"Twilight? Where are you?"
"..."
"I know this situation is bad, but you have to keep fighting! Let me help you!"
"..."
"Twilight! Twi- Oh, there you are..."
Luna sat next to the student of magic.
"Twilight... You've been in here for almost a week now, you have to go back out soon..."
Twilight did not respond. Not even looking back to acknowledge the moon princess's presence.
"Twilight... Your friends are worried about you..."
That got a twitch out of Twilight's ear.
She turned her head to face the night princess.
"I don't have any friends." she said resolutely.
"Don't say that Twilight! You know your friends love you. Don't think for a second-"
"Love me?" Twilight calmly responded, "They abandon me on a whim. Friends? I have none."
"Twilight-"
"No. Don't try Luna. You are the only one who hasn't yet betrayed me. Allow me to keep a little happiness."
"Twilight... You need to know that my sister has-"
"Don't you dare mention her!"
Luna was nearly blown back by the sudden burst of emotion.
"Twilight she-"
"I don't give a buck what she's done! That monster can't hurt me here. I'm free of her conniving and manipulation! She and my so-called friends can burn in Tartarus!"
"Twilight! She wants you back! Since you've been in here Celestia hasn't-"
"I told you not to say her name here!"
"Twilight...I- I didn't want it to come to this, but you give me no choice." Luna's horn flared, "If you won't listen to me willingly, I'll force you to listen to your friends!"
Rising from the ground with a great flap of her majestic wings Luna's horn flashed. Burning with the immense power of her celestial godhood, Luna worked to bend incomprehensible magic of the universe bending to her will.
When the flash cleared Luna descended and landed once again by Twilight.
"I'm sorry Twilight, but you needed to come out of there, you would not have lasted much longer without intervention." Luna lowered a wing around the shaking unicorn. "You will one day understand that this was necessary for-"
Twilight turned her head to the lunar princess, "You were the last one I trusted." She was shaking in anger, "and you just had to go and break that trust."
Luna's gaze stayed on Twilight's face, only flinching slightly in response to Twilight's unexpected rage. "I know you may not like it, but I'm doing this for you Twilight. To save you."
"Take a look around princess. What do you see?"
For the first time since using her magic Luna looked at their surroundings. Now she was shocked.
"How! How did you stop my magic? We should have been transported out of here! This is MY domain! There is nothing more powerful in here than myself!"
The shaking under Luna's wing increased. Twilight was laughing.
"You really think you can overpower me here? This isn't your domain! It's mine!" Twilight's laughter stopped abruptly, "And it's time for you to go."
Luna closed her eyes to hide from the bright flash of Twilight's horn. When she could see again, she could make out the form of the purple mare before her.
Still lying in the same hospital bed, and still shrouded in the shadows of the week long night.
Luna sat, listening to the beeping of the heart monitor, watching the almost imperceptible drain of the IV bags above the stu- former student of magic.
"Twilight..."
Wow! Now what?
Celestia Logic: my student was mad about people leaving her alone, better tell everyone to leave her alone
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Yes, heal the wound by rubbing salt on it... very clever
SO SHORT
Why do you take so long over only 1000 words?
...huh. So are we going the "Twilight-turns-into-a-Second-Nightmare", "Twilight-against-the-World", "Shattered-Harmony", or the "Chaos-Twilight" route here?
All of them are viable story routes, but given whats going on...well, I'll let you decide. Its your own story after all.
This is awesome! I can't really say I blame Twilight for wanting to stay in what I'm assuming is a coma, of sorts. Her beloved teacher attacks her, her friends apparently don't care, and now even Luna, the one pony who understands her, seems to have turned against her. I don't think she'll turn evil or anything, I think she'll just waste away to nothing, trapped in her bitterness and anger. Hope to see another update soon! (preferably a longer chapter, next time?)
I must admit - I love all the little touches in this chapter.
Events other stories would shove in your face are basically tossed in as one liners.
Twilight effectively dying in a coma?
Celestia not raising the sun for a week?
Twilight ROFLStomping Luna's celestial dream magic?
Pah! they are little details against Twi's rage.
A little short for the wait...
Still nice.
2551602 Well, salt is the original disinfectant.
2551602 If you do not have proper medication on hand then you must first rinse the wound then if possible rub salt on it to clense and increase the healing process of the wound. Celestia forgot the water part.
So, this officially dead then?
4525111 It seems like it, unfortunately.
Is it me or is a chapter missing from this story?
And why oh why did this have to be left to die.
...Dang. This hit harder than I was expecting...
...I kinda wish it wasn't ditched, but what can you do?
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4548082 Oh, you noticed...
This story might not be as dead as you think...
4548085 ask and you shall receive
Meh chapter, but look at the word count.
Capitalize.
I... I thought I was reading dark story? Not a trashy clopfic?
What was luna trying to do?
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I think entered her dreams? Or tried to, I'm just as confused as you are, or was.