DONT END THIS STORY I ENJOY IT TO MUCH (i mean apart from dash being raped and all but that's not the point) THE POINT IS I DONT WANT THIS TO END NOT UNTIL CHAPTER TEN
For now, I plan on ending Dash's and 'your' adventured here. There will be a new story made following what happens after the next chapter. Maybe I'll pick this up again and continue, but like my AJ clopfic, for now it has run its course and new ideas are scarce.
Like I say, if anyone has any ideas for how to continue the story or what they want to see, I'm always open to bounce ideas back and forth. 3 chapters of "Labor of Love" were influenced from other people suggesting ideas. The next chapter of this one is very much influenced by your votes. So if you got any ideas, send them on over!
There's only so much rape a single guy can think of.
A good idea should be that RD was awake when she herd you/me say
“Rainbow Dash, I’m sorry. What I did that night to you… after we got out from that lake, I shouldn’t have done that. If I didn’t do that to you, maybe all of this would have never occurred. I caused you to go through so much, to bear so much pain. But I’m not going to subject your friends to the same fate. I’m going to make things right. I’m going to make them pay. I don’t know if I’ll see you again. I don’t know if I’ll make it out alive. But no matter what happens, I want you to know something. I should have said this long ago, and I’m not sure if it means anything now. But I have to say it. I love you, Rainbow Dash. I love you, and I’m sorry.”
she follows you/me on the adventure as your...ahem..."Friend"
Oh no, suicidal mission by our vicarious pony! And dammit! Shouldn't Princes Celestia have enough power to kick the asses of a few griffons? And what about Luna? She's powerful! Grrr... this is insanely amazing!
Considering the demands War is worth it. If you cave they will make even more horrible. You have to draw a line. And also share their demands with the rest of the world, you may find several allies.
Well, this is kind of *cough* new?
Yay new chapter!!!
Not bad chapter but where's her dream of reliving being raped by the Timber Wolves?
what do you mean last? are you gonna end the story on chapter 8?
DONT END THIS STORY I ENJOY IT TO MUCH (i mean apart from dash being raped and all but that's not the point) THE POINT IS I DONT WANT THIS TO END NOT UNTIL CHAPTER TEN
This chapter coming out made my day. I find that a little weird but I just really love this. Its well written, great story, great sex, everything.
Bravo Zulu for probably not the first time.
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Gotta save the best for last...
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For now, I plan on ending Dash's and 'your' adventured here. There will be a new story made following what happens after the next chapter. Maybe I'll pick this up again and continue, but like my AJ clopfic, for now it has run its course and new ideas are scarce.
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You just made me very sad
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Like I say, if anyone has any ideas for how to continue the story or what they want to see, I'm always open to bounce ideas back and forth. 3 chapters of "Labor of Love" were influenced from other people suggesting ideas. The next chapter of this one is very much influenced by your votes. So if you got any ideas, send them on over!
There's only so much rape a single guy can think of.
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It must go on!!!! It has to!! I wub this story so much!! If you start another book send me the link!!! I MUST read it!
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A good idea should be that RD was awake when she herd you/me say
she follows you/me on the adventure as your...ahem..."Friend"
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I'll let you in on a secret since you were so close...
that was my exact train of thought for one ending I came up with...
but my darker side had a good idea for a more morbid ending...
so I flipped a coin....
the darker one won. But come on, this is a dark rapey story. We can't have a good ending, now, can we?
Can't wait for the conclusion, I gotta say, you really pulled me into this story when I thought it was just pure rapez and stuffs, Great Job!
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*Evil Grin* yes....do it....dark and evil...I can picture it....
Now to read chapter 8!!
Dashie not dreaming at all? YES! Good! Perhaps she can start healing?
P.S. Yes, I MUST be the one pony on this comment thread to not endorse it.
Loved this one ^_^
I've literally skipped everything in italics... I have no idea why I decided to read this in the first place .-.
Still not sure if I'm glad I did or not. It's well written but... Damn...
Oh no, suicidal mission by our vicarious pony! And dammit! Shouldn't Princes Celestia have enough power to kick the asses of a few griffons? And what about Luna? She's powerful! Grrr... this is insanely amazing!
~SolidFire
I LAUGHED SO HARD.
Considering the demands War is worth it. If you cave they will make even more horrible. You have to draw a line. And also share their demands with the rest of the world, you may find several allies.