.
“Hello, Rarity.” Trixie received her marefriend with a peak on her lips.
“Are you ready?”
“I am. I’m taking my cape and hat; I’m glad that I don’t need to hide anymore.” Trixie said as they began to walk to the park.
“All thanks to apologizing to everypony last month. I’m proud of you, Trixie!”
“I wouldn’t have done it without you. When everypony stared at me with hate I thought that they were going to kill me! But, you stood in front of them and convinced them to give me one more chance…” The showmare romantically gazed at her companion while she finished speaking. Rarity blushed as she gazed back.
“I couldn’t leave my marefriend alone. You proved everypony that you are a different pony during this last month; the cakes even let you work as a cashier from time to time. Everything’s going great.” The fashionista began to walk closer to her date and intertwined tails with her.
“Yeah… everything’s going great…” Both mares walked in silence the rest of the way. They just enjoyed their company. They didn’t need words to express their feelings. When they arrived to the park, however, they noticed that they forgot to bring a blanket.
“Oh, no! What are we going to do? I just came from a spa session!”
“Don’t worry, Rarity. I got it covered.” Trixie removed her cape and put it on the grass.
“But, Trixie, that’s your favorite cape...”
“I’ll wash it later. I have to prevent your beautiful fur from getting dirty.” Rarity's face became turned completely red. Trixie raised a hoof to Rarity, who took it and let her guide her to the improvised blanket where she sat. Trixie sat right next to her.
“Trixie, darling, there’s something I want to tell you…”
“What is it, beautiful?” The way Trixie looked at her made Rarity’s heart beat faster and louder. She didn’t realize how red her face was but her date did. The magician pony smiled and leaned closer to Rarity and kept her eyes on hers. Rarity opened her mouth and closed it several times, unable to talk. Trixie didn’t make things easier when she touched noses with her.
“I’m… I… I wanted to tell you that, that… I’m really enjoying the time I’m spending with you.”
“Me too.” Trixie gave Rarity a peek on her nose. The fashionista smiled like she never did before and hugged her date.
“Where have you been my entire life, Trixie? Why your life had to be so unfortunate? Why?”
Trixie caressed Rarity’s mane. “If my life hadn’t been so unfortunate, we would probably had never gotten together. I would still be in my hometown and it’s far from here. For so long, I was sad for my luck, but now, I have you. I have you to make me smile again, I have you to help me make more friends, and, I have you to make my heart soar…” A tear of joy ran through Rarity’s cheek. Hearing that made her extremely happy. But it also made her feel guiltier. She had to tell Trixie that she accidentally broke her promise by the end of the day.
“Trixie…” Rarity looked up to meet Trixie’s eyes looking at her. The fancy Unicorn put her forelegs around her date’s neck and kissed her passionately. Trixie returned the kiss as she hugged Rarity tighter. They didn’t pulled away, they didn’t want to pull away. Rarity let herself be pinned down to the floor. Minutes later, they pulled away and stared into each other's eyes.
“I’m breathless… Rarity, that was…”
“Amazing…” The showmare kissed her cheek and smiled as she laid next to Rarity. They both put their hooves on their own chests and didn’t look away from each other. “Is everything fine with Fluttershy, Trixie?”
“Yes, really well. We talk and share stuff. She even taught me everything she knows about costrue.”
“Why did you ask her to teach you that?”
“Isn’t it obvious? I want to know more about you, and your work is a big part of your life.”
Rarity reached out a hoof to her marefriend and Trixie took it. They gazed at each other’s eyes for a while before the fashionista decided to get closer to Trixie and cuddle against her. The blue Unicorn embraced her and kissed her forehead before happily looking at the sky while Rarity rested her eyes with her head on the chest of her date, trying not to think about what was going to happen that night.
Hours passed. The sun was setting to leave place for the moon. Rarity and Trixie were heading back to Carousel Boutique. Their tails were intertwined as usual.
“Rarity? Is there something wrong? We are almost at your place and you didn’t say a word. You normally talk a lot, which I like…”
“Hmm? Oh, it is nothing. Everything’s fine.” The fancy Unicorn giggled nervously, getting Trixie more suspicious.
“If you say so…” When they arrived, Rarity invited Trixie in and both of them sat on the couch. Rarity wasted no more time and decided to tell her the truth right away.
“Trixie… there’s something I need to tell you…”
“Yes…?”
“Before I say it, I want you to know that I’m sorry, I didn’t mean it…”
“Rarity, you’re scaring me… What do you want to tell me? What did you do?”
Rarity sensed the worry in Trixie’s voice. She couldn’t hold it any longer. “Two months ago, I… I accidentally told Fluttershy that you had a brother. I’m so sorry…!” Trixie’s worry face changed to a shocked one. Her jaw dropped and her eyes became expressionless. “Trixie? Trixie, say something, please, Trixie!”
How could she do this? I trusted her and she broke her promise! She was supposed to be perfect… I can’t believe it, I can’t even trust my own marefriend, the pony supposed to make me happy… If I can’t trust her, I can’t trust anypony! I’m done!
“Trixie…” Rarity put her hoof on Trixie’s, but the magician pony quickly rejected it.
