Loves Fantasy, Adventure, and most of all, My Little Pony. G4 and G5 alike!
When Alphabittle sleeps in one morning after an exhausting midnight of cleaning up his tea shop from a party, his daughter, Misty, comes in to wake him up and give him a fun day of play. But with how tired and sleepy he is, Misty wonders if that’s such a good idea after all. Characters belong to Hasbro.
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Btw, I’m sorry if the characters aren’t completely accurate to how they are in G5. This story is mainly a template for a father/daughter relationship for my OCs that I’m making for a future MLP story. I figured since Misty and Alphabittle fit their descriptions in some ways like a teenage mare and a big, strong, middle-aged stallion, they can be perfect stand-ins for my OCs until their characters are finished. Plus, I’m just a sucker for father and daughter relationships. Especially for ponies. So I had to write a story about these two.
This was a fun/cute fic of young Misty with her father before Opaline took her- but as far as formatting goes, there were a whole bunch of blank spaces in between text which it didn't seem was supposed to be regularly interrupted, and it was kind of jarring/disjointed to read. Nothing in the spelling or grammar was bad, and it was just that formatting issue which took me out of the story.
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Fixed it. Also, this story I actually consider more of an AU story where Misty lives an entirely different life than she does in the show. In this version, she’s lived with her father her whole life. But that’s not too important to know since it’s just a short story.
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Oh- I had been completely unaware it was part of an AU series. I had just seen it on the new stories list and checked it out from that. Thanks for telling me about that!
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Sorry. I probably should have explained that in the description of the story.