Trixie was both surprised and confused for what she just heard. “Move out? Why? You just said that you like me back…”
“I do, Trixie, but I allowed you to stay when we weren’t friends until you recovered, then, I allowed you to stay even when you could be on your own because I considered you a friend. But, now that we have feelings for each other, it’s not right for us to live under the same roof. If we are going to date, we are going to do it right, you know what I mean?” Rarity spoke smiling, still with her hooves around Trixie’s waist.
For the first time in a while, the magician pony looked away from Rarity’s eyes and thought on what she just said. She was right, spending too much time together wouldn’t be healthy for their still not official relationship. Trixie would have to find a new place to live, but, where? She had no bits to rent a house. “Yes, I understand what you are saying. As I said before, I’m willing to do anything for you.” The showmare said, gazing to the fancy Unicorn’s blue eyes once again and smiling warmly. But her smile faded and she broke the hug, she then headed to the front door.
“Trixie, where are you going?” The white pony worriedly asked.
“I need to be alone to think on what to do.” Trixie simply said, without turning and opening the door with her magic.
“I said that you have to move out, but that doesn’t means I’m kicking you out. You can stay until you find a new home.”
“I know, and it is not that.” The magician pony said before turning to see her crush. “Don’t worry, I’ll be back. Don’t stay up for me.” She added before smiling and heading outside. But, just when she was about to close the door, Rarity spoke one more time.
“Be careful…”
Trixie stopped and turned her head again to see Rarity. “I will.” She assured her with a smile and closed the door behind her. She was walking to nowhere in particular, desperately trying to find a solution. What do I do? Where do I go? I can’t ask Rarity for bits, that wouldn’t be right. I should get a job, anything… I could work in a Flower shop or in a café. But even after getting a job, it would take months before I could afford a house… If that’s what it takes to gain Rarity’s love, then I’ll do it.
“Trixie, hey!” The magician pony stood still, she didn’t realize where she was going. She looked up and found the pony who called her. It was Twilight, and she wasn’t alone. Fluttershy was with her. Trixie somehow got to Golden Oak while she was lost in her thoughts. “What are you doing here at this hour?” The librarian said from the balcony, where the telescope was.
“I, umm… I needed to clear my mind and…”
“Wait! Come up here and tell us!” Twilight said, smiling, and opening the door to go inside her home. She was about to go downstairs.
“I don’t want to interrupt you girls on what you’re…” But Twilight got inside anyway and moments later she opened the front door.
“We don’t mind. Besides, I want to know if you are okay, since Rarity is on a date with somepony else…” The bookworm pony worriedly said, letting Trixie in.
“She’s already back home, the…”
“Already? Wait, let’s go to the balcony.” Twilight said, before closing the door and leading Trixie upstairs, Trixie saw Spike sleeping in the main room. They soon arrived their destination. “You remember Fluttershy?” The bookworm pony said as she laid on her belly next to Fluttershy and intertwined tails with her marefriend.
“Not really, I only remember seeing her before but I don’t think I have talked with her…” Trixie said, putting a hoof on her chin as she stared at the shy Pegasus. Now that she thought about it, she never heard her talk.
“Umm… hi, Trixie… How are you? If you don’t mind me asking…”
“I’m doing fine… well, not really. I kind of have a problem to solve…” Trixie sadly said, looking at the telescope.
“What is it? Maybe we can help!” The lavender Unicorn worriedly said, smiling a bit when Trixie looked at her.
“Can she be trusted, Sparkle? Can she keep a secret?” The blue Unicorn asked with seriousness.
“You can trust Fluttershy, she would never tell anything to anypony, right, Flutters?” Twilight said smiling, looking at the timid pony when she finished.
“O-Of course not!” Fluttershy said, nervous for Trixie’s presence. She was also upset because she wanted to be alone with Twilight. Trixie looked between Twilight and Fluttershy and then sighed.
“Okay, but it’s important you don’t tell anypony.” Both Twilight and Fluttershy nodded. “I need a new place to stay…”
Twilight gasped. “Why? What’s wrong with Rarity’s boutique?”
“To make the long story short, we confessed our feelings but she wants me to move out before something happens. She doesn’t think a couple should live together so soon and I agreed with her, but I have nowhere to go.” Trixie finished, looking down. Twilight and Fluttershy looked at each other. The Pegasus was confused; she didn’t know that Rarity was in love with Trixie, why wouldn’t she tell her something this important? Didn’t she trust her?
