2029469Wow it finally happened, would you believe that you are the first person to tell me that since I had this as my profile pic and that was 8 months! and Eeyup!
And in the next chapter you'll see Screwtaloo and maybe a candy filling for Sweetie's fillyhood. This and maybe more in the next issue of: Sex-Ed PlayDate!
damn angleshy this is amazing my gf is despritly wating to role play this out so pleas finish this soon (she allredy got the costumes for me and her frends)
The narrative needs a bit of work, but the characters were absolutely spot-on! You wrote them flawlessly, especially how Spike was so persistently disdainful throughout the whole 1st chapter, it made the whole thing pretty dawww.
....That is the worst misspelling I've ever seen of that word, and the reason why I feel the need to point this out... Because almost EVERY freaking story I see that use this word get it WRONG!
Every one always says defiantly! Wrong Wrong Wrong! That is not the right word, the right word is Definitely.
Anyway... I do like this story. Just... seeing that word messed up always annoys me because I see it all the time!
“Um, girls… wh-wh-what’s that?” The other two looked at what Sweetie was suddenly pointing to, and Apple Bloom smiled mischievously knowing what it was… that little devil. “Well, well, well… looks like someone is havin’ himself a wet dream.” “A wet dream?” wondered Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle. “One time when it happened to me, mah sister told me that a wet dream is a dream you have that makes ya feel very aroused outside the dream without ya knowin’.” They both suddenly got it and continued to look upon my little erection. Suddenly, it started to rise in length and it became bigger as they starred. I was also making tiny little movements as I was resting against the wall. “I wonder what he’s dreaming about?” said Scootaloo. “I don’t know,” Apple Bloom responded, “but… Ah think that Ah’m goin’ to help him out a little.” She chuckled a little as she down in front of me, placed her hoof on my aroused erection and then started to rub it a little to make it bigger. Sweetie began to freak out again as she gasped out of worry. “Apple Bloom, what are you doing?” “Quiet, Sweetie Belle,” said Scootaloo, “I wanna see this.” There were times that I am a very deep sleeper, and unfortunately, this was one of those times. That whole moment as Apple Bloom was just sitting there smiling and constantly rubbing it, even though I just mumbled and moved around a bit, I stayed fast asleep. Damn, how was that even possible for me? “Check it out, girls… all nice n’ hard.” Upon seeing her holding my hard, stiff erection, Scootaloo’s eyes lit up with excitement and felt quite impressed for my size. Sweetie Belle however, was blushing red all over her face as she just starred at my impressive sized member. Then suddenly, Apple Bloom gave her friends a little demonstration as she bent down and started to lightly suck on my dragon member; bobbing her head up and down. Her friends couldn’t believe that she was doing this in front of them… and with no hesitation I might add. Sweetie Belle was starting to feel that same feeling that she had 3 days ago as she kept watching her friend; she definitely wanted a piece of me as well. Eventually within my sub-consciousness, I began to feel something rather weird, but gosh darn good. I began to wake up as I slowly started to open my eyes and was looking around the room. I slightly leaned more against the wall as I continued to feel something stroking and compressing around my penis; and I even made a little doping smile that made Scootaloo chuckle. Then suddenly, I realized that I was awake and I looked down and saw the sight of Apple Bloom servicing me; it literally left me startled." Spike oh spike what WERE you dreaming hun? Thinking about you know what Trolololololo
Things have been a little weird and awkward lately after that certain day, but things seemed to go our way.
Things were a little close, buy hey... things worked out fine, what can I say? For sex like that, anything I would pay. Sometimes, a growing dragon just has to lay. Would you like to play?
“I wonder what he’s dreaming about?” said Scootaloo.
I can't help but wonder who he was dreaming about.
Devine; where did that elegant word come from?
Might I suggest you put the word "devine" in italics instead of quotes? Like so:
Poor Truffle. Spike is best Dragon.
Spike better get use to waking on all fours cause a doubt he'll be able to walk up right for a while.
Commence read.
Guessing Sweetie might have locked the door. Truffle walking in?
2024323 I heard you like Mudkips
2024875 now that would be interesting, not surprising, but interesting none the less
2029469Wow it finally happened, would you believe that you are the first person to tell me that since I had this as my profile pic and that was 8 months! and
Eeyup!
