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I like this, but the grammar is fairly bad.
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I understand that, it is just that I am new to this website. So I don't know how to make contact with a proofreader. If you know how then please let me know. Thank you for your comment.
I'm fairly new as well, so I don't know how to get a proofreader, nor do I know what that is. But I could look it up.
Why the hell does Celestia or Luna even want his lab anyways?
They most likely going to nuked themselves or shoot each other with guns and missiles if they try to steal and "modernized" his stuff.
Let's see what he did! Or if Celestia is just afraid of technology!
That's a lot of hate on both sides!
Note: it would be funny if Sunset showed up!
2024 and people still write those petrified for 1000 years human fics
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some concepts are interesing and stick with you after reading other long afterwards. I myself do like and am interested in stories that have some weird reality stuff like people or things having been erased and still being there or things that were never supposed to exist existing despite that
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The problem isn't the story type the problem is the absolute nonsense it takes to get on that stupid petrified point.
Why the hell do those two princesses even need to find his lab!? Despite learning about the concept of a freaking atomic bomb/nuke!!??
It's only harmless IF nobody/nopony ever found it or uses it. So it's highly best for ponykind to leave his dang lab alone, unless they will become another Fallout Equestria world!!!
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a good point he can bring up to twilight. He knows the danger and keeps it safe and well hidden after all this time but celestia canot seem to even stop a godlike being she had in the gardens for 1000 years. Nobody with any sense would have stoned discord then kept him in the gardens. if anything that is a good point against letting anyone celestia has sway with near his lab
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And don't get me started with the other technological weapons like guns/laser guns, military vehicles, tanks, jets, warships/submarines, missiles, or any other type of futuristic weapons that our protagonist has?
There are all actually harmless, if they DON'T go to the wrong hands OR Hooves.
And I don't know why the "pacifistic" princesses need to find the lab for the highly dangerous weapons?
Are they actually secretly gearing for a potential war or retaliation?