Very nice chapter dude. Now we need Rainbow being DP'd by 2 gryphon guards while a 3rd shoves his entire cock down her throat. Looking forward to the Timber Wolves raping her as well
Well....at least I now have proof that dragon sperm is as hot as i thought it was. Though I wonder if it would apply for half dragons as well.... But poor Rainbow. She got her freedom, but she can't escape the nightmares. Good show i say. Keep up the good work I hope she gets her revenge soon
I Must Say, after so many grimdarks and gorefics, including Cupcakes and Sweet Apple massacre, I was finally able to gag while reading a fimfiction post. (Yes, that's right, SAM and Cupcakes did not affect me at all.)
Damn... again. Those bastard griffons! They broke Dash! They broke the most steadfast and hardheaded pony alive! How could they do such a thing! I'm left unsure, but I have a very bad feeling that Dash quit the Wonderbolts after this entire thing. You said that she refused to fly whenever she didn't have to. I hope she didn't give up her dream because of that. And dayum! Damn dragon! Ah, and I need to revise my first comment. There is no way I can finish the second story tomorrow, thanks to school and homework, so that will take longer.
Great, Great and Great. Cant wait for the next one.
Another good chapter. Please dont take to long on the fourth.
Very nice chapter dude. Now we need Rainbow being DP'd by 2 gryphon guards while a 3rd shoves his entire cock down her throat. Looking forward to the Timber Wolves raping her as well
Again creepy but at least it's not like the first 2 good job
Well....at least I now have proof that dragon sperm is as hot as i thought it was. Though I wonder if it would apply for half dragons as well.... But poor Rainbow. She got her freedom, but she can't escape the nightmares. Good show i say. Keep up the good work I hope she gets her revenge soon
Oh that was hot! I'm really loving this story.
Please don't end a story on a they-live-happily-forever note. I love your semi-dark style , don't change it for ending.
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I don't think you'll have to worry too much about that...
...We art not amused.
DAYUM, and I never realized that it was rape like this. Great detail and good job, just not my thing.
this is so fucking intense
I Must Say, after so many grimdarks and gorefics, including Cupcakes and Sweet Apple massacre, I was finally able to gag while reading a fimfiction post.
(Yes, that's right, SAM and Cupcakes did not affect me at all.)
By all my power as Chairman of the New Soviet Order, I declare open war upon the Griffon Empire and there will be no survivors!
Damn... again. Those bastard griffons! They broke Dash! They broke the most steadfast and hardheaded pony alive! How could they do such a thing! I'm left unsure, but I have a very bad feeling that Dash quit the Wonderbolts after this entire thing. You said that she refused to fly whenever she didn't have to. I hope she didn't give up her dream because of that. And dayum! Damn dragon!
Ah, and I need to revise my first comment. There is no way I can finish the second story tomorrow, thanks to school and homework, so that will take longer.
~SolidFire
She should've shit in that dragon's mouth