“I see…” The bookworm pony spoke after several moments of silence. “I’m really happy that you two like each other, but Rarity’s right, you shouldn’t live together so soon.” Twilight put a hoof on her chin as she thought of a solution. “I know! You could live with one of us!" She finally said after a while. “Let’s see, Pinkie Pie… no, she doesn’t have a spare room, Rainbow Dash… she lives on the clouds, Applejack… I don’t think she has space either, and I don’t have room either…” The lavender Unicorn then looked at her marefriend, who was already looking at her with a concerned look, moments later, Fluttershy understood.
“With me? Twilight, I don’t know…”
“Shy, this isn’t only for Trixie, I don’t like the fact that you're living near the Everfree Forest with nopony else.”
“But I’m good by myself, my critter friends makes me company…”
“Fluttershy, please… this may be good for both of you.” Twilight said as she stood up and got closer to the shy Pegasus was and whispered into her ear. “I want you to look after her and tell me how she is doing, I want to make sure that she has changed…” Fluttershy stared at Trixie for a few moments; the magician pony was looking again at the telescope. She didn’t seem to be bad, her expression was of sadness. Fluttershy didn’t see the Trixie she didn’t like, she saw a different Unicorn, one who could have a heart.
The Pegasus, then, looked back at Twilight and nodded. “Okay, she can come to my cottage…”
Twilight quickly hugged her. Fluttershy smiled while she returned the hug. “Thank you, thank you!”
“Girls, I’m going to leave now, I don’t want to interrupt your date any longer, so…” Trixie spoke after watching the scene.
Twilight stopped hugging Fluttershy and turned to see Trixie. “Wait!” She said before Trixie opened the door, leaving Fluttershy upset again. “Before you go, we have good news. From now on, you will be living with Fluttershy. Go tomorrow morning to her cottage, it’s right next the Everfree Forest, just follow the path at the exit of Ponyville.”
“She doesn’t mind?” Trixie asked, looking at the Pegasus. Fluttershy opened her mouth to answer but Twilight spoke before she could.
“Of course not! She’s pleased for having a guest!” The lavender Unicorn said, smiling. The timid pony looked at her, annoyed for not letting her speak, but she repressed her feelings.
The showmare smiled at both of them. “Thank you for your kindness. Now I will take my leave, I don’t want to keep interrupting you. I’ll see you tomorrow!” She said before leaving, careful to not wake Spike up.
“Isn’t it beautiful Flutters? The egocentric and unbearable Trixie fell in love and is willing to change for Rarity!” The bookworm pony commented, staring at the closed door.
“Mmm, yeah…” Fluttershy vaguely said, staring at the floor.
Twilight turned to see her marefriend. “Something's wrong, Shy?” Twilight worriedly asked. The shy Pegasus slowly raised her head to meet the lavender eyes she liked so much, she wanted to tell her that the way she acted bothered her; that she seemed more worried about Trixie than her own marefriend. But she couldn’t do it, she couldn’t make the pony she cared the most sad, even if it meant her own discomfort.
“No, nothing… could I look through the telescope again please? I liked it…”
“Oh, sure! Go ahead.” Twilight said with a smile in her face. Fluttershy walked to the telescope and used it to see the stars and the moon. The librarian slowly moved closer to the timid pony and rested her head on her wither, releasing a sigh of joy. Fluttershy’s heart began to race as she blushed and smiled, her annoyance gone.
***
Trixie walked the way back to Carousel Boutique; she took her time so she could make sure that Rarity was fully asleep when she arrived. She got to the boutique half an hour after she left the library. She slowly opened the door, not making any noise, and quietly stepped inside. She looked around and only saw the doors and windows closed, and her hat and cape still on their place. She then headed to the couch where she would spend her last night and laid on it, falling asleep almost immediately. Minutes later, her snores became a bit louder. Rarity walked from the kitchen and got closer to the sleeping Trixie. The fashionista used magic to levitate Trixie’s cape towards her and covered the sleeping Unicorn with it.
“I know you told me not to wait for you, but I wanted to make sure that you came back safe… Good night, Trixie…” Rarity whispered before heading to her bedroom, yawning.
This makes me wonder if Twilight is unknowingly harboring feelings for Trixie, which will serve to hurt her love life with Fluttershy
3838528 Not exactly...
I sense trouble on the way.
3838580 Why is that?
3838587 It looks like Fluttershy was more or less pressured into housing Trixie. It also looks like Fluttershy is withholding her feelings on the matter. Plus, Fluttershy feels kinda hurt that she found out from Trixie about their budding relationship rather then from Rarity. If stuff like this keeps up, Flutters is going to blow and a lot of hurt feelings will occur as the aftermath.