And in the next chapter you'll see Screwtaloo and maybe a candy filling for Sweetie's fillyhood.
This and maybe more in the next issue of: Sex-Ed PlayDate!
Dragon
damn angleshy this is amazing
my gf is despritly wating to role play this out so pleas finish this soon
(she allredy got the costumes for me and her frends)
2035010
Um... okay...
Have fun with that.
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Hay! You know we all do it
I'M NOT THE ONLY CLOPER HERE
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The next one... and it will focus on someone... I mean somepony else too.
So much win. Very well written and more soon I hope.
The narrative needs a bit of work, but the characters were absolutely spot-on! You wrote them flawlessly, especially how Spike was so persistently disdainful throughout the whole 1st chapter, it made the whole thing pretty dawww.
2035010 Your girlfriend is awesome, just thought I would throw that out there.
Truffle shuffle?
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Hahahahahaha!!!
Just speechless.
Sweetie was defianetly determined
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....That is the worst misspelling I've ever seen of that word, and the reason why I feel the need to
point this out... Because almost EVERY freaking story I see that use this word get it WRONG!
Every one always says defiantly! Wrong Wrong Wrong! That is not the right word, the right word
is Definitely.
Anyway... I do like this story. Just... seeing that word messed up always annoys me because I see it all the time!
2316491 Defiantly works there too. Defiant is a real word.
MAXIMUM FOALCON LOLOL
2744029 pedobear approves
Truffle shuffle?
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Skrewtaloo!
LOLZ
“Um, girls… wh-wh-what’s that?”
The other two looked at what Sweetie was suddenly pointing to, and Apple Bloom smiled mischievously knowing what it was… that little devil.
“Well, well, well… looks like someone is havin’ himself a wet dream.”
“A wet dream?” wondered Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle.
“One time when it happened to me, mah sister told me that a wet dream is a dream you have that makes ya feel very aroused outside the dream without ya knowin’.”
They both suddenly got it and continued to look upon my little erection. Suddenly, it started to rise in length and it became bigger as they starred. I was also making tiny little movements as I was resting against the wall.
“I wonder what he’s dreaming about?” said Scootaloo.
“I don’t know,” Apple Bloom responded, “but… Ah think that Ah’m goin’ to help him out a little.”
She chuckled a little as she down in front of me, placed her hoof on my aroused erection and then started to rub it a little to make it bigger. Sweetie began to freak out again as she gasped out of worry.
“Apple Bloom, what are you doing?”
“Quiet, Sweetie Belle,” said Scootaloo, “I wanna see this.”
There were times that I am a very deep sleeper, and unfortunately, this was one of those times. That whole moment as Apple Bloom was just sitting there smiling and constantly rubbing it, even though I just mumbled and moved around a bit, I stayed fast asleep. Damn, how was that even possible for me?
“Check it out, girls… all nice n’ hard.”
Upon seeing her holding my hard, stiff erection, Scootaloo’s eyes lit up with excitement and felt quite impressed for my size. Sweetie Belle however, was blushing red all over her face as she just starred at my impressive sized member.
Then suddenly, Apple Bloom gave her friends a little demonstration as she bent down and started to lightly suck on my dragon member; bobbing her head up and down. Her friends couldn’t believe that she was doing this in front of them… and with no hesitation I might add. Sweetie Belle was starting to feel that same feeling that she had 3 days ago as she kept watching her friend; she definitely wanted a piece of me as well.
Eventually within my sub-consciousness, I began to feel something rather weird, but gosh darn good. I began to wake up as I slowly started to open my eyes and was looking around the room. I slightly leaned more against the wall as I continued to feel something stroking and compressing around my penis; and I even made a little doping smile that made Scootaloo chuckle. Then suddenly, I realized that I was awake and I looked down and saw the sight of Apple Bloom servicing me; it literally left me startled." Spike oh spike what WERE you dreaming hun? Thinking about you know what Trolololololo
I wonder who Spike will like most at the end of this.
My brain is dead and alive so
Things were a little close, buy hey... things worked out fine, what can I say? For sex like that, anything I would pay. Sometimes, a growing dragon just has to lay. Would you like to play?
I can't help but wonder who he was dreaming about.
Might I suggest you put the word "devine" in italics instead of quotes? Like so: