The typeset at the beginning seems screwed up, and the 'five years have passed thing' seems to facile, but I've come to expect good things from you. You have unleashed my interest in a sequel upon this unsuspecting world! Prepare to meet the consequences!

Interesting so far! THis has so much promise! But of course! Can't wait! :)

1857935 fixed it. sorry didn't realize it was messed up from copy past

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1858009 yup, if you havent read the first story, you should check it out before this one.

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I actually put reading that on hold I read up to chapter 6 before deciding to check some other fics...then another...then another....then ano- ok you get the picture, I guess I just forgot to keep reading it, but when I read that description...I wonder...WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED!?!? Midnight flame? King of equestria? what the shit! `Who da fuq is that? I mean I know The guy (Sorry forgot name I'll read in a min) could be turned into an 'alicorn' (I kinda get annoyed at this but meh) Is that his name? I dont know, and then I read the names of the other chapters that indicate he was split into several other alicorns but I still don't have a fucking clue whats going on, you can complain to me at not knowing but...

Ok I'll read whats love got to do with it straight after I read a novice swordsman in canterlot court toodles
and also...
DUKE OF FUCKING EARL

fuck. yes.

followin'

excellent start so far just can't wait for it to continue

ITS HERE!!

Wow u work fast
Disnt expect you to start posting for atleast another week but i see u dont like to keep your fans waiting.
Also loving it so far and find myself in the story as i read. Couldnt stand seeing twilight cry.

it has arrived! huzzah!

well I hope this works. I really want them to get back together already I want to see a mariage and see young foals running around their daddy. AKA don't drop something else on them yet let him have some fun for a bit.

1858038 lots of words to read in the other story. Also he was not split into three separate alicorns. he was split into one of each race. There is a lot that goes on including many filler chapters within the other story. If you aren't in it for the long haul then I would suggest to just bypass it and move on.

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hay I gonna read it...K

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I NEVER GIVE UP

I READ MAN OF WAR AND DIARIES OF A MAN!

OH YES! A sequel already! I look forward to many chapters!

1858232 working on chapter two right now. Thought I'd get a head start on a few chapters so that I can continue to work normally on my book. The books is going well for the moment. No chapters yet, just ideas and scene setups currently.

The Gary Stu is strong in this OC.

Fuck yeah its back...........
........*presses f5 every five seconds till new update*.................

Watch that Cockatrice Eye require ancient magics or some bullshit like that. Twilight'll have to haul ass to a college or some crap and find somebody well versed in Theoretical Arcane Arts. That would be one little bitch to discover.

Also, for some reason, when Midnight is referred to as the "Dark Alicorn", all I can think of is "Dark Knight".

this prob old as shit but i had to post ithttps://derpiboo.ru/128470?scope=scped2f801ef1efda74b21a86fa2797a804bbc40a885

1860733 that is so epic that I have no words for it!

1860953 it's what i do bro

All my thumbs up. Forever.

Five years, and she now has scars?

Will Midnight heal them, or do they make her look good?

If I could figure out how to do links on my phone I'd put a link of the terminator saying
IM BACK

Why is there a ★ at the beginning of this chapter?

So I am sorry to say that I cannot sell it to you.

You're lucky she's not human, or your body would have been found a few weeks later, stoneless.

I'm sorry but I gotta point this out: Almost all stories with gypsie merchants selling items will have a price to go with that item, the price being a curse or misfortune of some sort. This seems too good to be true for a first chapter, so imma keep reading on to see if I'm right.

Peace,

I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaack.

Since I got finished with other chapters I read in my favorites, I decided to pull this story from my "Read It Later (Sequels)" bookshelf and start reading, so I will catch up to you on your next chapter.