Thank you for taking my suggestion, friendo! Now you need to do one with Starlight, please! My boner demands it!

you're winner

Are you buy chanse a fan of Enigmaticotaku? I feel like this iz something he'd lov.

I wish I could give this master shit work a thumbs up and down.

I'm fappin' to this.

Before this comment gets removed, let me say that you're a horrendous writer. And if you seriously can't take that criticism because of your immature feelings, then you don't belong here. I don't even really care if it's just bad on purpose.

This have potesial to be good.

To do that this is what you have to do.

1: Fix spelling. Just the disciption is a pain to read already.

2: fix grammar. Punctuation and capitalization is key.

A good tip is to look at how other writers on this site does it and work from that.

And even if you dont follow these tips so good luck anyway.

Cander pls bea n episoud with maud pei?

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Fix spelling

potesial

disciption

I don't think you should go around giving advice if you can't even follow it yourself.

7354714 Never caimd I could.

It's like you're trying to write the "My Immortal" of the MLP Universe.

Good god its like Tom goes to ponyvile all over again

boobs/10 I cum cry every time

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its ok to be jelous, youll get ther one day. Juts kep at it and youll get beter.