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One small mistake I noticed: Zaan and Grana were both called Typhon Four when they were 'killed'. Great chapter, anyway. I particularly liked the training sequence.
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Oops! Fixed! Thanks for the positive feedback!
Digging the music.
That paragraph repeats in chapter 5.
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I'm apparently butterhooves with the copy/pasting. Fixed now.