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The Invasion

Queen Chrysalis Has come back for her revenge, with more than just her Hive...

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ShadowblazeCR

ShadowblazeCR #1 · Sep 12th, 2014 · · · Research and Delevopment ·

How did this even pass moderation?

Storm_Flicker

Storm_Flicker #2 · Sep 12th, 2014 · · · Research and Delevopment ·

its incomplete...

DerpyNate

DerpyNate #3 · Sep 12th, 2014 · · · Prologue ·

Uhg! Proofread your stuff before you put it out for everyone to see. You have made dozens of mistakes that you could have easily fixed if you would have just read through it once.

Besides that, the content isn't horrible. Pretty average stuff, but stomachable.

Keep writing.