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Y'know, I agree with Princess Luna... Princess Celestia needs to be knocked down a peg or six, and a nice reminder to her subjects that she is, under the regal facade, just a pony is a good thing every once and a while.
As to the prank war:
"The board is set, the pieces are moving."
May the maker help Equestria.
Prank war.
Prank war never changes.
I like it!
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Thanks guys
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BWAHAHAHA!
Headcanon'd!
I like the characterization of Luna and Celestia, it makes seem more like sisters. Keep up the great work.
Hmm...reminded me of this fic, though obviously not exactly...
Nice chapter dood!
two of the b4st pranks ever. have i mentioned im a rabid fan of this fic.
keep up the amazing work dear author. and for the love of fuck NEVER dispell little twi. i.... i would cry for weeks.
the day is made, new chapter
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Thanks guys, I appreciate the feedback as always :-)
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That's a good fic, thanks for linking it. I'm trying to paint Luna and Celestia's relationship as being more positive and friendly / sisterly than that one, but I can see similarities.
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Thanks
As for Li'l Twi, my lips are sealed
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Now lets double the fun and u write another chapter
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Some people are never happy
Next chapter: written, proofed, getting last feedback from Knight of Cerebus
Chapter after that: well, I've got the setup written and a fair idea where I want it to go
Chapter after that: written, not yet looked at by Knight of Cerebus
Chapter after that: well, I've gotten a couple of paragraphs down anyway.
See? Lots of fun
Haha I enjoyed this chapter greatly. Yaay simple laughs. "Princess..did you just..pass gas?.." Lol YES.
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im happy, its just that its sooo coooooollll.... plus its entertaining...
so... write more
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Thanks for the comment. I certainly understand your concerns about the Mary-Sue, and it is very difficult to for myself as the author to self-judge in that respect, but I don't think this Twilight is a Mary-Sue.
The story was originally intended to be a one chapter clop story, based on Eakin's 'Hard Reset'. I had a whole idea for the weathervane action and I liked the idea of trying to recreate Twilight's night with Luna to satisfy the events as described through the after-effects by Eakin. One thing that amused me was that in that story, Twilight seduces Luna at the first attempt. I a joke about it. When I came to my senses and realised that stealing Eakin's setting wasn't very polite, I kept a lot of the content and needed the spell to ensure that the joke made sense.
This isn't an action-adventure story and Twilight has so far only used the spell twice - once to remove an inconsequential bruise and once to have a do-over on a very bad day. She could have continued after the bad day, it would have just been post-'Lesson Zero' levels of embarrassment if she had.
I'd be interested to know what people think about that. Is this Twilight a Mary-Sue?
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Thanks RaminNinja101 - glad you like it
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Thanks
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I can totally see it now. Pinkie and Dash join the prank war on opposite sides, one supporting Luna, the other, Celestia. Twilight is a third party accessory to both princesses, an equalizer, if you will. She doesn't take direct action against either outright, but much like this chapter, is more than happy to be bribed temporarily into revenge for the just-pranked princess in question.
Either that, or Pinkie pranks the Fallout: Equestria version of the Mojave from Fallout: New Vegas.
So much HAPPYNESS I love reading happyness
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She is not. She had power that could make her one if she make full use of them, but being a Mary Sue is about more that what you can do. It's about never meeting any challenge and having everything in the story fold itself to your way, whether it makes sense or not. This Twilight definately doen't fall under that. The type of story also helps - if it had been an adventure story with a big consipracy that Twi could just go back and undo, then we would have a problem. But as it is, it's fine.
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Thanks Grollo - that's a really useful way of viewing it for me.
i can only think of one thing. Celestia's cake was a lie
one to many nothing's
replace with "It sounds like it."
oh lovely twilight is not there to keep the peace she has to make it (thats the difference between peacekeeper [keeps the peace. cannot attack without direct permission] and peace maker [can attack to defend and to force/make peace])
Seriously Luna?
eitherI... I may or just I may