Fluttershy might feel better in time, after all it was just caused by a particularly scary nightmare. Let's just hope Twilight doesn't find out about it.
Don't sweat it, the thing that got me into Pony Rule 34 was actually the idea of Fluttershy wetting the bed. The first time I tried clopping I felt kinda weird thinking about colorful ponies, but then a week later I was wondering if there was any material based on my fetish, silly me couldn't resist searching for pony pee and I came across this fantastic gem: Fluttershy Bedwetting Anonymous Without this short fic from an anonymous brony, I wouldn't be writing this today. Hell, you could think of this chapter (2) as a letter of admiration to the writer of this delicious fic. It is pure wingboner.
Also, I'm glad that my fic is living up to its "comedy" tag.
In only 10 hours my second chapter has 45.8% of the views the first has, you guys are amazing! Thank you to all my returning readers
.127716 Thanks for watching, knowing I have at least 35 people anticipating the next chapter really pushes me to write . This is my first attempt at writing anything long or with any type of plot. Admittedly this fanfiction is the longest thing I have ever written in my life. Imagine bringing it up front of a casual group of friends, "I once wrote a 24 page thesis paper on rock formations," "Well I wrote a 10,000 word, sexually explicit My Little Pony romance story in which the main character wants to drink her friend's pee."
I sude hope (propably in vain) that Twi goes on to 'unlock' the sex-theme with at least some of her friends before causing irrepairible damage. It also would do her some good to find out that she is causing (to put it mildly) discomfort for her friend (even crush) by her 'gift'. Even if so, Flutters must not know that Twi knows. I guess she only did not die on the spot from shame and embarassement during the flashback because she was physically unable to do so willingly. I'd hate to see her have to put up with that again more than nessecary..
Jup, feedback and information is in dire need here since left on her own she is obviously on a dangerous path here (and not just at the beginning of it too..) *sigh* I'm a Twi-fan but even in the original series she has a tendency to just ..miss hugely significant variables in her considerations sometimes.. Given the possibilities of fiction, you don't even need to go far off the char to wreak major diseaster.. Still- tracked and keep them coming. Well written, described in loving detail. 5 / 5 from me
"bounces in" hey this kinky pie here! I want to say that this was a super awesome story. I mean at the first part when they twi had her flashback i was like awww poor flutters now i wanna huggle her! But when twi was stealing fluttershy's urine i was like "gadp" that big meanie! Everypony likes to pee when they wake up! But the n when she clopped with it i had to clop yo cuz it was sexy! And then! When twi gave flutters her own urine i was like "awww such a good friend :) but then when flutterahy had the nightmare i was alll daww i wanna hug her again!! But overall it was a sexy awesome story!!! You should definetly write more stories and maybe if you want we can do a story trade! I mean that would be so awesome!! (as dashie would say) Anyway imma read part three later! Talk to you then! "bounces off" la la la la
As for the story, it was once again well written and everything, but piss really isn't my thing and that's the fixation. Oh well, it doesn't stop the story from being good.
I have to say this is an excellent story and I've enjoyed every minute of it so far, but the picture kinda killed it for me :P I'm new here so I don't know if stating my opinion will ascertain negative consequences like on other blogging sites
Not a fan of the explicit content, but it's good to know I'm not the only one who writes about Fluttershy wetting herself. (Even though this story isn't quite my style) I just unpublished the recent Fluttershy chapter of my story when it got an extra five dislikes because of it
Don't forget to leave a comment ^_^
5 stars!
Twilight Sparkle: has the brain of a genius, but lacks common sense. Seriously she's going to get into trouble for this.
Twilight is such an idiot.
>Hippos are the most dangerous animals on Earth
>Says they're gentle
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Thanks =p. The guy who gave me a 0.5 star kinda killed my average.
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Indeed.
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Thanks again for prereading!
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>reading a My Little Pony fanfic
>expects author to portray animals in same way they act in real life
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Well, it was a bad joke. I'M certainly not laughing.
126744 Let's see what happens to Twilight. I got a feeling she's going to do this spell of transferring her pee to ALL her friends.
Twi and Spike eh? CHALLENGE ACCEPTED.
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Awwww poor fluttershy it makes me sad. U better make her happy or I will swallow your soul my good sir.
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oh well... keep up the good work my good sir.
"It tasted as nature herself was orgasming inside of Twilight’s mouth."
made me laugh so hard
But in all seriousness...good work. Ive never been so happy about Fluttershy wetting herself...that sounded better in my head huh?
