Twilight Sparkle sighed as she heard the knock on her door. She had seen the chariot arriving and had started her way downstairs. “Come in, Princess.”
“Thank you, Twilight,” Cadence said brightly. “Luna is with me. May she enter as well?”
While startled, Twilight was still a gracious host. “By all means. Enter, both of you.” She looked out the door toward the chariot. “Where’s Princess Celestia?”
“We felt it was best if we talked to you first,” Cadence said. “If you return to Canterlot, she will want to speak to you, after a very large apology.”
“Apology? For what? I’m the one at fault!” Twilight exclaimed.
“How do you come to that conclusion?” Luna asked her. She stepped forward.
“Dad always said to ignore anyone who called you a foal, because they were usually jealous. But if everyone is calling you foalish, you might want to take a good look at yourself. The eight closest to me all considered me a silly little thing for what happened. It hurts that no one apologized, but they don’t need to, because I was clearly in the wrong on how I handled it.” She sighed. “That reminds me. When you return to Canterlot, could you take this letter to Princess Celestia? She’ll need to see it before she decides to apologize to me.”
“I hope you didn’t say anything you can’t take back,” Cadence said.
“Might we be permitted to read it?” Luna asked softly. “No offense will be taken if you say no.”
“You probably should read it, if only to make sure that I wrote it properly - that I don’t say something that offends when I never intended to.”
Dear Princess Celestia,
This is probably the hardest letter I have ever written to you, and I will explain why shortly.
I’ve been doing some soul searching, Princess, and I do not like what I have found. I am on the cusp of adulthood, but am clearly still a silly little foal in the eyes of everyone who matters to me. If not, I would not have gotten the reaction from everyone that I got.
You told me that I had much to think about when you left the rehearsal with everypony else. The only other pony to say anything to me was my brother, who ‘fired’ me as his Best Mare, and even told me not to come to the wedding, albeit it with a somewhat more polite phrasing. I still consider him to be my Big Brother, Best Friend, Forever, even though his words hurt. They needed to, though, because someone does not grow if they never feel pain. It hurt greatly, but my crime was great.
It is also why I left Canterlot. When I left, the repairs to the city were nearly done, and the preparations for the new wedding were about to start. I would so love to be there to give my obsessive list-making talents a work-out; to make sure that my brother and my foal-sitter get the absolutely amazing wedding that they truly deserve. But I can’t face it, Princess. If I weren’t such a silly foal, I’d be able to be there beside my brother when he marries the most amazing pony it has ever been my pleasure to know who isn’t you. If I’d been wrong, I would have hurt them both beyond measure, and that is an unforgivable crime to me. So, being a silly filly, I decided to run away, only this time I ran away to my new home.
That brings me to the difficult part of this letter. I did as you said, and gave my actions much thought. A decision will need to be made, since you sent me here, and it was implied that my position here in the Ponyville library is due to being your student.
As I have said, I am a foal - everypony’s actions toward me show that, and I would be even more of one were I to ignore what so many have told me by their actions. I DO NOT BLAME ANY OF YOU. In fact, if any feel that they need it, I forgive them all, even though they don’t need forgiveness. I needed to know this about myself. But part of the problem with learning to grow is that it is difficult to change if an effort isn’t made toward it. Staying in a familiar routine makes it all too easy to fall back into the foalish attitudes that plague me now.
Our relationship is a friendly one, and I pray that it will always be so, but it is still much like that of master to apprentice. I had thought that I had perhaps graduated from apprentice to journeypony, but I see now that I have not. But the lack of trust you showed in my actions shows that there is a flaw in our relationship, one that I MUST find and repair within myself before I can hope to properly apprentice with someone. In that vein, I must regretfully sunder our relationship of teacher and student, My Princess.
Do not think that I do this in anger or foalishness, My Princess. Know that I do this because I need to learn to become somepony that you can be proud to teach. Somepony that you can be proud to admit to knowing. I do this because I know now that I still have so very much to learn, and that if things stay as they currently are, I will fall back into the patterns that allowed everypony to think the worst of me.
