Mwa-ha-ha! Who would have thought i'd guess the Pregnancy revealed scene? I must be turning psychotic... or was it psychic? Great chapter with great highlights, the herd idea made already awesome story even more interesting and Celly and her drunken shenaningans were awesome. All i can say is.... more! Mooooar!
Well Fluttershy and Luna's relationship has been foreshadowed forever but glad to see it finally confirmed.
You know, the thing looming with Rover and whatever it is that's possessing him brings up a point that probably should have been discussed earlier.
Twilight as the Element of Magic is a guardian of Equestria and risks her life in its defense on a regular basis. Just like when marrying a cop, firefighter, solider etc. the girls really should have had a serious discussion about the kind of danger Twilight faces and the stress they'll face worrying about her as a result and how they plan to cope. This applies especially to Spitfire since as military she probably always expected to be on the other side of this kind of conversation. But as a rule the kind of things the Elements of Harmony go up against the military can't usually handle. Heck, they're things Celestia can't usually handle.
Actually in an "All Hands on Deck" kind of disaster where Celestia has to put everyone at her disposal on it. Trixie and Cheerilee face the prospect of losing both Twilight Sparkle and Spitfire.
“Are you all sure about this?” Twilight asked. “I mean, I'm not exactly what most ponies think of when they hear the words 'leadership material'.”
You know, aside from the fact that she runs Winter Wrap Up, regularly leads the Elements of Harmony, is placed in positions of high responsibility by Princess Celestia among other things. Nope...not leadership material at all.
Would pregnancy tests be able to show a positive with any degree of accuracy at this point? I mean, it's only been a day or two since Cheery got knocked up. I know it's kind of a moot point, since I am pretty sure Celestia checked, but it kind of stuck out to me.
i have the fear that the villan in the story will make it worse and dont rise the quality of the fic because this fic don´´t actual need a villan in his plot
Well this was a great chapter all around. Here's hoping Twilight's herd can handle whatever it is Rover has planned involving the CMC (though I'm guessing AJ and Rarity will have something to say about their little sisters getting kidnapped).
As for Cheerilee's "development" I think I'm most looking forward to seeing Twi's family's reaction, especially Cadence and Shining Armor:
SA: You mean Twiley has been in a relationship with four mares for a month and she ALREADY GOT ONE PREGNANT? She even beat us.
Cadence: *With a shark-like grin* That's hot
FInally, not sure which moment killed my kidneys more: Celestia carrying Twilight's picture around at all times or Celestia using her winnings to start a college fund for Twilight kids (basically her surrogate grand kids).
1799608 i probaby should include some hetero relationships in this thing to balanceo ut all this estrogen... 1799657 It took me a few minutes to come up with that one. 1799668 Sober Twilight respectfully disagrees. 1799685 I hope that future installments will change your mind on this. it will bear some relevance to the main plot, and hopefully, there'll be plenty of herd shenanigans to satisfy you.
1799734 Thank you kindly. 1799794 It took me a few minutes to come up with that one. 1799799 The line between them blurs sometimes, doesn't it? 1800656 Like most converations that serious, it may very well wait until the last second. 1801008 And she has the modesty to go along with it. 1802052 I think I recal some of those can tell that quickly, but even if they don't, the magically aided ones could cover that eventuality. 18021391803783 Like I said to another, I hope that future chapters will change your feelings on that matter. 1802359 Yeah, Twilight's family may prove to be the most fun to write. 1802710 Glad you liked that pun. It's my favorite so far. 1804160 Thank you. I hope it won't disappoint. 1804935 Probably because Meatloaf is awesome?
Ah Trollestia strikes again! Just a question though have you ever thought of doing a story explaining how Celestia got her disguise? I think that would make an interesting story.
This chapter was so funny I had to put down my kindle fire and hold my sides for a moment. You truly are a captivating author and I can't wait to read your other stories!
“But Twilight said that it was just a test run of the spell!” Spitfire viciously whispered at the Diarch. “She said that she had cast it in a way so that this couldn't happen!” Celestia beamed at the distraught mare. “I'm sure she did, but did she properly compensate for her, ah, level of power?” She took another sip, then said, “Twilight is a very thoughtful pony, and is very meticulous, especially when it comes to magic; but I have had to remind her several times to ah, carry the one, as it were, especially since she became the bearer of the Element of Magic.”
He scratched his head as he read the label. “Home Pregnancy Test?” He shrugged his shoulders. “Ah, well. If it's a test, I'm sure Twilight will pass it with flying colors.”
I can imagine a younger Twilight actually making this mistake.
going after the CMC never works out well. Just ask chrysalis, she was driven half mad just for the attempt. I think Rover is going to end up being nutered by an attempt to become cutie mark vets by mistake lol.
Hm. Something to read
And there goes Cheerilee's Mother...
"a Sword of Dam Oakleaves!" I see what you did there
Drunk celestia is best celestia!
Good as usually, except the nameless evil subplot seems kinda pointless. The story is good enough just concentrating on Twilight and herd's dynamics.
1799657 It was quite nice. Took me a second to realize that they had to be smashed together
Mwa-ha-ha! Who would have thought i'd guess the Pregnancy revealed scene? I must be turning psychotic... or was it psychic?
Great chapter with great highlights, the herd idea made already awesome story even more interesting and Celly and her drunken shenaningans were awesome.
All i can say is.... more! Mooooar!
Need moar Celestia feels!
A herd hmm?
1799794
Oooooooooooh.
Well Fluttershy and Luna's relationship has been foreshadowed forever but glad to see it finally confirmed.
You know, the thing looming with Rover and whatever it is that's possessing him brings up a point that probably should have been discussed earlier.
