Dun Dun Dun!

Well, this is an interesting, back-of-the-head, "Oh, God, he's not going to...?" chapter.

I enjoy the bit about Bon-Bon and her hilarious fantasy. The bit about the hope being dashed when she tasted Lyra's cooking was excellent. Maybe it's because it harkens to some of my favourite interpretations of the two, I don't know.

Yay for Scientist Lyra. She reminds me of Lola from Machine Man, also a prosthetic limb specialist. I enjoy how you took engineer-Lyra from the more creative, insane, and hilarious versions of the two and gave her this excellent job, a real service to humanity. That feels really weird, here on FimFiction, for some reason.

Once again: Oh, God. I got confused with who was talking about the plans for the weekend, but now that I know what they were I'm... shocked, and inexplicably drawn and interested. Big Steel, indeed. Also, the "Stable" joke was hilarious.

So, I... kinda skipped on the lesbian make-out scene. Like I said, I skip out on those things. Thanks for the saliva though; it's a really big thing for me.

And... should I really be surprised that Bon-Bon finds herself drawn in? Not really, I guess.

Well folks...

Really now?

You make it sound like the horse is intelligent. ...Sure it is.

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B. Bs. L

B=bonbon
Bs = big steel
L= lyra

2156109 Or it has done this enough times to know where this is going.

Me reading this chapter: ...No, she didn't...oh god, she really did?...how far is this gonna go...oh god, oh god...

And if you were standing right beside me, all you would see is me with a big, dumb smile on my face, occassionally giggling like a schoolgirl. I'm loving this clopfic.

Even limp, it swung a good distance below his knees, his bulbous head almost dragging on the ground and threatening to pick up errant strands of hay as he walked through them.

That is... ridiculously huge. Like, Big Steel might faint when he gets a boner huge. Guinness Book of World Records huge. I may not have seen enough horses to produce a viable statistical sample size, but I've never seen a horse with a dick anywhere close to that big.

starts to read.

later Lyra did not do that did she?

that aside tis a good chapter I just need to get some mind bleach.

Welll.... I guess it's not too far from a normal clop fic... I guess....

Kinky pie

Is she... Is she going to... Man, I honestly don't want to know...
*continues to the next chapter*

This is the point where I give up on the story and pretend it never existed.
Great writing, but bestiality ain't my ball of wax.

Reading this chapter, I had a weird thought: what if ponies raised humans on ranches?
I think there needs to a fic about that.

I'm a little confused as to why Big Steel's length is visible when they first see him; I was under the impression that horse dicks stay tucked away in their sheath unless they're aroused (or need to pee). It's too bad we missed out on seeing that in literary form, the description of it uncurling and poking out for the first time.

>You don’t have to do anything, but... could you take off your clothes with me?”'
don't know why, but this line really got my attention. I think it's the idea of Bonbon getting naked just to make her girlfriend comfortable, not just to have sex (though, I wouldn't mind if that happened too)

Thank you so much for giving us some proper foreplay (if that's the right term to describe Lyra talking with Steel and feeling him out before diving into the sex bits) that felt very warm and tender, as short as it was. I'm loving this set up.

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Oh jeez just saw the 41 weeks...

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I think the author wrote it like that since the horse is a breeding horse so he's constantly getting bred with mares, which in turn would teach him to keep his length unsheathed in preparation for another mare

...So much for that. I'd been expecting roleplay. :/ Perhaps I am just naive.