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Dead Space : The White Marker

Taylor Harding is put on a whirlwind of an adventure. Isaac Clarke and this man find themselves on a strange planet where necromorphs followed them. It's up to them to find the new source of infection and end it. An unlikely duo of an engineer and a communications worker will put out their life and limbs to end the current infection plaguing the community that they happen to find.

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EpicSurvivor #1 · Mar 9th, 2013 · 3 · ·

I'll keep a watch on this story for sure, but there are a few problems. THE WHOLE STORY GOES BY WAAAAYYYY TOO FAST! Seriously, the story goes by so fast it's unbelievable! I'm sorry, but it's hard to read a story when you feel like it's being rushed. (I'm a fast reader, over 300 or so words a minute, at least.) Plus, you revealed Taylor's back story a wee bit early. maybe you could have revealed it in the 3rd chapter? Also, the beginning (when Isaac and Tyler first start fighting necros) was more than a bit confusing. (I understand Taylor is on a ship, but explainations would be the dandiest thing.) In addition, Isaac kinda flips out early in the story, which really isn't his character. (I played all 3 games, I know how he acts.) Anyways, I really think this could turn out well if you just focus on it, and maybe give off more explanations. Wish you the best of luck! Cheers!