Your story was...hum....really fast, But its was too really great,

i give you some mustache my dear.

Pretty good, a few little tiny things that shouldn't be a problem, but otherwise this has great potential
(side note: I am trying to start writing a story of my own, somewhat of a coincidence )

1753593 Can you tell what those small things were. You know I want to fix them.

1753451 It's just how I write I am a speed demon and will probably end this story soon or bring my ideas that I think would be neat into it.

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Awwwww sad ending or good ending???? i totally want to see the next chapter,

1753802 What only two chapters How about ten that's a good number.

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ten chapter...................omg omg omg DO IT NOW!!!!!!!!!!.......i mean..yea! ten chapter, i really want to see it

by the way, thx for the following

1753843 I follow anyone who faves my story or watches me it's my policy

1753861

Nice policy.......i think i will do that too.........*follow you*

to the people who are faving my story also thumbs it up so it gets more views

A bit fast. Missed a few places where some commas should be, but otherwise, I like the story. First Changeling-On-Earth story I've seen so far, and I'm liking it!

Very nice fic.

1753643 Ok first things first:

which I sadly rarely get

I personally would put this as "which I, sadly, rarely get."
next dingie:

do you not get very much guests?

change the much to many including in the sentence that Tyler responds with after Chrysalis asks him about his number of guests
that's it so other than those few teency weencie itty bitty dingle dangles, its a pretty damn fine fic. NOW OFF TO ADVENTURE

Curious stat, must of this fic, jump strait up, to the human and the pony bedding, but you want things to be interesting, right? Original, and a refreshing, new start, I like it.
Did you planning on them returning to Equestria? It will be interesting seeing him as the new Changeling King and try to convince the princess to end the exile of Chrysalis. Also, did she will return to her human form or he will gain a changeling form further in the story? That could be interesting to.

Je, I can imagine Candace, thinking of a way to get back at her using Tyler

Not a bad story, really isn't and I was enjoying it thoroughly up until it got to the whole 'slaughtered all my children' part. I can't enjoy stories where Celestia is evil. I'm a bigger fan of Luna but that doesn't mean I hate Celestia or like to see her cause misery.

1755847 trust me i will thoroughly explain that moment later on and something might happen to change Celestia in to a good character. ;)

1754885 I don't like my characters sitting and smelling the flowers so I write fast it's my method and although it's like a toddler hopped up on energy drinks and caffeine it seems to work out for me.

1754885
Why not just keep him human, and her as a changling?

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To break the routine, you now, think upside the chimney…or it was inside the chimney?…Nah that can't be, because that will be thinking inside the house, and the objective is to think upside the house, you now, do something new.
I know, they already do that, but I bet he can come up with something new, I can feel it.

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Maybe, maybe not. Even the "good" reasons for ransformation could ruin a romance. The appeal of an interspecies romance is that both members of the couple could fall in love with each other despite being different species. Humanization, or the human changing just cheepens the romance.
Plus, I personally think that if transformations have to happen they should happen at the beggining. That way there won't be a giant F-U to the readers that don'tlike that when a story gets ruined for them. I am one of these people.

1759561 i'm going to end if for both of you here because there is no way in fucking hell Tyler is ever and i mean fucking ever changing species unless there is a huge reason behind it. So in other words until I finish or tell you i'm going to introduce that element we can leave the answer at hell no.

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This news makes me happy. Thank you for letting me know.

Good luck with all of your endeavors, and looking foward to more of the story.

1759673 oh I'm almost done chapter 2 so it should be out later tonight or tomorrow.

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Sweet.

I found out that I slept in till so I got to actually prepare myself a proper breakfast instead of pop tarts.

Are you missing a word?

Her face changed to one of bitterness. “She said she would be kind to us so I surrendered for my children’s sake. That is when she separated me from my children. She said ‘for me to live my children must die.’

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that was a little bit cruel.

Only read this chapter, and I already love it.
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It felt way too rushed, and the shock one would have to experience by seeing a monster in your home all of the sudden was portrayed unrealistically.

The main character goes a bit too much along with the flow; it makes him feel more like a one-dimensional plot device rather than an actual person.

Message me, there's some things I must address, but cannot at the moment.

This has potential in the story but the actual thing was WAY too rushed. I also doubt that a human would react to Chrysalis in that way. It would be more like this. "AHHH WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU?" or something along them lines

Yes wonderful

well, tis interesting

So fast, this story is way to fast pased its crazy

This is poopy shit sausage.
fuckin` NITROFUELED

So this was interesting. I like the premise, but pacing is suffering here. The contrivance factor meter is also very high.

Well, let's see what the next chapter holds...