Yay! A new chapter! A bit too much background story compared to story progress though. Pushing that aside, I really hope that things doesn't just return to normal and he just accepts her back into his life, just like that. There needs to be at least 2 or 3 chapters of depression, self pity and feels.
nice! im glad you're continuing the story! I'm loving the side story about how he first meets celestia, its very interesting. I understand what you meant that the chapter was uneventful, but it was still engaging.
Glad to see another chapter for the story. I'll just say that the background felt like it could use a little tightening up to hit the same points. I did enjoy the way you wrote the drugged perspective, especially the last scene with the "angel"
Well its getting late, guess I better... *Notices TMM updated* ...read the fuck out of this chapter! *does just that* Damn. It's over.
Drugged up me is best me. Hope to see a little more high me next chapter, its fun to read. Eagerly await the talk with Celestia. Continue writing you magnificent bastard!
3414834 But do we really need that? I mean after going through all of that heartache forgiveness and compromise wouldn't be that far away given the circumstance, and besides we know they will get back together so why drag it out?
3415005 Because they left on bad terms and he then goes on to hear about her going out with someone else. So far he have not really expressed any real rage and anger, only hinted at it and pushed it away.
[ 2nd Person fic starring YOU and PRINCESS CELESTIA ]
Ah! Ha ha... Well judge me if you want, we all die some day. I intend to deserve it. I think that would pretty much sum up my trip to Equestria.
It would be cool to hear about other people on this site ending up in Equestria. Written by other people of course. Everyone knows how self stories of an Equestria trip end up...
Yeah, not good to say the least.
Out in the field there is a saying, and I apologize ahead of time for the language, "9 out of 10 people don't realize how fucked they are until they find out that there is no toilet paper." I believe that is one of the truest statements ever issued by the military.
I think most of the people here, on this site, would not last nearly as long as they think they would.... heh heh heh.
Don't be afraid of the sex tag.
Sounds good! Have you ever helped with horse breeding? It is vile, smelly, disgusting and a down right mood killer. I have been at autopsies that were more "enjoyable" to be at than helping on the ranch with horse breeding...
It's not solely a clopfic, but it does contain clop at some points.
Damn, I was hoping for something decent.
If you come out with a redacted version, I think I would like to read it.
3415285 Are you threatening him with site statistics? Really? This is just plain rude and unacceptable behavior. You don't know how much time he has. You don't know why his updates take so long. All you know is how to bitch about something you are giving nothing in return for. Yes, it can be frustrating to not see the next chapter in a few months but how do you think this gives you the right to step forward like this? What makes you think you have the right to file such demands?
I am going to unfavourite and downvote all of your stories now I have read. Not because they are bad, but because I don't like your attitude. See? I can do that, too: make up my own silly standards and judge by them who deserves an upvote and who does not. And because just doing so quietly is not enough, I am rubbing it into your face, too. Just like you did.
3415285 Oh ho! Oh ho ho ho ho! So I'm the dick now?
I work most of the week, pay the bills, go out and "somehow" still manage to update my stories frequently.
Well ain't you just a peach. You want an "I have a cushy life and that gives me the right to bitch and moan about others' update schedules" medal for that? If you think that would be a good excuse not to write a story, let me give you a little bit of a reality check: some of us work 7 to 5 and have a nocturnal Civil Engineering university course on top of that. Some of us go out at 6AM and aren't back home until 10:30PM, if not even later. The time those guys aren't working without a chance to so much as open up a text editor, they're studying their asses off. Others, like the legendary author of Article 2, got to the point where they typed three or four words a day to keep the story rolling. Don't you dare pretend to know the author's personal life to say whether they're lazing off or not; you have it really easy, pal. Besides, from what I've seen, your writing drive is absolutely fucking nuts. Using it as a standard for the site is unfair at the mildest.
So do us all a favor: get off your high horse and go learn something about reader loyalty, you arrogant git. If you wanna unfave for such a crappy reason, the exit's right over there at the red X button. Don't let the door hit your ass on the way out and don't go running your mouth when people call you out on your bullshit.
Apologies if my opinion bothered you, for I'm neither an "arrogant git" nor someone who apparently threatens.
Look I'm sorry if I appear a dick, because nothing could be further from the truth. I'm actually quite friendly most of the time XD
It's just so aggravating to find a story this great, only for it to update once in a blue moon.
Just FYI, I always do this with stories that never update. I'm only vocal with this one because I love it so much and it's a shame that I've had to do so.
But I do apologize for insulting you, it was out of order
There is nothing wrong with me, I do this with every story that fails to update, it's just my thing.
Imagine your favorite show left on a massive cliffhanger, then decided to leave it like that for months when it previously updated more or less regularly.
