I try not to judge, but already looking at the length of the chapters and the like dislike ratio, I find it very hard.

Just, look, either practice a LOT more, take an example from someone else, or just ask someone for help.
I don't have time or patience to write something myself, but if you do, go on, give it a try.

I read a single chapter and already I wish to apologize to everyone else that I’ve shamed with a nasty review.

This is the Special Olympics of fan fiction. You make My Immortal look like Hemingway. If I had one wish available, granted by an all-powerful genie, I’d use it to travel back in time to when you were considering “writing” and strike you on the temple with an Amazon-bought prop katana.

It’s not good, is what I’m trying to convey.

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You know, I'm starting to get a feeling that you get a kick out of leaving rude comments on fics that are, one way or the other, not to most people's liking 😕

That's all the comments I've seen from you 🤣

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You’d be absolutely correct in that assumption. This one is different, though; it’s deliberately bad. You don’t honestly think this fic is meant to be taken seriously, do you?

I like to imagine this entire story was made by runforthecube, and in my dreams, I'm hoping he'll one day read this masterpiece out loud for all the world to hear.

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I don't. I think this is great trolling, though. Especially this flippin' badass comeback I found scrolling through comments.

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He’s a fun guy, I agree. And I’m just enjoying talking shit toward someone I know is getting a laugh out of it.