Everypony thought the worst of me for a reason, Princess, so I need to find that reason and deal with it. I cannot in good conscience remain your student while so great a flaw resides within me.
Please think fondly of me in the future, my good and gracious teacher. Perhaps someday I shall be worthy of being your student once again.
Your ALWAYS faithful ex-student,
Twilight Sparkle
Luna sat heavily on the floor, as if someone had kicked her back legs out from beneath her, while the noise Cadence made sounded as an Ursa Major had just attempted the Haymlich Maneuver on her. “I think Aunt Celestia needs to see this right now, Luna.”
“I agree,” she said. “Perhaps she will see how badly she failed.” There was a flare and the scroll was gone.
“What are you talking about?” Twilight asked with some anger. “How did she fail?”
Luna managed to speak first. “Of all involved, only one pony does not need to give you an apology, and that is Cadence. All others, including myself, owe you a debt of gratitude and thanks, and we have repaid it by ignoring the fact that you were correct.”
“You weren’t even around for the problem, Princess!” Twilight said. “You had other duties! Why would you need to apologize?”
“Because I was there afterward, and didst see -” She stopped and sighed before looking skyward. “I will learn to speak as a normal pony,” she murmured.
“It is normal, Your Highness. It’s just not modern. And you don’t need to apologize to me for something you had no idea about.”
“But I did,” she said slowly. “When the situation was explained to me, I noted the reactions of those around you, and began to suspect. I said nothing until your letter of today.”
“I Pinkie Pie Promised twice in one paragraph, right?” Twilight asked. When she received an answering nod, she said, “I’m kinda glad that was the one that got read. There was an enchantment on it to display an entirely different letter if the sun managed to go down before the letter was opened. More precisely, the other letter would have been displayed after eight hours of being ignored by Princess Celestia. Suffice it to say that I would have known by the end of the day tomorrow whether or not she had read the letter, and if the other letter had come up, I would not have been here by the time that the Princess arrived in Ponyville.” She blushed. “And trust me, she would have, if only to either give me a very public spanking or perhaps a very public hanging. It was a dark and bitter thing.” She drooped. “No, I would have been here. I wasn’t lying in my signature. Even if she had ignored my original letter, I’d remain faithful to her.”
“Even with your anger, you still allowed for a positive outcome,” Luna allowed.
“I had to. The Princess has never been mean that I know of. But if she had been in the presence of the letter and never bothered to open it, then it would have shown that what she truly thought of me after the rehearsal - that I was not worthy of her time at all. That would have damaged the relationship past the breaking point, and that other letter would pretty much have ensured that it stayed broken. While I wasn’t abusive, I was angry, and let it pour onto the parchment.” She shook her head. “But that’s not important. What is important is that I can’t stay her student. My actions were foalish in the extreme, and even the youngest among us thought that - Spike. I haven’t received apologies because everypony was right about me. I was being petulant and acting like someone still in magical kindergarten, so they treated me that way.”
“No, they were all in shock,” Cadence said. “Shining Armor nearly skidded into Celestia’s chambers in a panic when he realized that you were gone.” She nuzzled the lavender pony. “He loves you deeply, and knows that what he said was wrong. He said so to me.”
“It is true, Twilight Sparkle,” Luna said. “It was said before the three princesses.” She paused. “That sounds as if it should be a musical group of some sort. Perhaps with Twilight Sparkle as our … what do they call it? A ‘front pony’? ‘Twilight Sparkle and the Three Princesses’. We could tour Equestria."
