Sorry about the shorter length but I have a massive headache and strep-throat so I was sick while I wrote this. I tried to do what you asked which was slow down the pacing, detail everything more, and have more things happen at Tyler's workplaces.
1794956 I want to tell you that honestly this story was in several days of development. The first chapter and second chapter were already wrote out. But you see when Tyler meets Chrysalis she was African american and middle aged. This was also going to be an anthro story instead of a more traditional view of her being in her normal form. Chapter 2 was scrapped altogether because it leaded straight into sex and I didn't think that was an intelligent thought for the story. So you see this story took a damn long time to create and make as good as I got it so far. It is quite a funny story though about the situation I was in that influenced this story.
Sorry about the shorter length but I have a massive headache and strep-throat so I was sick while I wrote this. I tried to do what you asked which was slow down the pacing, detail everything more, and have more things happen at Tyler's workplaces.
Chryssie playing video game......EPIC!!!!!
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Here's a pic I found hope you enjoy.
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1794891 http://daughter-of-fantasy.deviantart.com/art/Evil-friends-playing-321442280 there's the link
1794904
thank you, are you still sick?
1794918 Yep sorry about that.
1794927 why are you sorry
1794934 That I wrote that chapter while I was sick it probably wasn't on par with my other chapters.
1794939 is still a great chapter, by the way, if you need a proof reader or something like that you can alway ask me,
1794956 I want to tell you that honestly this story was in several days of development. The first chapter and second chapter were already wrote out. But you see when Tyler meets Chrysalis she was African american and middle aged. This was also going to be an anthro story instead of a more traditional view of her being in her normal form. Chapter 2 was scrapped altogether because it leaded straight into sex and I didn't think that was an intelligent thought for the story. So you see this story took a damn long time to create and make as good as I got it so far. It is quite a funny story though about the situation I was in that influenced this story.
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1807409 fuck I'll fix that
Borderlands 2 is best game. Do you play?
1804694 sounds about right.