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Was more of just a play with the irony of the universe, not something to laugh at.
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Twilight sure has a funny way of bonding with her friends.
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DAT TWILIGHT. I simply had to edit it into a bonus scene (takes place before this fic of course): too bad Twilight never sent the letter
Fluttershy might feel better in time, after all it was just caused by a particularly scary nightmare. Let's just hope Twilight doesn't find out about it.
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Don't sweat it, the thing that got me into Pony Rule 34 was actually the idea of Fluttershy wetting the bed. The first time I tried clopping I felt kinda weird thinking about colorful ponies, but then a week later I was wondering if there was any material based on my fetish, silly me couldn't resist searching for pony pee and I came across this fantastic gem: Fluttershy Bedwetting Anonymous Without this short fic from an anonymous brony, I wouldn't be writing this today. Hell, you could think of this chapter (2) as a letter of admiration to the writer of this delicious fic. It is pure wingboner.
Also, I'm glad that my fic is living up to its "comedy" tag.
... ... ... *silently hits the tracking checkbox*
In only 10 hours my second chapter has 45.8% of the views the first has, you guys are amazing! Thank you to all my returning readers
.127716
Thanks for watching, knowing I have at least 35 people anticipating the next chapter really pushes me to write . This is my first attempt at writing anything long or with any type of plot. Admittedly this fanfiction is the longest thing I have ever written in my life. Imagine bringing it up front of a casual group of friends, "I once wrote a 24 page thesis paper on rock formations," "Well I wrote a 10,000 word, sexually explicit My Little Pony romance story in which the main character wants to drink her friend's pee."
Heh, so much for being noble with her new found spell.
Also, poor fluttershy
This is like... really well written.
this is wonderful
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My eyes weren't watering when I wrote Fluttershy's nightmare. Nope.
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Thanks, I'll try my best to keep the writing quality up
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I don't think it was very wonderful for poor Fluttershy Twilight on the other hand...
I sude hope (propably in vain) that Twi goes on to 'unlock' the sex-theme with at least some of her friends before causing irrepairible damage.
It also would do her some good to find out that she is causing (to put it mildly) discomfort for her friend (even crush) by her 'gift'.
Even if so, Flutters must not know that Twi knows. I guess she only did not die on the spot from shame and embarassement during the flashback because she was physically unable to do so willingly. I'd hate to see her have to put up with that again more than nessecary..
Jup, feedback and information is in dire need here since left on her own she is obviously on a dangerous path here (and not just at the beginning of it too..)
*sigh* I'm a Twi-fan but even in the original series she has a tendency to just ..miss hugely significant variables in her considerations sometimes.. Given the possibilities of fiction, you don't even need to go far off the char to wreak major diseaster..
Still- tracked and keep them coming. Well written, described in loving detail. 5 / 5 from me
My money.
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Take it all.
"bounces in" hey this kinky pie here! I want to say that this was a super awesome story. I mean at the first part when they twi had her flashback i was like awww poor flutters now i wanna huggle her! But when twi was stealing fluttershy's urine i was like "gadp" that big meanie! Everypony likes to pee when they wake up! But the n when she clopped with it i had to clop yo cuz it was sexy! And then! When twi gave flutters her own urine i was like "awww such a good friend :) but then when flutterahy had the nightmare i was alll daww i wanna hug her again!! But overall it was a sexy awesome story!!! You should definetly write more stories and maybe if you want we can do a story trade! I mean that would be so awesome!! (as dashie would say) Anyway imma read part three later! Talk to you then! "bounces off" la la la la
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You should tell your friends some time, then take pictures of their reactions!
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This is probably the best comment ever.
As for the story, it was once again well written and everything, but piss really isn't my thing and that's the fixation. Oh well, it doesn't stop the story from being good.
I have to say this is an excellent story and I've enjoyed every minute of it so far, but the picture kinda killed it for me :P
I'm new here so I don't know if stating my opinion will ascertain negative consequences like on other blogging sites
Amazing. This is one of the most well written (and hottest) clopfics i have ever read. Keep up the great work! Poor Fluttershy.
-John
" She began to kneed at her dripping genitals"
*knead
Not a fan of the explicit content, but it's good to know I'm not the only one who writes about Fluttershy wetting herself. (Even though this story isn't quite my style) I just unpublished the recent Fluttershy chapter of my story when it got an extra five dislikes because of it
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That's what the tags are for, you knew what you were doing