Twilight blinked for a moment, and then giggled softly, looking down as she did, so she missed the significant look that Luna gave Cadence, and the answering nod. “I think you three have other duties. Besides, my singing tends toward more spontaneity.” She sighed. “But I can’t see why anypony should need to apologize. I have a problem that I need to deal with.” She began to walk back and forth somewhat nervously. “Apologize for what? Being right? I went about it all wrong. If I hadn’t been a foalish little filly, perhaps they could have trusted me.” Her next laugh, devoid of any humor, was more of a bark than her usual whinny. “And then, after Cadence was freed, I was given an important task and ran away from it rather than complete it, because I wanted to feel sorry for myself, thereby proving once again that I can’t be trusted when it comes to something important.”
“I see it differently,” Luna replied. “I see a pony who was faced with the daunting task of fixing something that never should have needed fixing, had ponies been willing to listen to one who knew. I see a pony in such pain whilst everypony else tries to ignore that their actions nearly destroyed Canterlot and Equestria and that those actions could have been avoided had they but listened to one pony’s voice. I see a pony berating herself because none who should be apologizing to her will apologize, lest they acknowledge how badly they have hurt her.” She walked closer and lifted Twilight’s head so that she could look in her eyes. “I see a pony whom I know that I can trust with my very soul, for I met her when she saved mine,” she finished softly. “I apologize to you for not saying anything, for I might have been able to be a voice of reason and helped prevent the pain you now feel.”
“I won’t apologize,” Cadence said. “I was rather indisposed at the time,” she said, her eyes sparkling slightly.
Twilight blinked at her, and then nickered slightly before falling fully into giggles. The giggles turn into full laughter, which turned hysterical. Without a thought, both princesses stepped forward and enfolded Twilight with their wings just as the laughter turned to sobs. They held the grieving unicorn pony close and let her cry herself out.
I'm LOVING this.
so her laughter at the end turned into tears? im a little confused at the wording
great story though
Wow, that was heartbreaking, do more!!!
"Twilight Sparkle and the Three Princesses," eh? I'd give 'em a listen. So, would that be Celestia on guitar, Cadence in drums and Luna on bass, with Twilight as the lead singer?
That's how I imagine the band, anyways.
Good chapter, 'twas a nice read.
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Hmmm... It's pretty nice and I like it. However, Twilight has a point (as a per always) the outcome of the events didn't matter in the case of how she took action. She could have done it a bit more rationally or with more grace, it would have made ponies more likely to listen as well. That does not excuse the others about not apologizing properly though. To be honest, both parties don't need to be that sorry or berating of themselves or the others, a situation like this (that occurred) is one in which there are truly no right answers only questions and hopes that things work out in the end from the actions taken. The reason they feel the need to be so harsh on themselves is because of the care they feel for the other(s). Twilight about everypony and everypony about Twilight. All in all both parties have some learning to do, perhaps some more than others but ultimately they need to learn.
(Note: All viewpoints are subjective take them with a pinch of salt or the entire shaker, depending on your preference)
Love it!
Ok, last chapter I said this was merely 'average' and that you would need to do something spectacular and different to make it stand out.
I am extremely happy to say that you delivered. You did something that no other fic I've seen has done with this subject. Usually, they make Twilight just wave it off or be really angry in response. You went for a new response from Twilight, one that I think is more in keeping with the character than any of the others.
You made her blame herself.
When I saw this, saw her reasoning (despite it being completely wrong), read her letter, there was no response I could give other than 'Brilliant'.
I simply hope that you don't resolve this anytime soon. I want a 20+ chapter epic of reconciliation and soul searching. Or, you know, at least a couple more chapters
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Great... I just realised I have to wait for the next chapter now that I've blown through this one
This is amazing, keep it up!
I am sooooo glad you didn't make Twilight whine about how she was wronged.
Her recognizing those faults is a sign of maturity.
Though Celestia does NEED to talk to her.... and apologize.... STAT!
Just read both chapters and I have to say... I almost feel like crying.
