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bobdat


British editor who occasionally writes pony fics.

Comments ( 2 )

4.5/5 I really liked this a lot but my only issue with this fic was how out of character Scootaloo was during this story. I had an idea similar to this, it's ashamed you beat me to the punch. My version was gonna be called Snip's Day Off and it was gonna have both Snails and Spike act as Cameron, Sloane was to be played by Applebloom and the CMC's. I was gonna double the character list of the movie. Again I raise my white flag in defeat to you. If I go through with this I'll wait two weeks out of common courtesy to your fic.

Peace Out.

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I must admit, I was not satisfied with the way Scootaloo played out. The only problem was, Scootaloo has no family, yet suited the role of Ferris best. I eventually went for Apple Bloom over Scootaloo because I'm awful at writing OC stuff.
If you can do it better, go ahead. I actually wrote this in one evening to pass the time, so if you'd like to have a better crack at it, just make sure you send me the link. It'd be awesome to read.

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