1796121 Well, your the title has VIP in it and RIP is an easy pun, so I wanted to use it, but I had no idea what the second half was gonna be, so I just put Spitfire there and... Good Faust, I don't even know what I'M saying anymore.
Shadowflash, not bad. Not bad at all. Just a minor spelling error or two.
"Uhg!... Theyneve--" I saw a lavender unicorn jump at my right, and upon seeing me, she stopped talking. I believe you mean 'The' and 'nerve' (or they never)
That is all. But otherwise, nice chapter, and I'm waiting for the next one.
I thought it was really good. The story establishing the setting was something that a lot of other clopfics skip over but for this is worked perfectly. In my opinion the clop was fantastic, keep up the great work!
LOL, leave it to the crazier Bronies to freak out everyone's favorite adorkable nerd D'x Jeebus, that's my only fear of having this world exist, those people, if you catch my drift.
And you kept your word! Thanks so much!
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(Joke) Alt. Titles: HIE Fanfic an RIP Spitfire
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I understand what HIE stands for... But, RIP?
Hrm... Confused. Do elaborate.
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Now people are slapping SPITFIRE onto HIE fics. And I wanted to use RIP, but I didn't know how to.
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Not following.
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Well, your the title has VIP in it and RIP is an easy pun, so I wanted to use it, but I had no idea what the second half was gonna be, so I just put Spitfire there and... Good Faust, I don't even know what I'M saying anymore.
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I was mostly trying to figure out what RIP meant. Wasn't sure if it was 'Rest in Peace'.
No worries, one more chapter afterwards. XD
ummmmmm i think my italics broke....
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Really? Might be a coding error.
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My bad. Was my fault. Fixed!
1796232 yea for me the whole latter half is italicized.... whelp whatever!
1796242 ahhhh okay its fixed! thanks!
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When you say one more chapter do you mean that's it for the story or that you
already have one more almost done?
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One more chapter will be up... This weekend I hope. I gotta update a few more fics, first.
After watching the leaked episode, I found this and I've gotta say, I'm in love with spitfire!
The Irish whiskey demands more
Shadowflash, not bad. Not bad at all. Just a minor spelling error or two.
"Uhg!... They neve--" I saw a lavender unicorn jump at my right, and upon seeing me, she stopped talking.
I believe you mean 'The' and 'nerve' (or they never)
That is all. But otherwise, nice chapter, and I'm waiting for the next one.
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It was a cut off, I believe. As in she was about to speak 'They never leave me alone!'
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All The Cage
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Ah the guy from Ghost Rider, I see
Ah, yes.
This.
Yay ^^
I thought it was really good. The story establishing the setting was something that a lot of other clopfics skip over but for this is worked perfectly. In my opinion the clop was fantastic, keep up the great work!
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Sorry!
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I'll get around to it soon enough. Promise.
it's funny becuase my name is actually Anthony (no joke)
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As a certain stick figure would say:
"Close enough."
I'm looking forward to reading a story about a human dating Spitfire now.
Ha! I can see it now! Tim Horton and Pinkie Pie go into business together! Instant Success!
LOL, leave it to the crazier Bronies to freak out everyone's favorite adorkable nerd D'x
Jeebus, that's my only fear of having this world exist, those people, if you catch my drift.
Nice job!