Meh, it's my thing. You don't have to like it. I'm vocal with it on this story because unlike the rest, I actually really love it
3415213 But Zama, that's like me expecting you to update daily. Everyone has different writing speeds, real life situations, etc. Everyone is a unique butterfly.
3415828 Since ever, the author itself say so, how she is the most superior in almost everything, but give her a nice touch making her more human with the nightmares, the clingy nature, and how much she love normal things like attentions or massages
It´s back.
Damn it!
Waited for three months, ate up in thirty minutes.
Great chapter! And I'm glad this fic isn't dead one of my favorites!
What happened to his/my vision!? I'm freaking out here. I need more of this story.
Excuse me, I seem to have gotten a sudden case of the sniffles...
3414706 Thank Celestia... I thought this story was dead too, but now I can't wait to see what these new chapters have in store for us!
I thank you for this awesome installment.
Keep up the good work, I hope the next
update is not as long in coming.
Fixx
*sees a new fimfiction update*
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*It's for This Magic Moment*
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Yay! A new chapter! A bit too much background story compared to story progress though.
Pushing that aside, I really hope that things doesn't just return to normal and he just accepts her back into his life, just like that.
There needs to be at least 2 or 3 chapters of depression, self pity and feels.
Whoo! Update!
Any ballpark estimates on when the next chapter might be published, by chance?
I've been really hoping this gets updated and now that it has been I just want more! It's a good chapter and I hope the next is even better.
nice chapter
so yeah, 1:45 in the morning and I'm reading this...Friggin worth it!
nice! im glad you're continuing the story! I'm loving the side story about how he first meets celestia, its very interesting. I understand what you meant that the chapter was uneventful, but it was still engaging.
Glad to see another chapter for the story. I'll just say that the background felt like it could use a little tightening up to hit the same points. I did enjoy the way you wrote the drugged perspective, especially the last scene with the "angel"
Well its getting late, guess I better...
*Notices TMM updated*
...read the fuck out of this chapter!
*does just that*
Damn. It's over.
Drugged up me is best me. Hope to see a little more high me next chapter, its fun to read. Eagerly await the talk with Celestia.
Continue writing you magnificent bastard!
Well good news is that in Equestria there is magic so Celestia may be able to heal him complete
Oh thank sweet slam dunking Christ!
I thought this was dead and I couldn't be happier to be wrong.
Chapter was good but now I HAVE to know what happens next!!!
I'm begging you please don't make me wait three more months
3414909 Pffft, that never happens, you must be new.
3414998
Goddess, she can turn gravity into gravy if she so want it
3414834 But do we really need that? I mean after going through all of that heartache forgiveness and compromise wouldn't be that far away given the circumstance, and besides we know they will get back together so why drag it out?
3415004 authors tend to ignore that to build drama on this site. Logics don't apply.
3414791 I hear you. That got me too.
................my feels man
3415005 Because they left on bad terms and he then goes on to hear about her going out with someone else.
So far he have not really expressed any real rage and anger, only hinted at it and pushed it away.
You know what, it breaks my heart to do this because this story is my absolute favorite one on this site.
The chapter was great, really. It sets up the hopefully lovely scene with the "Angel" and "You" the next chapter.
But although this is the case, I'm taking my fav and thumb up back.
Why?
Because although this story is bloody brilliant, you just take FAR TOO FUCKING LONG TO UPDATE!
And not in a funny way either. I just don't feel as though this story deserves a fav when it takes MONTHS to chuck up a new chapter.
So yeah, I'll keep it in my read later list, but I'm withholding my fav unless it updates by the end of the week.
Sorry, but I'm not giving a fav to something that probably wont update until next April.
Kind Regards
Ah! Ha ha... Well judge me if you want, we all die some day. I intend to deserve it. I think that would pretty much sum up my trip to Equestria.
It would be cool to hear about other people on this site ending up in Equestria. Written by other people of course. Everyone knows how self stories of an Equestria trip end up...
Yeah, not good to say the least.
Out in the field there is a saying, and I apologize ahead of time for the language, "9 out of 10 people don't realize how fucked they are until they find out that there is no toilet paper." I believe that is one of the truest statements ever issued by the military.
I think most of the people here, on this site, would not last nearly as long as they think they would.... heh heh heh.
Sounds good! Have you ever helped with horse breeding? It is vile, smelly, disgusting and a down right mood killer. I have been at autopsies that were more "enjoyable" to be at than helping on the ranch with horse breeding...
Damn, I was hoping for something decent.
If you come out with a redacted version, I think I would like to read it.
3415213 Some people have something called life, you know. Ever heard of it?
3415257
What is this life thou speakest of?
Don't be dick bud.