Twilight as the Element of Magic is a guardian of Equestria and risks her life in its defense on a regular basis. Just like when marrying a cop, firefighter, solider etc. the girls really should have had a serious discussion about the kind of danger Twilight faces and the stress they'll face worrying about her as a result and how they plan to cope. This applies especially to Spitfire since as military she probably always expected to be on the other side of this kind of conversation. But as a rule the kind of things the Elements of Harmony go up against the military can't usually handle. Heck, they're things Celestia can't usually handle.
Actually in an "All Hands on Deck" kind of disaster where Celestia has to put everyone at her disposal on it. Trixie and Cheerilee face the prospect of losing both Twilight Sparkle and Spitfire.
You know, aside from the fact that she runs Winter Wrap Up, regularly leads the Elements of Harmony, is placed in positions of high responsibility by Princess Celestia among other things. Nope...not leadership material at all.
Would pregnancy tests be able to show a positive with any degree of accuracy at this point? I mean, it's only been a day or two since Cheery got knocked up. I know it's kind of a moot point, since I am pretty sure Celestia checked, but it kind of stuck out to me.
i have the fear that the villan in the story will make it worse and dont rise the quality of the fic
because this fic don´´t actual need a villan in his plot
Well this was a great chapter all around. Here's hoping Twilight's herd can handle whatever it is Rover has planned involving the CMC (though I'm guessing AJ and Rarity will have something to say about their little sisters getting kidnapped).
As for Cheerilee's "development" I think I'm most looking forward to seeing Twi's family's reaction, especially Cadence and Shining Armor:
SA: You mean Twiley has been in a relationship with four mares for a month and she ALREADY GOT ONE PREGNANT? She even beat us.
Cadence: *With a shark-like grin* That's hot
FInally, not sure which moment killed my kidneys more: Celestia carrying Twilight's picture around at all times or Celestia using her winnings to start a college fund for Twilight kids (basically her surrogate grand kids).
WHY CAN'T I HOLD ALL THESE FEELS!?!?!
Merry Christmas; Happy Hanukkah; Wa `alaykumu s-salāmu wa rahmatu l-lāhi wa barakātuh; Have a good Tuesday December 25th.
I absolutely facehoofed at the sword of Dam Oakleaves and couldn't stop giggling so awesome job there.
Obligatory yay more stories using herds , so if Twilight is the herd's Stallion, who's the lead mare?
1799685
Gotta say I agree. Really enjoying the story, but the evil subplot just seems superfluous and tacked on.
1802139 1803783 Whenever you think something like that: Trust the Author. It probably will become a hilarious anticlimax.
hope so....but in the end it will Discord
How come each time I look at this title, I suddenly hear Meatloaf singing?
"Oh, I would do anything for love
But I won't do that."
1799608
i probaby should include some hetero relationships in this thing to balanceo ut all this estrogen...
1799657
It took me a few minutes to come up with that one.
1799668
Sober Twilight respectfully disagrees.
1799685
I hope that future installments will change your mind on this. it will bear some relevance to the main plot, and hopefully, there'll be plenty of herd shenanigans to satisfy you.
1806742
Up to you.
1799734
Thank you kindly.
1799794
It took me a few minutes to come up with that one.
1799799
The line between them blurs sometimes, doesn't it?
1800656
Like most converations that serious, it may very well wait until the last second.
1801008
And she has the modesty to go along with it.
1802052
I think I recal some of those can tell that quickly, but even if they don't, the magically aided ones could cover that eventuality.
1802139 1803783
Like I said to another, I hope that future chapters will change your feelings on that matter.
1802359
Yeah, Twilight's family may prove to be the most fun to write.
1802710
Glad you liked that pun. It's my favorite so far.
1804160
Thank you. I hope it won't disappoint.
1804935
Probably because Meatloaf is awesome?
1806742
The solution to THAT issue is obvious.
1806984
Indeed he is!
You never stop amazing me wrabbit
Seriously you need to stop it..... Nah I just kidding just keep doing what you doing. it works
1807153
You try getting her to drink.
1807534
Truly a bat from Hell.
1807959
Thank you kindly.
1836636
My Faithful Student Twilight Sparkle. Try the screwdriver. It's delicious.
Your mentor. Princess Celestia.
Peer pressure level: Princess.
1836636
Hmmm, wonder if you will do anything relating to a Monster being loose?
I loved the first story, and this one's looking good, too.
Also, I think Rover's gone a little crazy.
Ah Trollestia strikes again!
Just a question though have you ever thought of doing a story explaining how Celestia got her disguise? I think that would make an interesting story.
Even MOAR Trollestia! Seriously, she's being hilarious. I especially like how she got in on the betting lol. As for the herd idea:
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Alright, things are getting interesting . Cheers is with child and Rover's out being mysterious and dastardly .
This chapter was so funny I had to put down my kindle fire and hold my sides for a moment. You truly are a captivating author and I can't wait to read your other stories!
1837145. What?
1859546 Read Sunny Skies All Day Long by PhantomFox. That should be plenty explanation.
GGRRrr
[Wrabbit you clever bastard. Putting a reference of "Sunny Skies All Day Long" made me cheer with joy.]
with the way twilight freaked out, you'd think 'she' was the one who got pregnant XD
also, 'Celestia rump shake = Twilight fainting spell' = Epic stuff XD
Drunk Celestia is best Celestia.
The Royal Rump shake part was epic, lolz.
Mare, meet floor; floor, meet mare. It's been awhile
Honestly, the most shocking thing to me in this chapter was the inebriated Celestia.
Not bad, though.
Common are you kidding me Twilight?
I can imagine a younger Twilight actually making this mistake.
going after the CMC never works out well. Just ask chrysalis, she was driven half mad just for the attempt. I think Rover is going to end up being nutered by an attempt to become cutie mark vets by mistake lol.