• Member Since 13th Oct, 2012
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EonSpirit


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Eon Spirit was born with the gift to see the restless souls of ponies who had passed in most gruesome ways and even seeing the events that led up to their horrible demise.

But When His mentor, Princess Luna, goes missing and a mysterious new pony moves to Ponyville, Join him on an adventure to find the truth on Luna, Blue Rose, and the ghost uprising!

Main character is OC, later there might be some more grotesque descriptions but not enough for a gore rating, and some characters might act OOC sometimes. All kinds of feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Also, this is my first story, so please don't troll, flame, hate, etc.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 6 )

Don't like, don't read.

Ok... :moustache:

1968885 I... Don't know how to respond to this. So have a Pinkie! :pinkiesad2:

1970286

Well, by saying that you are just shutting up your story to any kind of criticism that could help you improve. Also you are sounding pretty harsh with your readers.

Don't close up, you are a writer and we need to be read for any kind of cristicism, from the constructive to the destructive. Welcome everything! :flutterrage:

It's the only way to grow and improve, so yeah... I would advise you to change this on your description.

I don't like it....I-I-I love it! :twilightsmile:

1970309 I guess you're right...

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