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applejack may not remember, but we do.
we are themisplaced
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yaO0BEfROcw]
One minute Honeycrisp was cooking in the kitchen, making apple fritters. Applejacks favorite. She was thinking that she had perhaps been a little bit harsh on Applejack. She couldn't be mad at her for long. Tomorrow she would end her being grounded. thats when a tentacle shot out of the window and grabbed hold of her. She screamed.
Honeycrisp was pulled out of the window by and thrown onto the ground. She was dazed and she heard gunshots and screaming.
“Why Mr. Tall why would you do this!”
Her husband flew out the window and landed next to her...dead. His body pierced with tree branches.
The monster came after her next. Tentacles impaled her legs and then chest.
She was powerless to resist him.
Meanwhile Applejack was screaming.
“STOP STOP STOP STOP! MR. TALL NO!”
But he didn’t stop he thrashed Honeycrisp around like a rag doll. Bones snapping as she was.
Then he stopped as if listening to something. A tiny heart beat.
He lifted Honeycrip’s pregnant belly up to ear trying to locate the noise. Locating it he plunged his hoof into her stomach and pulled out the undeveloped fetus.
It was much to young to survive outside the womb. it was also injured from all the thrashing
“No…” Said Honeycrisp weakly as she stopped breathing.
Mr. Tall held the bloody fetus in the air wondering what to do with it.
Y-you monster that was going to be my sister... how could you…she started crying…she’s going to die. Just like my parents she's…
Applejack broke into uncontrolled sobbing.
Now Slender Mane doesn’t understand ponies or any other organic life very well, however in this one second he had a moment of clarity.
1. Applejack was no longer having fun.
2. She was sad that this creature was dying.
3. He didn’t want her to be sad.
Slender Mane bent down and picked up some of Honeycrisp’s spattered insides. To Slender Mane it seemed like spare parts. She took out the fetuses broken organs and replaced some of them with Honeycrisp's working organs.
“That won’t work you dummy she’s too young.” Said Applejack though tears.
Slender Mane took note of this.
He took off his suit coat, leaving him in just a dress shirt, and placed it over the fetus for about ten seconds.
When he removed the coat, the fetus was gone and in its place was a one year old filly.
Slender Mane placed her in Applejacks arms.
He patted her on the head, picked up her parents and dragged them away to the Everfree Forest.
G.U.L.L. arrived shortly after.
and that’s when we were born.
-themisplaced
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Hmm. Well. That's... one mystery... solved?
awesome chapter dued
1945942
yes, now you know what the keeper looks like without his suit coat. but you still haven't seen inside it. that might drive you crazy.
-thefeared
1945981
I was more referring to how Apple Bloom came to be when she was only a four month old fetus (and, I suppose, how she got exposed to more stigma radiation than Applejack), but that, too, I guess...
Theirs a mistake. there are no humans
Aww, now I see him in a different light. He wants to have fun.
1946068
my keeper has no or concept interest in fun. however he finds it fascinating to watch since he doesn't understand it. The only ones that don't run from him are fillies so he often experiments on them to see what they find fun. however my keeper often can't tell the difference between screams and laugher and ponies tend to be fragile.
-thefeared
1946144
I see. Thanks.
1946056
the collective have used many different bodies and have been to many different universes. humans are one of many different vessels we've used. we only have one member using a human host in Equestria currently, but we have access to other universes if our keeper sees it fit. in your world we currently have stationed:
observer: "the eyes". his original title was "the sentinel".
deadhead: Wears a skull mask."the nationalist".
mr. scars: a "pawn", as well as "the burdened".
cursor: "messenger", She appears with x's over her eyes, and she is referred to as "the selfish".
persolus: his visage resembles that of an old man, and he is referred to as "the hermit".
swain: He has been shown wearing a theater mask and an old European soldier uniform. He is referred to as "the lover" .
firebrand : The person with the pinhole eyes and smile. "the stubborn".
i hope this clarifies things
-thefeared
Caught on the capitals. N E W.
1946574 yeah i don't know whats up with the spaces. it just did that for some reason
There aren't enough like buttons.
Honeslty this is among the best stories i have read on this site. Top 5 atleast.
~~Flutter-Shy~~
1946634Clearly I need to do something with my computer. It's not alerting me to anything. And I just figured out what the sigma radiation is used for. Besides excelerating growth.
I love this story.
1946794
thank you little seed
1946794 oh and spread the word
1946801 you can't see the updates because of the stigma radiation. it does havoc on electrical devices.
1947881 Well actually that explains a lot. But, well I guess that explains the man in my corner too. Time to go find a way to contain it. The radiation, not the man. I already caught him.
1946500 well done, well done. you found the message.
Applebloom. N-no cutie mark. Thank god this is Fanon.
1947881 I Want to protect my preciously expensive ASUS gaming PC but i also want to read this amazing story... Why do you have to create these intense decisions?
So one evening I saw this in my Read it Later box and was slightly interested. I have only made it up to this chapter and this is what I think so far:
Writing: You have an interesting way of writing that is different but yet simple, so good job there.
Story: It seems like you are really trying to be as gory as possible with this. This can be off putting for some readers, not because they do not like gore but more that you are just trying to hard to make particular seen sound like a strawberry factory exploded. But this is a Slender Mane fic, I suppose, so with that in mind I give you credit... Congratulation, my friend, you got a certificate in creative murder for this chapter. Also I enjoyed the Slender appearance scene in chapter one so again, great job, you definitely made it sound ominous.
Grammar: I not sure if you have done this already for future chapters but I will say it anyway. You might want to find a proof reader. Some sentences I found quite confusing others repeated themselves and it was quite off putting.
All in all: Not perfect, but not too bad either. 7/10. I will come back to this story, interested in seeing what future chapters hold.
TAA DAA! :D
6693723
want to see me do a trick?
-thefeared
Interesting concept so far, but these first few chapters are in need of serious editing.
I shall continue reading though, this did make it to the feature box, so it must get better.
...
I hope.
8362766
Wait I got to the feature box?!?
You're going to make me a fan of Slenderman!