“You’re just like everypony else, I trusted you and you stabbed me in my back! How didn’t I see it before?”
“What are you saying, Trixie?! I didn’t do it on purpose!”
“Lies! I bet you never liked me!”
“D-Don’t say that, I like you! I really do! I’m really sorry, please, forgive me!” Rarity’s eyes became wet. She knew she would react badly, but not this badly.
“Is this why you made this ‘date’ so perfect? Did you really think that I wouldn’t get mad at you?!” Trixie stood up, grabbed her cape and hat and headed to the door, leaving a Rarity finally bursting in tears in the couch. “I can’t see you anymore. I should never have trusted you!” Trixie slammed the door when she left. The white pony was crying out loud. Her depression was so big, that even Opalescence came to comfort her.
“Trixie! Please come back! I… I need you!” but Trixie didn’t hear her. She was gone.
***
“You were right, Twilight. They are beautiful.”
“I can’t believe you never saw fireflies before, Shy.”
“Insects aren’t really my thing. I know a couple of them, not all of them. Should I have known they were so amazing, I would have caught some to see them closely before freeing them.”
“How about you catch some now, and we can study them together! What do you say? Fluttershy?” The Unicorn noticed that her marefriend was looking elsewhere. “Where are you looking at?”
“Isn’t that... Trixie?” Twilight quickly looked where Fluttershy was pointing and she saw that Trixie, indeed, was heading towards them.
“Trixie?” The magician pony pushed them away.
“Step aside, Sparkle! Trixie’s not in mood to pretend that she likes you!”
“Sparkle? Trixie, is there something wrong?”
“None of your business!” The blue Unicorn was still walking away, but Twilight wasn’t done. She teleported in front of Trixie.
“It IS of my business! You’re my friend and I care for your well being.”
“You’re not Trixie’s friend! She doesn’t need friends! Now, go away!” Trixie, once again, pushed her away and kept walking.
“Where are you going?!”
“I’m leaving Ponyville, forever!”
“Why?! What about Rarity?”
“What about her? It’s not like she ever cared for me anyway.” Twilight teleported again in front of Trixie. Fluttershy had to keep trotting to reach them.
“Talk to me. Did something happen between you two? Trixie, look at me!”
“Trixie does not has to tell you anything!” The showmare shoved Twilight away and tried to keep walking, but she was stopped by Twilight’s hoof. Trixie, knowing that she wouldn’t get away from them, stopped.
“Please, turn around and tell us what happened.” Trixie obeyed; she slowly turned but she kept her eyes on the ground.
“Rarity… she told Fluttershy something That I asked to be kept in secret…”
Fluttershy gasped. “Oh, no! If you’re like this… Rarity!” The shy Pegasus galloped to Carousel Boutique as fast as she could. Twilight saw her galloping away before turning back to Trixie.
“You didn’t take it well. But, were you actually going to leave Ponyville? That would hurt us, but, more importantly, you would leave Rarity devastated.”
“Trixie doesn’t think that. That pony played with her heart. She’s probably celebrating that Trixie’s leaving.”
“Are you sure?”
“Absolutely.”
“Do you want to see her now and check if she’s, indeed, happy?”
“There’s no need to.” The lavender Unicorn got closer to Trixie and touched her shoulder. “What are you…?!” It was too late. Twilight teleported them in front of Rarity’s boutique. “Why did you bring Trixie here, Sparkle?!”
“Look through the window and tell me what do you see.”
“Why should Tr…”
“Just, do it!” Trixie stepped back from the sudden command. She huffed and looked through the window. What she saw wasn’t what she expected. Rarity was crying… a lot. Both Fluttershy and Opalescence tried to comfort her without success.
“Is she… really sad?”
“Of course she is. She really cares about you, Trixie. Don't you see? She regrets what she did. Walking away from your problems won’t solve anything. You need to talk to her.” Trixie didn’t look away from the crying Unicorn. She now realized that Rarity really cared for her. Trixie felt awful for yelling at her like she did, but, for some reason, she didn’t want to make up with her marefriend now. She was still mad for what she did. A tear from one of Trixie’s eyes fell to the ground. The magician pony turned and began to walk. “Where are you going?”
“Back to Fluttershy’s. I… need to think…” Twilight watched her leave before turning again to the window. Seeing one of her best friends cry like that broke her heart, so, she decided to try to comfort her.
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I agree with you, hoping that they make up. Please, let them make up!
4018875 I don't know... why should I?
I don't really get why Trixie is so defensive of the fact that she has a brother. Oh well. A plot point's a plot point.
Poor girls. But I understand Trixie. With her life, trust to somepony is very hard.
4018954 The problem is that Rarity broke her promise, that's why she got mad at her, she broke her trust.
There's still the baby dragon problem.
4018903 'cause the readers need it
4019116 But why did Trixie consider it important that only Rarity knew in the first place?
4019138 I will think about it...
4019150 You would be the same if your life was like hers. It's her way to be.
4019205 I don't really understand... but I'll go along with it.
4019220 OK, trust me, she would do it.
4019240 I have trouble understanding people's intentions, desires, and the like. I'll leave it at that.
4019290 OK
4019322 Really?
First part if full of Rarity and Trixie sweetness.
