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Furstreak


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The typeset at the beginning seems screwed up, and the 'five years have passed thing' seems to facile, but I've come to expect good things from you. :rainbowkiss: You have unleashed my interest in a sequel upon this unsuspecting world! Prepare to meet the consequences! :yay:

Interesting so far! THis has so much promise! But of course! Can't wait! :)

1857935 fixed it. sorry didn't realize it was messed up from copy past

1858009 yup, if you havent read the first story, you should check it out before this one.

1858013
I actually put reading that on hold I read up to chapter 6 before deciding to check some other fics...then another...then another....then ano- ok you get the picture, I guess I just forgot to keep reading it, but when I read that description...I wonder...WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED!?!:rainbowhuh:? Midnight flame? King of equestria? what the shit! `Who da fuq is that? I mean I know The guy (Sorry forgot name I'll read in a min) could be turned into an 'alicorn' (I kinda get annoyed at this but meh) Is that his name? I dont know, and then I read the names of the other chapters that indicate he was split into several other alicorns but I still don't have a fucking clue whats going on, you can complain to me at not knowing but...

Ok I'll read whats love got to do with it straight after I read a novice swordsman in canterlot court toodles
and also...
DUKE OF FUCKING EARL

:flutterrage:

excellent start so far just can't wait for it to continue

Wow u work fast
Disnt expect you to start posting for atleast another week but i see u dont like to keep your fans waiting.
Also loving it so far and find myself in the story as i read. Couldnt stand seeing twilight cry.

it has arrived! huzzah! :yay:

well I hope this works. I really want them to get back together already I want to see a mariage and see young foals running around their daddy. AKA don't drop something else on them yet let him have some fun for a bit.

1858038 lots of words to read in the other story. Also he was not split into three separate alicorns. he was split into one of each race. There is a lot that goes on including many filler chapters within the other story. If you aren't in it for the long haul then I would suggest to just bypass it and move on.

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I NEVER GIVE UP

I READ MAN OF WAR AND DIARIES OF A MAN!

OH YES! A sequel already! I look forward to many chapters! :pinkiehappy:

1858232 working on chapter two right now. Thought I'd get a head start on a few chapters so that I can continue to work normally on my book. The books is going well for the moment. No chapters yet, just ideas and scene setups currently.

The Gary Stu is strong in this OC.

Fuck yeah its back...........
........*presses f5 every five seconds till new update*.................

Watch that Cockatrice Eye require ancient magics or some bullshit like that. Twilight'll have to haul ass to a college or some crap and find somebody well versed in Theoretical Arcane Arts. That would be one little bitch to discover.

Also, for some reason, when Midnight is referred to as the "Dark Alicorn", all I can think of is "Dark Knight". :rainbowwild:

this prob old as shit but i had to post ithttps://derpiboo.ru/128470?scope=scped2f801ef1efda74b21a86fa2797a804bbc40a885

1860733 that is so epic that I have no words for it!:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

YAY! Now Luna can collect her Hearth's Warming Present!

I'm wondering how many chapters will there be of this story/sequel?

1862526 I still have quite a few filler chapters that didn't make it into the first story, so maybe 50. I haven't come up with an ending for this one just yet so who knows

1862485 And I'll be waiting in anticipation of the embarrassing shenanigans he gets up to under Luna's orders...
For Midnight, there is only one pic that fits that situation, or at least the words do...
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Now one of our favorite mostly op oc characters is back. Note I say mostly op becuase he was turned to stone for five years. If he was completly op the curse wouldn't have worked.

1862649 Yep. Course in other things he isn't really op. In example he does have a limit to his ammount of magic. In fact the only op things about him are the strength of his magic and the fact that he can think up and make spells in seconds. Which that in itself isn't op that is just human creativity at work.

1862662 Yep. His magic strength though is limited due to his human mind not being able to handle a high level of magic flow. He may be able to cast some high level spells. but others put to much strain on his mind which causes him great pain.

1862674 Which in turn keeps him from being fully op.

Oh no... five years is a long time away from your kids. Mariana would be... fifteen maybe? And Starlight would be seven? Dmn, that would break my heart if I had kids and missed that mich of their lives.

1862701 I originally planned it to be ten years, but by then, his ladies wouldn't want to have children or would have gone to find another love interest. Five years is just enough time to keep them waiting before they completely loose hope. Without loosing any of them permanently.

*reads last bit* Yay family reunion! :yay:

Yay Kindle! I always knew she was a good mare.

Also ready for all the feels.

1863278 Lots of feels for the first few chapters. Then many surprises!:yay::yay::yay:

***** yeah!!!! makes me feal all warm inside...

I love this story so much!!
I wonder what firstreak has instore for us!

Almost enough for maybe another hundred chapters? Possibly. But I'm not telling lol:trollestia:

Is Kindle going to join the relationship?

:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:how did i miss this
*follow*
amazing as always

Aww! :fluttercry: :fluttercry:

Much more of this and I'll have to have a pacemaker implanted.

Aw bummer no more 'uncle' :fluttercry: I liked it when they called him that :twilightblush:

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