I guess Twilight would be perfect. Not that I want her to get raped, but, she seemed great with magic. Beknownst to evergone who have watched the show, I guess she could handle herself. Or even better, go to the mirror pond and use it to your advantage.
pinkie pie (element of laughter) the griffens will have a hard time with her so they will send her back cause i dont really wanna see any of them go so that is my suggestion so
2259689 I second the war idea, screw the griffins! DOWN WITH THE CORRUPT GOVERNMENT! ANARCHY!!! On another note, i vote fluttershy, just because i can :D
Sorry, because I don't have a mouse to click the reply button, since I'm using ipad for now. Anout those rocks. Big, damned rocks. Levitation might make it east. Besides, harem is nothing without the mirror pond. Anyways, this is your story; I'm not one to meddle with your decision.
Well, it wasn't exactly a choice that I had in mind, but I think the people have made their choice very clear in how they want the story to go. And since 'you' are technically the one deciding in the story, your wish is my command.
Dammit anonymous stallion that I am fucking Dash vicariously through! You are the most dense pegasus on the damn planet! And damn, all those orgasms? That sounds like it would lead to hypersensitivity. And... another pony for the king? I see Spitfires' character tag here, if you take her... I'll find you and end you. You already had my beloved Dash raped beyond comprehension, don't do it to my tied for favorite pony as well. Take Pinkie instead!
Hmmmm, now wait just a minute. Wouldn't having the only two creatures in the world that can manipulate the Sun and the Moon make Equestria basically untouchable? I mean the Griffins are being blatantly disrespectful to even Celestia herself. Also like if worse came to worse couldn't Celestia theoretically make sure that the sun never rises on the Griffin kingdoms? No light=no crops. No crops = no stock animals. I suppose there are a few flaws in that plan but nonetheless I think Equestria is being portrayed as too weak in this fic.
I guess Twilight would be perfect. Not that I want her to get raped, but, she seemed great with magic. Beknownst to evergone who have watched the show, I guess she could handle herself. Or even better, go to the mirror pond and use it to your advantage.
Alright. I guess this is the night gryphons die.
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All in all, good chapter
pinkie pie (element of laughter) the griffens will have a hard time with her so they will send her back cause i dont really wanna see any of them go so that is my suggestion so
nopony! equestria has a lot of magic and they are sure to win!
2258977 I second the mirror pond idea.
2259442 Griffons are really not affected by magic.I so then THIS.MEAN.WAR
Just say that the griffons declared war. Simple as that. They underestimate pony kind with their magic and shit.
2259809
sounds legit
2259494
third...
2258979
*slaps* NO PYROS DUDE, ARE YOU TRYING TO GET US ALL KILLED????
2260156
*undoes disguise* I never really was on your side
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2259689
I second the war idea, screw the griffins! DOWN WITH THE CORRUPT GOVERNMENT! ANARCHY!!!
On another note, i vote fluttershy, just because i can :D
2260319 Just send them to the sun problem solved.
pinkie should go,because she is the strongest when they face danger
i think
i know it's horrible
i'm sorry
2260287
That's cool I was a red spy disguised as a blue soldier so no harm done!
2260923 Well then, you handsome rogue. Shall we murder those abominations that so proudly call themselves gryphons?
I Love This Story !
2260970
alright, just let me grab my scout or his mother will be cranky and call the poor thing useless
let there be war
Fuck choosing you evil bastard.(p.s. I'm a evil bastard too. great chapter and either fluttershy or rarity.)
Better idea: Tell Celestia about their 'offer', laugh as she burns their country to the ground.
War
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But Twilight blocked the pond entrance with rocks. ROCKS! There's no way anyone could possibly move those rocks! They're so.... rockish....
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War? Come now, we wouldn't want any violence scarring the readers, would we?
*rereads what I wrote*
oh...
2267844 Best option call WAR
2267844
Pinkie demands blood
Sorry, because I don't have a mouse to click the reply button, since I'm using ipad for now. Anout those rocks. Big, damned rocks. Levitation might make it east. Besides, harem is nothing without the mirror pond. Anyways, this is your story; I'm not one to meddle with your decision.
2267844 lol a war couldn't be worse that rd being fucked by timberwolves hint hint
2267814
Bullshit! now you listen to me... I DON'T HAVE A CLUE WHY IM SCREAMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING
Seriously though, make twilight move the ROCK (singular, not plural) with her magic for fuck's sakes
2265807
I aggree to this
2267844
FUCK REALITY AND REASON. this... means... CUPCAKES!!!!! (and maybe I should add, war...).
I'd say war is a better decision.
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Man, a lot of you want war. Just curious, is it more because of;
A) you want the griffons to pay for what they did to Dash
B) War means pillaging and rape, and you sick bastards want to see more ponies raped.
2280108
A
2280164
Interesting....
This means WAR!!!!!
DEATH TO THE KING!!
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Well, it wasn't exactly a choice that I had in mind, but I think the people have made their choice very clear in how they want the story to go. And since 'you' are technically the one deciding in the story, your wish is my command.
...I hope you chose wisely.
2280108 A
2280108
All of the above
Does anyone else just want to kill captain Ray when he started insulting Dash, cause I was holding back punching my screen when I read that.
2344671
He wants to lick his nipples but he can't reach!
I have to admit it he wears thongs, walking around my kitchen thinking he is awsome.
I WEDGIED HIM SO HARD HE HAS AN ASSCRACK NOW
2282117
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=01-2pNCZiNk
SAY IT AGAIN YALL!
The clop is good, but my only comment in this story is the absurdity of the griffin's threat that it's hard to take seriously.
Jesus... So missing out on a pony sex-slave will cause the griffon to attack an entire country? I know that this is a clopfic but oh well...
Next chapter.
Dammit anonymous stallion that I am fucking Dash vicariously through! You are the most dense pegasus on the damn planet! And damn, all those orgasms? That sounds like it would lead to hypersensitivity. And... another pony for the king? I see Spitfires' character tag here, if you take her... I'll find you and end you. You already had my beloved Dash raped beyond comprehension, don't do it to my tied for favorite pony as well. Take Pinkie instead!
~SolidFire
Hmmmm, now wait just a minute. Wouldn't having the only two creatures in the world that can manipulate the Sun and the Moon make Equestria basically untouchable? I mean the Griffins are being blatantly disrespectful to even Celestia herself. Also like if worse came to worse couldn't Celestia theoretically make sure that the sun never rises on the Griffin kingdoms? No light=no crops. No crops = no stock animals. I suppose there are a few flaws in that plan but nonetheless I think Equestria is being portrayed as too weak in this fic.
So much chaos and bloodlust in the comments, so beautiful.