)
The second part was Rarity and Trixie Drama and a breakup.
The third part is Trixie's relation and a small TwiShy sweet moment.
Sweetens and drama is what i got from this and i love'd it. Looking forward to the next one.
P.S. I'am starting to guess that "The surprise" is a new story most likely wrong tho (i like to guess
4019508 Break up?
And, you'll have to wait for that
Thanks!
Fallen in love with this story Stranger. Good job my friend, and forgive me for not reading it sooner
4019535 Is that not what Trixie did? She told Rarity that she did not want to see her anymore and then took off. And when she realized that what she did was wrong all she said was "I'll go back to flutters. In need to think" so technically she did not make it back up with Rarity. So yes they broke up. a good story needs good conflict and drama, that is what i look for in a good fic.
4019613 You had your reasons. If I remember correctly, when I first told you about this shipping before uploading it, you said that it was a horrible idea
I never forced you to read it
4019622 Hmm... I wasn't going for that but, by what you just told me, it seems like you have a point
That wasn't my intention
4019690 did say it was a horrible idea... i just said it was a wierd idea, one I honestly couldn't see working. But you, lets just say you pulled it off without a hitch... and the side of TwiShy?
I CALLED IT!!!!!!!! I knew you were gonna do that lol.
Love how your doing them as well.
4019690 I mean hell... Look at the couple I did... Sunset X Rarity. Kinda a wierd ship as well.
Did Rarity really expect Trixie not to blow a gasket just because of a perfect date? She was the one who found and took care of Trixie. She knows that Trixie had trust issues. And she knows how Trixie can overreact. She should thank Celestia that Fluttershy saw Trixie and that Twilight was able to stop Trixie from leaving right away.
Two months later? Does Spike still hate Trixie? I was hoping to see more Spike/Trixie interaction before we got to this point. I still hope to see it before this story ends.
4019702 Yours is even more weird
Of course I would do that, TwiShy is my OTP!
4019715 Exactly!
Sorry, I have something else planned for them
4019721 maybe. But mine is also just a one shot for now. I still havent decided what to do with it now...... And just so you know.... You inspired me to do it
4019947 Writing a One-Shot from a couple like that already dating? Details are needed
Really?
e'hem
*Cocks shotgun*
Nu'uh
Uh'huh
4020562 No need for violence, she's already staying!
4020766
I know...
*pats shotgun*
...just in case.
4020795 Good boy/girl
4020020 yeah ... When you talked to me About your rarity trixie story I started thinking about rarity and Started thinking about wierd couples With her and choose to look at sunset with her
4021337 Yay for me, I guess!
4040004 Oh...
Just one question. What's construe?
Horribly rushed. Months of being together, basking so deeply in each other's presence and love. Angry? Sure. Immediately regressing, believing everyone hates her and running away to exile within several minutes? Unless she's working under some SERIOUS promise-breaking trauma, we're talking like she's suffering PTSD-levels here, that makes no sense. Nope, not believable at all.
Ugh... I know Trixie is just new to all this love junk, but I think that's a little too far. What's wrong with having a brother in the first! In fact, she should be proud she had one. Why keep it a secret? Is it because her brother had a past that was dark? What? This better be explained so I could calm myself a little faster. Cuz seriously, the next thing you know, she related to Stars Swirl or something! (Thought about this theory a long time ago. You're welcome to add it to a possible sequeal)
That's right Trixie! You may be great and powerful, without people to make you feel special, you're not great or powerful. I can probably forgive in less than a week tops. Just try not to freak out next Rarity shares a not so important secret to most ponies. I mean, you have a brother. That's it! Nothing wrong with that. Unless (comment below).
I actually fell asleep reading this last night. At least I didn't sleep furiously knowing what has happened. You're really showing the plot, and plot only! Not wasting your time on a scene we think is boring and all. I am really loving it! And I guess I can officially say I am converted to this shipping. So sign me up!
4019130 I'm also concerned about that, but I just really wanna know how this will end. And hopefully read the sequel!
4019508 You might wanna put spoilers on that or something. Seeing as to there are some ppl for some reason who read in the comments 1st. I mean, why do they do it? But yeah, careful.
4019535 Break up? Whatever do you mean?! I'm worried now.
4019715 OMG, yes! I never thought of that cuz I was busy hating on Trixie, but you do have a point! A really great one! Which only makes me hate her more. Dang it Trixie! Don't you dare hurt her all the time (cuz love quarrels are often, but don't make it too often)
4019721 I actually read a good fic about Sunset x Rarity. I just forgot what's the name, but really good even if it was just one chapter. Definitely worth checking if only I remembered the story
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4021337 I ship it. (Read comment below)
5807319 It will all be explained because the plot says so... I hope.
6609641 There's more into Trixie's brother. It's a sensitive matter and it will be explained on the sequel. You won't want to miss that out
Welcome to the Rarixie herd!
5807319 This comes from Trixie being a pony who has trusted nopony and has seen everypony as a threat. She likely was raised seeing the worst case scenario whenever something went wrong.