I work most of the week, pay the bills, go out and somehow still manage to update my stories frequently.
I love this story, I truly do. But I'm not faving or thumbing it up if it's not going to be updated at least once a week, a fortnight tops.
But hey, if he does it then I'll chuck it back at him
3415285
Are you threatening him with site statistics? Really? This is just plain rude and unacceptable behavior. You don't know how much time he has. You don't know why his updates take so long. All you know is how to bitch about something you are giving nothing in return for. Yes, it can be frustrating to not see the next chapter in a few months but how do you think this gives you the right to step forward like this? What makes you think you have the right to file such demands?
I am going to unfavourite and downvote all of your stories now I have read. Not because they are bad, but because I don't like your attitude. See? I can do that, too: make up my own silly standards and judge by them who deserves an upvote and who does not. And because just doing so quietly is not enough, I am rubbing it into your face, too. Just like you did.
3415318
By all means, knock yourself out
I'm not threatening anyone, I'm just not going to keep a fav for something that never updates.
Like I keep saying, I bloody love this story, I really do. But I only fav stories that deserve it.
The story is great, better than great really. It's my fav story on this site!
But when the updates are months apart then in my OPINION, it doesn't deserve a fav.
I'm not threatening anyone, that's pathetic. I'm just withholding my fav and thumb until it updates regularly.
3415285 Oh ho! Oh ho ho ho ho! So I'm the dick now?
Well ain't you just a peach. You want an "I have a cushy life and that gives me the right to bitch and moan about others' update schedules" medal for that?
If you think that would be a good excuse not to write a story, let me give you a little bit of a reality check: some of us work 7 to 5 and have a nocturnal Civil Engineering university course on top of that. Some of us go out at 6AM and aren't back home until 10:30PM, if not even later. The time those guys aren't working without a chance to so much as open up a text editor, they're studying their asses off. Others, like the legendary author of Article 2, got to the point where they typed three or four words a day to keep the story rolling. Don't you dare pretend to know the author's personal life to say whether they're lazing off or not; you have it really easy, pal.
Besides, from what I've seen, your writing drive is absolutely fucking nuts. Using it as a standard for the site is unfair at the mildest.
So do us all a favor: get off your high horse and go learn something about reader loyalty, you arrogant git. If you wanna unfave for such a crappy reason, the exit's right over there at the red X button. Don't let the door hit your ass on the way out and don't go running your mouth when people call you out on your bullshit.
3415318 I'd say don't stoop down to his level, but I hardly think I can convince you.
3415336
Telling him you are taking the favorite and upvote back is NOT threatening? What then? A punishment?
What the hell is wrong with you?
3415346
Can I have a smiley face sticker with that medal?
Apologies if my opinion bothered you, for I'm neither an "arrogant git" nor someone who apparently threatens.
Look I'm sorry if I appear a dick, because nothing could be further from the truth. I'm actually quite friendly most of the time XD
It's just so aggravating to find a story this great, only for it to update once in a blue moon.
Just FYI, I always do this with stories that never update. I'm only vocal with this one because I love it so much and it's a shame that I've had to do so.
But I do apologize for insulting you, it was out of order
3415357
How is that a punishment? He has thousands.
There is nothing wrong with me, I do this with every story that fails to update, it's just my thing.
Imagine your favorite show left on a massive cliffhanger, then decided to leave it like that for months when it previously updated more or less regularly.
Meh, it's my thing. You don't have to like it. I'm vocal with it on this story because unlike the rest, I actually really love it
3415358 Glad we could keep this civil.
3415410
I'm not one for arguing XD
And now....I wait
3414754
I know right? It's like a roller coaster.
Best birthday present ever. Fuck yes. I'mma read this once I'm back home... so EXCITED.
3415213 But Zama, that's like me expecting you to update daily. Everyone has different writing speeds, real life situations, etc. Everyone is a unique butterfly.
Damn ninjas and their onions.
3415613
Aye, I may have been too hasty this morning.
It's a great story and thus I shall fav it once again XD
I can only hope that Scatman pumps the next one out ASAP
3415633 Yay, I helped! And yeah, I hope the next chapter is soon
YES! I've been waiting for a update to this fic for so long and lo and behold, here it is!!!
3415007
The author haven't stop using logic so far, again and again he has point up Celestia is a goddess, he will remember to do that
3415004 Since when is Celestia a goddess?
3415828
Since ever, the author itself say so, how she is the most superior in almost everything, but give her a nice touch making her more human with the nightmares, the clingy nature, and how much she love normal things like attentions or massages
I used to be a fanfiction writer like you, but then I took an arrow to the knee.
I'm confused... Why couldn't he see at the end? Must have been a weird drug.