3838587 other ponies will notice, and most likely there will still be a few with bad feelings towards her. It's inevitable that ponies will find out, so the only thing to do is wait
3838605 Remember that Rarity found out about her feelings towards Trixie that very same night so, she didn't have time to tell anypony
She's more annoyed towards Twilight than anypony else
Not only do i get an adorable Twishy moment but i get an adorable moment with Rarixie at the end there.
Relay looking forward to what comes next, also looking forward to see future interaction between Trixie and Fluttershy, that will be interesting indeed.
3838999 I think that you will love the next chapter
3839007 We will see my friend. We will see.
Turning out nicely. There are two things I need to point out regarding your writing style, though.
First off, you're suffering from what in fanfiction circles is known as "Lavender Unicorn Syndrome": replacing names and pronouns with descriptors to an excessive degree. People often do this in an attempt to sound less repetitive, but too much of it makes it distracting - each time it happens, the reader has to stop and recall who's who. No one will fault you for using their names and pronouns. (It's related to "said-isms", where the writer replaces "said" with more interesting pronouns, which is even more frowned upon - though you're in the clear there.)
Second... "dark baby blue unicorn"? You're really fond of that description, but baby blue is a pale shade, so you're basically calling her "dark light blue". Also, it brings my mind to babies. If I recall correctly, Trixie's particular color is "azure", which I think is a beautiful word.
Hope this helps, and keep up the good work!
3839163 I have already told that and I reduced the times I use those descriptions. I will not stoping using them. And, I don't know how else to call Trixie, her color is kind of difficult to describe
Huh, no cliffhanger. Nice. But I can´t stop laughing, because of the name Rarixie. It just sounds so... I don´t know. But great chapter.
Alternative me: Yaaaaaaaay, you made my Friday even better! Thank you!
Other alternative me: Nice one.
LG
Egonuss
3839396 What a "rare" name
Thank you!
3839401Oh no! Flat jokes! But this one is good.
I look away for a little while and I find out that I missed six chapters being released.
But, now that I'm caught up, again , I have to wait for the next chapter, again , to come out so that I can continue to read about an odd pairing.
But, the only thing I have to complain about is a personal one that probably only effects me: Every time you refer to Rarity as the Marshmallow coated pony, these images are what come to mind.
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3847148 You perfectly know it is because the color of her body
It was worse when I just used "Marshmallow Pony"
Thank you for catching up!
3848156 I personally prefer 'alabaster', but that could be my own thought patters tend to jump to things like the Stay Puft Marshmallow Rarity.
But once again, personal issue. Should probably start taking those meds again. *Goes off to find happy pills*
3853409 Enjoy those happy pills
Nice chapters! Im looking forward for more Rarixie stories!
Also,what I noticed and I needed to point that out is:
Going through chapters,the same thing is happening and that is that Trixie doesnt trust them after all they passed through.
And by that I meant when Trixie has some secret and she tells Twilight not to tell anyone,it kinda keeps repeating.
If you know what I meant.
Anyways,the story has so many deatails and Im glad that you were working on everything you wrote in previous chapters,like writing past in the present.I simply love that and that's one of the reason I liked it. +1
And of course
I sort of wished Trixie stayed with Twilight. They could learn new things. Staying with FlutterShy, not a bad choice as well except for the critters who might get disturbed or something.
After the last chapter, my 'daww' meter is rising. I hope it continues cuz I really like those books that do those.
Ohh, almost forgot. It's like in the MLP movies; you meet a problem, solved in less than minutes or something! xD
3838528 Had exact thoughts. May I remind you though, you are reading a Rarixie fic. If itwas a Twixie (which I also wouldn't mind), it would break a lot of hearts. Not just for the 2 ponies, but other fans whi want the Rarixue ship.
3847148 WTF?! Hahahahaha!!! Like what the actual crap! Internet just ruins your childhood sometimes... Make that more than a few times.
6606116 Trust me, I had good reasons to make Trixie live with Fluttershy
Also, I won't repeat the reason stuff gets solved quickly
6606287 It's fine. If you really think that making something that is long and boring, then you can just use that excuse to solve it. Don't want to get your fans bored do you now?
Hmm this will be interesting
8865631 Indeed
it's weird for me see Trixie move in with Fluttershy, since the first fic I've read of this genre was about them
11389944 It's weird, yeah, but I felt like it was the smart choice