This Like all your of fics are good to read looking forward to more.

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Well Applebloom is screwed. Pun intend? Maybe.

Wow, awkward
I can't wait to see how this goes

It really bugs me that you keep misspelling "minutes".

ha ha ha ha ha oh you!

Scootaloo likes Babs threesome swag

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Will correct that!

OMG this is hilarious! I'm curious to see what happens next!

One thing though. If Babs calls AJ "Aunt Applejack," that means that AJ is Apple Bloom's mother...

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Lol technicalities i swear.

Since the apple family is so large, i figured since babs was closer with Applebloom's family than the others she would use a more enduring term for Applejack than just "cousin"

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Ahhh, alright. That makes sense.

Looks like Applebloom's gonna have to take one for the other team. Gigiddy.

i LOVE scootaloo's feelings towards this whole thing, but I am disappointed in bloom, would it of killed her to give scoots a picture, and would it kill her to atleast try and make out with babs? hehe tho ya know maybe if she hooks her up with scoots then bloom can get off scott free while scoots and babs get each other off ^^

and AJ thinking bloom is hiding a dildo lol that is so hilarious, if she only knew then she'd REALLY not want to know hehe

how is AJ bab's auntie if applebloom is her cousin... are you throwin in that headcanon that AJ had kid named applebloom?

Plus this fic just reminds me so much that I swear they intended babs to be a boy.

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as for you mister.

this is a cousin we're talkin here and the style of the fic isn't to blatantly make the ship obvious. Now shut up and make out with your mom or something.

Well,good to see Babs isn't a rapist. And if this somehow turns into a threesome with Scootaloo, I will not be disappointed.

“Uh, sure! That sounds like a good plan!” Applebloom replied once again feeling relief washin over her as she followed her big sister inside.

Washin

You forgot a "G" there, chucklehead.

Applejack:

Hope you're starvin

Well, fuck you too, then!

Scoots is just to much in this chapter.

I need to shot my gun now before shit goes down

Not to be that guy, but Applejack wouldn't Babs' aunt, she'd be her cousin

2434809 Read the last part of the first chapter. It's explained.

Author's Note:
Okay something to cover since EVERYONE seems to think this: Babs refers to Applejack as "Aunt" since she is closer to Applebloom's family than the rest of the apple family since it's so large. I figured this would have been obvious at first but I once again assume too much of my readers. So my bad on that one. ^^;

ok... first off, where in the hell are y'all from? No self respectin' southerner talks like you portray the apples. we say a lot of Mah's and Ain'ts. a fer Shewee's and quite a few Y'alls, but i aint never heard anypony but a damn yankee say Meh for Me.

Other than your clear misuse of Local Color, its all good. will continue to read this.

well looks like you're screwed Applebloom.

in more ways than one.

This chapter 2 nearly made me punch my laptop screen. I HATE it when cartoons, movies, games, or fics have dialog where one character A is trying to say something important to character B but B won't shut up and let A actually speak. I understand that it is all part of the script but it still pisses me the heck off.

I don't know who to feel sorry for Applebloom or Babs...
Fluttershy mind taking this?
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thank you dear

2631676 it does appear as though the fecal matter will hit the oscillating coolant device

begin to sweat bullets.

This probably wasn't a reference, but you got Sweating Bullets stuck in my head XD

I like this Scootaloo she's funny. I also like the small running on joke with the cursing.

When it said Sweetie Bell's voice hits the lowest pitch, I read her line in Flutterguy's voice.

The two fillies continued to walk for some time until both of them saw a purple tail sticking out from behind a bush.

What purple tail? Both Applebloom and Babs have two shades of red mane and tail.

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I agree, in fact, it reminds me of a certain animator's take on Scoot's character that I watch a little while back (Can't remember the guy's name, but I know that his version of Scootaloo was basically the same but with more innuendo and a little less shame.)

Well now, 80 skiping power.
Fun times ahead.

4002500 Mas and Rainbow Dash Presents

I just realized, that last chapter. Babs wrote the letter like the way she talks...
Wouldn't she write it like a normal letter? :raibowlaugh:

Anyway, nice one!
AND LOLZ

My reaction to this story already:
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