I like how you make it be a week between the end of the invasion and the second wedding ceremony, rather than in the same day like in Darth Link 22's Post Nuptials story (assuming it doesn't get pushed back, with the events within), as that's really the only thing that bugs me about that story. And how Twilight seems to blame herself for thinking that her friends all think of her as nothing but a filly based upon some of her past actions (as have to assume so at the moment, until more is possibly explained) and especially the wedding events, since THEY didn't apologize for THEIR treatment toward HER in that episode. I swear, if this wasn't a fanfic and the show wasn't more lighthearted, I would think of this as canon leading up for Season 3!
Moving onto the actual story, at least you have everypony so far realizing their errors, rather than going on with them acting like not knowing of what they did in defender2222's Faith and Doubt story (though I kinda loved that one, even if things went a bit fast with Twilight forgiving everypony after they attempted to apologize the FIRST time). It's kinda sad that Twilight would want to not be Celestia's student anymore, even if again, she believes her actions (not just at the wedding) would make her an unfit student for the ruler of all ponykind. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png I feel this is going to get even MORE heartbreaking, as it progresses toward the end (with the second wedding, I imagine). I'm curious to see how she acknowledges what she did and what her friends will say they did, if Luna's words at the end are referencing that (when she burst in near the end of Part 1 and said that Shining Armor was in real trouble, before she got interrupted with the stuff about the bridesmaids dresses) and how they'll apologize and such. Tracked now!
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Somehow, when I saw the short description for this story, I KNEW you would likely comment/rant about it. Assuming found it at some point as don't know your 'process' for finding new stories. And as said to you on a different story, I believe, likely with the runtime, didn't have time to do that, but I imagine they did... at some off-screen point. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png But of course, things like this are brought up by the fandom/fanfiction, in obviously different ways (defender's and Darth Link's stories/series when compared with this one), since the show wouldn't; more likely to focus on the more overall plot that happened, pre-Season 3 finale. Just in my opinion.
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Possibly not aware of all stories like this on this site, but from the sounds of it, one of the two I mentioned? Wanna say defender2222's story series, but could just as well maybe mean Darth's story series.
well that's one relationship down the drain. whelp onto the next one
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Unfortunately, it is not a 20+ chapter story...sorry about that...*laugh*
It may be wrapped up too fast for some bronies, but part of the idea was to have it sort of fit within the episode itself. (Clearly the Luna bit, asking if she missed anything can't follow from this fic. *laugh*) It wraps up fast because she does have a tendency to forgive, and her friends are not insincere when they offer an apology.
Funny thing is about Twilight's reaction in this fic? It was the only way that made sense, canonically, once I decided to have her actually have an issue with what happened, rather than what happened in the episode.
Wait... is she still right or is she wrong now?
I'm confused.
Lots of times people try to hide their sadness with laughter, only for it to backfire and devolve into tears. I hope to see another chapter from you soon!
It's really in-character for Twilight Sparkle to blame herself for other's wounded egos and desperate attempts to shore up their self-images. It's probably good that Luna and Cadence got there when they did because there's no knowing how far away a mare as powerful and resourceful as Twilight might have gotten with an eight-hour lead time.
Now, I suspect that Celestia will come charging over to stop Twilight from running away. I also suspect that she will be in floods of penitent tears, angry at Twilight for blaming herself and angry at herself for failing so badly.
BTW - Am I the only one who thinks that Luna was the previous bearer of the Element of Laugher? Either way, Pinkie is right - a laugh can heal many a wound to the soul.
I like how Luna made her laugh, only for Twilight tranform those laughs with sobs...
I'll probably get flame for this, but Twilight acts like an absolute tard.
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96 weeks later:
It was proven in canon that Luna was Laughter, Loyalty, and Honesty. While Tia was Magic, Kindness, and Generosity.
Luna is best pony for Twilight
she made twilight happy
5655025 The ship will sail at nine o'clock in the tomorrow morn!
5435873 It was a sign.
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She is.
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And this is actually a recorded thing In psychology. And this isn't even one of the worst reactions that could had happen.
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Please tell me, HOW is she at fault?
Wow, twilight is WAY more mature than I am.