"Apple Bloom was savoring the feeling of my peins inside her before she even started to ride me." First picture in my mind.media.animevice.com/uploads/2/26148/480436-Pain-funny-face.jpg "Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo were just sitting there leaning against me on both sides with their hands." You meant hooves right?
2158878 No way; i'm afraid they are not main characters in this story. This story is almost finished though; just 2 more short chapters. Sorry to shoot your hopes down.
This whole thing is not bad. Or at least it wasn't until the orgy started up.
This is probably just me, but anal, followed by oral, well... brings up a major continuity error doesn't it? Because it should be followed by vomiting. Scootaloo was quite literally licking Sweetie Belle's shit.
Not only that, I was a little thrown off by the fact that Apple Bloom stuck around. I would have thought each session would have been private. Big assumption I guess.
Then you keep calling Truffle's manhood, 'chubby.' I'm pretty sure no matter how overweight one gets, fat doesn't really build up in one's dick. The fat actually rolls around it.
Too much information? Well, you're the one who wrote this story.
God I feel dirty writing this.
I think I know where this is going to go, and it may be a big assumption, but I assume AB has some big secret she has yet to tell anyone. I'm not saying anything else. But I think it'll prove Spike is mostly blameless.
You know, I hope the two mares realize the kids technically didn't do anything wrong. Stupid and irresponsible, yes, but not wrong. Teach the kids about condoms and the future will be fine.
You know Applejack and Twilight, Spike probably wouldn't have been there if Apple Bloom let him leave. He would have been out of some trouble if that was the case.
Somehow the ending didnt surprise me even a little amount cause i saw this coming since it wouldnt be perfect without something like this happening, right
Great chapter, but it left me with a question. Will AJ and Twi get involved in some orgy with Spike and Truffle later in the story?
Busted!!!
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spike: You're toast.
Commence read.
Well now that's the end of that party time? Right?
Now to go to the other site and read the human version.
ALL of the CMCs?
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That is all.
"Apple Bloom was savoring the feeling of my peins inside her before she even started to ride me."
First picture in my mind.media.animevice.com/uploads/2/26148/480436-Pain-funny-face.jpg
"Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo were just sitting there leaning against me on both sides with their hands." You meant hooves right?
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That's right; next chapter... confession time!
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No way; i'm afraid they are not main characters in this story. This story is almost finished though; just 2 more short chapters. Sorry to shoot your hopes down.
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It's okay, I had just dreamed the impossible, which happens all the time, trust me. It's still a good story, and quite well written, too.
I REGERET NOTHING.
damn i wuld be out that windo like a bomb went of
shit
and its funny because scoots was just totily inocent
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aw, I was hoping Spike would get to find out why Twilight keeps length of rope in her bedroom
This whole thing is not bad. Or at least it wasn't until the orgy started up.
This is probably just me, but anal, followed by oral, well... brings up a major continuity error doesn't it? Because it should be followed by vomiting. Scootaloo was quite literally licking Sweetie Belle's shit.
Not only that, I was a little thrown off by the fact that Apple Bloom stuck around. I would have thought each session would have been private. Big assumption I guess.
Then you keep calling Truffle's manhood, 'chubby.' I'm pretty sure no matter how overweight one gets, fat doesn't really build up in one's dick. The fat actually rolls around it.
Too much information? Well, you're the one who wrote this story.
God I feel dirty writing this.
I think I know where this is going to go, and it may be a big assumption, but I assume AB has some big secret she has yet to tell anyone. I'm not saying anything else. But I think it'll prove Spike is mostly blameless.
You know, I hope the two mares realize the kids technically didn't do anything wrong. Stupid and irresponsible, yes, but not wrong. Teach the kids about condoms and the future will be fine.
Aw shit, nigga, les DO DIS
The ponies arrive at the barn, get in and what happens then?
SHIT JUST GOT REAL AND HIT THE FAN PRETTY HARD
Doesn't matter; had sex
you are fucked spike (pun included)
TWILIGHT AND APPLEJACK ARE GONNA FUCKING PUNISH THEM. as in .............. RAPE
My hat of evil is my presence
ooooppps locked the door with another easily accessible entrance open again
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You know Applejack and Twilight, Spike probably wouldn't have been there if Apple Bloom let him leave. He would have been out of some trouble if that was the case.
Somehow the ending didnt surprise me even a little amount cause i saw this coming since it wouldnt be perfect without something like this happening, right
Artwork is just a white square
*Sees title chapter*. Ut-Oh, sh*t's about to go down.
*Reads story*
Yup. Sh*t indeed when down, and now everyone's in trouble...
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I'm sure they will have some really convincing arugement, though...
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BTW, that image at the end is now a dead link. Is this the image you originally posted?
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the art at the end doesn't show