IT'S BACK!

Yay reboot!

Hmm... Title seems familiar...

...bah. That one was Antro. That makes THIS one better by default.

>erotic mating book
All of the gusta

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Wait... Are you saying the old one is gone?

1854885 Yep.

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Unfortunately it was taken down because it contain underage sex; which is silly because the story "Snips, Snails, Sugar and Spice" is still on here. I'm not hating on the story by the way, just making a point.
But anyway, you want the original, go here: http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewuser.php?uid=2902 and enjoy!

Commence re-read.

Now to await the next parts.

1854949this one don't count as underage sex does it

1855075 Only human underage is illegal. All this is, as far as the law is concerned, is just two or more animals mating.

Yay it's back!

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“Hmph, fine,” pouted Apple Bloom as she stood to the side and crossed her arms.

Seems like some "human" part of your story has still survived, better get rid of it before people think your ponies are mutants

need more

Whee. A clopfic on hiatus before the clopping begins. Well, at least the premise is believable, to an extent.

I've never heard of a clopfic on hiatus before. I'm reminded of this:

I like this so far. I'm a little perplexed by the idea that Spike finds Apple Bloom annoying. Where does that come from?

The premise itself is interesting and plausible, especially given Apple Bloom's curiosity.

I don't understand why Apple Bloom was wearing that outfit.

Blueballs my ancient enemy. We meet again.

I like it, Narrative needs work.

YAY =

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Unfortunately it was taken down because it contain underage sex; which is silly because the story "Snips, Snails, Sugar and Spice" is still on here. I'm not hating on the story by the way, just making a point

Uh, who told you that it was taken down because of that?
Sleepless in Rarity - Explicit filly Sweetie Bell.
Forbidden Feelings - Explicit filly Scootaloo.
A Fancy Sweet - Explicit filly Sweetie Bell.
Walk Softly - Explicit foal aged Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon and Snails.
Incest of the Ages - Explicit filly Sweetie Bell.
Two Peas in a Pod - Explicit foal aged Twilight and Shining Armor.
After School Special - Explicit foal aged SB, Pip, DT, SS, Spike and others.
And a hell of a lot more.
Not sure what happened to yours, but if it was taken down, I don't think it was because of underage material. Heck, the 39th highest rating 'Mature/Sex' fic is Valuable Lesson, involving a foal aged Rumble.

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You're right; it was because it was underage human sex... which is completely different. But still, the story that I mention is still on here. But I over it now.

cant awit for the second part!

I started drinking redbull when I was 9...

The question I want to know is this going to be continue or stop completely.
You have one week to reply.lol

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Oh, it's continuing; it's just that since I started over doing a revision of it, I'm holding off of it until I finish my crossover story... in which I'm almost close to finishing. Afterwards, I will continue it. Also, if you didn't see it, look in the description box to see a link to my original humanized version of the story; that to I will continue when I finish my crossover.

1921980 thank you angelshy also u have the original one at least right that's cool.

I could play a drinking game with the amount of times Spike says annoying.

awesome chapter!

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Lol the secret of knowing what she is thinking is so funny. Spike in for teh time of his LIFE

I didn't think Twilight would be the kind of pony to have those kinds of reading material. Oh well, I suppose everyone has some skeletons in their closets. She really should've kept it hidden though.

I decided to give this a read and this was my first reaction based on the formatting of the first chapter without reading a single word of it:

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I'm sure this is old work for you or maybe not but you seriously need to go back and edit this to fix up the formatting.

Anyways, I'll "try" to read this now.

Okay, got through the first chapter and despite the horrible formatting, it wasn't that bad.

The first person perspective is okay but imo you shouldn't stick to it all the time, especially when the focus switches from Spike to another character.

If your doing a full first person style fic, you should switch to third person perspective when switching to another character unless you want us to see that character in first person, which in that case you should put your reader into the mind of the character you've switched to.

EDIT:
Oh wait, you did but the transition was so brief but due to the bad formatting I didn't notice. anyways, onto the next chapter.

This is the best thing ever good job

5486483 sorry, but quit yer bitching.