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One is allowed to dislike even well written material when the end result is not to your enjoyment. Even good movies can bomb in the box office, and one can draw the same parallels here. I've dropped plenty of novel series, even well written ones, when they turn in a 'wrong' direction in my eyes after setting up a nice foundation beforehand for another thing. There's also a thing called 'personal preference', and if you wanna bring your funny little analogy into things, there's also something called 'freedom of speech,' 'freedom of choice,' etc. Take your pick.

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Look, I meant it in the same way that I helped AbsoluteAnonymous handle the backlash from the ending of TGWP.

Christ, that destroyed her, and it's very likely the reason she isn't still writing.

A story that everyone loved, up until the very last chapters, was 'ruined' by an ending that was heavily foreshadowed the entire story? It's ridiculous to hold the quality of a story, and the writer themselves, to an event that you yourself has just decreed as "Personal Choice".

Yes, you would have preferred Luna, but trashing what was, until that point for you, a brilliant story because the heavily foreshadowed ending wasn't your ship is beyond ludicrous.

You know what this means...

REMEDIAL STUDY LESSONS

HOW KINKY

Wuhu! Next Chapter earlier than possibly possible. You are so great. Anyway, one little:
"AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" Bad style, just use one; Otherwise it looks like written by an youngster cybering
Number 42? I see what you did there
I hope you hold your pace (I await a new Chapter in a month, k?)

This seems like a mix between Romance Reports and Perfect for Me, at least from the first glance. Assuredly it deviates from the expected path, but I am in no mood to read anything that might get feelsy in the slightest.
Too many feels.
Too many.
Feels.
But I'll read it later!
Wahaha~!

The two mare hurried back up to the bedroom, giggling excitedly the whole way.

>two mare
Not sure if you did that on purpose, lol

Twilight say"You might know everything I'm going to do, but that's not going to help you since I know everything you're going to do. Strange, isn't it?"

2256337 Now where have I heard that before.....?

The Sonic the Hedgehog OVA, if my memory serves me correct?

Ohhh next chapter please!!

O///O

HOT DAMN!!!!!

One Word.........HOT!

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You.
I like you.

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Oh, no, I'm a firm (hurr hurr) advocate for clop, and have been very vocal as such.
When I said I skipped over it I meant it was the most poorly written part of the story.

Nothing immoral about mutual consensual, nothin' at all.

"badonkadonk"

This pleases Twilight.
(HA, word play)

The references are making this feel a little corny. It's starting to feel like a crossover of "Romance Reports" and "Perfect for Me" with a lot of throw-in references from Star Wars and a few other well known stories/movies. Not too bad in execution, but hard to fully engage myself in the story when I'm constantly being reminded of other stories. This is also starting to feel like more of a "Twilight has lots of sex" story rather than a "Twilight learns about love and life" story. There's no shame in that, and you may still yet steer it in that direction, just letting you know how the story is looking so far from my personal perspective.

So much yes!

Luna demands more! More clop! More story! More Twilight! More everything!

What if the two Twlights suddenly became four then suddenly eight! Then two Princess Lunas showed up! Mass orgy.... mass orgy everywhere!

Excellent story keep it up.

Hehe 42...I see what you did there

I wonder if they maintain horn contact, they will have a live feed to each other's mind!

2260400 foreshadowing

Hehe. I like where this is going. Quite a bit. Silly Twilight. Silly, silly, silly...

2259143 What if everything became bigger and eight?

And so, the age old question must be asked:
Is it considered masturbation, incest, or narcissism?

"Read two books at the same time!"
"Read two books at the same time!"

I had to facepalm when I read that... okay back to reading the chapter.

>Okay then, lets just relax
y u no apostrophe

2258709 Well at least no one mentioned the lotion...

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Well, if ya want me to get the ball-gag out...

2264383 all three it would seem.

Twilight eyed her suspiciously. "Fine. I've prepared for this. If you're me, then what number am I thinking of right now?"

"Forty two."

*glances at computer clock*
HOLY CRAP!!! It's 4:20!!!!!!!
GAH HOW DID SHE READ MY MIND?!?!?!?!

I can read anybody's mind.

Shit

3107907 pot o'clock

2264383 the first

2264383 Selfcest maybe?

2264383 yes

3107907 I'm getting the impression that forty-two is a hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy reference.

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You too? I was going to comment the same thing but then I saw your comment and responded. Is their equus or earth or whatever an organic super computer too? Oooohhh, now I want to read a crossover of mlp and the hitchhikers guide to the galaxy, anyone else?

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In the ASCII Language (computer language), 42 is an *
The greatest computer ever built was asked what the meaning of life is and it literally told everyone in ITS language that life is "whatever you want it to be".

They both squealed like little fillies, and danced awkwardly around each other. Spike opened the door, "Hey Twi I forgot my-" Spikes sentence was cut short when he saw the sight before him. He shouldn't have eaten that cheap quartz that morning. He was seeing things. Two Twilights! He tried to ask Twilight what was going on but it came out as a sort of incoherent garbled mess, "Twi- I- what? Two? GAH!"

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I knew it was the "meaning of life, the universe, and everything" in Hitchhiker's Guide To The Galaxy, but I didn't know about it being "*" in ASCII. Thanks for telling us this fun fact.