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She's definitely going to be having words with someone when she gets back to base...
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This is probably because this chapter underwent multiple rewrites before release. I will see about making more comprehensive passes in post.
Thanks for the positive words!
An Aliens reference last chapter, and now a Predator reference here? Two of my favorite movies!
Might be reaching here, but is that another Aliens reference?
Also, should probably talk about the actual story than just pointing out nods to other works...
First off, your writing is exceptional. I rarely ever see any typos or grammer mistakes while reading through. The story progresses at a steady pace, leaving nothing forced or out of place. The storyline is simply awesome, giving the feel of reliving a real Ace Combat game. The character development feels real and meaningful. The fight scenes are so exciting to read and so detailed that you can practically envision yourself in the same situation.
But yeah, awesome story and I can't wait for more!
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What can I say, I love 80s action films :P
Aaaaaaaaaaaaah! There's no more. I'm engrossed, man. I need to find out what happens next.
Can' wait for the next chapters, as I'm sure they will be equally as amazing, tragic, thoughtful and ominous. Keep up the great work.
Well that was a doozy.