Aww HELL YA!!DIS IS DA SHIT I LOVE!! Give me more!!!! I still stand with the same idea....BUT...make the others "come" too...have them all go to the kingdom and attempt to save you/me...there will be orgasmic materials all over the place!!!!
For other stuff, if they fail it would make a nice alternate chapter/ending, the griffins win and do a number 6 it's when they all go riding in to town...a wiping and a whopping......hollarin and a shootin...beating everything moving within an inch of its life....except the mares....what do with mares? Ohhh they rape the shit out o dem!!![youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EM-lxsxeXBI]
Well... damn. seriously. Never would've thought it was all a trap from the beginning. I'm surprised that I'm still reading your story and not gone out on a punching spree. I daresay I shall continue reading. >.<
Spitfire's going to kill some griffons? HELL FUCKING YES!!! Oh god yes!! *Ahem, sorry about that. But now I'm more sca- *Looks at character lists for the sequels* Never mind. I won't be scared until the final chapter. Damn, they killed him that easily? Definitely a trap. Aaand it is... That damn @#$%^&!!!! Ray!!! Evil beyond all reason. Damn, that was sexy. Reminds me of something by Twilightclopple. Onward!!
Another good chapter. Definitely wondering who and/or what is gonna happen to Spitfire.
oh boy... Spitfire and RD are going to pleasure "you" everyday I suppose...
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If worst comes to worst or... best or... Whatever
Aww HELL YA!!DIS IS DA SHIT I LOVE!!
Give me more!!!!
I still stand with the same idea....BUT...make the others "come" too...have them all go to the kingdom and attempt to save you/me...there will be orgasmic materials all over the place!!!!
For other stuff, if they fail it would make a nice alternate chapter/ending, the griffins win and do a number 6 it's when they all go riding in to town...a wiping and a whopping......hollarin and a shootin...beating everything moving within an inch of its life....except the mares....what do with mares? Ohhh they rape the shit out o dem!!![youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EM-lxsxeXBI]
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You're quite possibly SICKER than the Camel... but your idea is original...
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Thank you, thank you very much.
I try my best to be the dirtiest!
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The way the things are turning out, looks like you're going to get your 10 chapter wish.
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I'm afraid to say that, while I too love the idea, the ending of this story will not turn out like that.
HOWEVER...
The sequel story I have planned that describes the war between ponies and griffons... Well, I wouldn't want to spoil anything now, would I?
Damn, this was intense
Well... damn. seriously. Never would've thought it was all a trap from the beginning. I'm surprised that I'm still reading your story and not gone out on a punching spree. I daresay I shall continue reading. >.<
Spitfire's going to kill some griffons? HELL FUCKING YES!!! Oh god yes!! *Ahem, sorry about that. But now I'm more sca- *Looks at character lists for the sequels* Never mind. I won't be scared until the final chapter. Damn, they killed him that easily? Definitely a trap. Aaand it is... That damn @#$%^&!!!! Ray!!! Evil beyond all reason. Damn, that was sexy. Reminds me of something by Twilightclopple. Onward!!
~SolidFire
well the King was clearly incompentant if Ray could pull all that off.