When Rainbow Dash's speed during a new trick turns out to be too much for her own good, she comes to realize how important she really is when she finds herself in a war-torn version of her old home.
With criminal activity at an all-time low and the papers uninteresting with headlines of a royal wedding, it is no wonder Sherclop Pones longs for a case. To his utmost delight, one had been presented to him—that is the disappearance of Rainbow Dash
Twilight is accidentally catapulted into a world she never knew existed, and is forced to work with the inhabitants of this strange world to stop an inter-universal war.
Princess Luna insists that Derpy's nightmares are ordinary. If that's so, why is one of them chasing her into the waking world? For that matter, why has the waking world's Ponyville turned into an evil version of itself!?
Pinkie Pie is brought to Equestria Divided, an alternate universe where the Mane 6 have turned against each other, warping Equestria into a nightmarish war zone. For her new friends, Pinkie fights against the odds as the Pink Samurai.
Just a little bit of constructive criticism: maybe if you related the bubble patter with, say the early demise of her captor by means of drowning, it would become full circle easter.
15871 Sorry I'm not posting with a name, but something derped my account.
Anywho, I see too many of those types of stories; whenever derpy is in some slightly violent situation, she always seems to get her cutie mark by killing somepony. I didn't want that theme here (at least, again and again). Besides, it doesn't seem to fit her; she's to nice a pony to hurt anypony on purpose.
51012 yes, if by left mind you mean pinkiemeina. Oh NOES!!! LOL sorry for that bad grammer.... How come Twi looks like she has PINKIEMEINA'S dress on from Cupcakes?
Ok..... ps. I just noticed something.. there's atleast three of the ponies that we have seen the dark side of (,,) What about Rainbow Dash and Applejack?
Ok..... ps. I just noticed something.. there's atleast three of the ponies that we have seen the dark side of (,,) What about Rainbow Dash and Applejack? oh wait, I forgot *sigh*
Jus' sayin. it could happen...there are enough writer here and there to do that...
Oh, and RD and AJ are too stable to crack like that. Instead of pushing down their pain/fear/anxiety they usually push it on everybody quickly--wait, Applejack has her huge fear of failure (especially when not doing things herself) which she usually deals with by isolating herself from her friends, and Dash has an irrational fear of losing*...But they are already kinda violent, so they most they would do is crawl up in a corner and cry *Ep. 16 (sonic rainboom)*
65302 Rainbow dash? Let's just say she wasn't too happy with being made into cupcakes in the other dimension. "Fractured Loyalty". And Applejack? DRUNK.
At first I thought I'd made a mistake getting interested in this story till it got less and less like Cupcakes and did that gruesome spoon part. This was detter then I expected.
Whoa. Dude. No wonder she has issues with crashing into stuff.
Give 'er the ol' one-two!
......WOAH. That is an awesome story.
Just a little bit of constructive criticism: maybe if you related the bubble patter with, say the early demise of her captor by means of drowning, it would become full circle easter.
15871
Sorry I'm not posting with a name, but something derped my account.
Anywho, I see too many of those types of stories; whenever derpy is in some slightly violent situation, she always seems to get her cutie mark by killing somepony. I didn't want that theme here (at least, again and again). Besides, it doesn't seem to fit her; she's to nice a pony to hurt anypony on purpose.
Though, rewriting the ending might not hurt...
--</^\>
ok,
I see.
"I find this difficult to masturbate to."
Who would eat an eyeball in their right mind?
Pinkie would. In her left mind.
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yes, if by left mind you mean pinkiemeina. Oh NOES!!! LOL sorry for that bad grammer.... How come Twi looks like she has PINKIEMEINA'S dress on from Cupcakes?
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Is that why her eyes ? F***ing Pinkiemeina..... <------NEVER trust that side of Pinkie Pie, NEVER!!
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0_o
Is that why her eyes ? F***ing Pinkiemeina..... <------NEVER trust that side of Pinkie Pie, NEVER!!
ps.REMEMBER WHAT SHE DID TO :( *sniffs*
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But then it was all just one big sexual innuendo...and they all F***'d
Good ol' Bubbles is still recuperating on account of spoons/cum in her eyes, but she'll get over it in a day or two.
--</^\>
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Cuz that's my avatar.
I also used it for one of my stories where she goes insane. Boy, I wish there was a paranoid Twilight emoticon on this.
62598
......What?
63887
Ok..... ps. I just noticed something.. there's atleast three of the ponies that we have seen the dark side of (,,) What about Rainbow Dash and Applejack?
62598
......What?
63887
Ok..... ps. I just noticed something.. there's atleast three of the ponies that we have seen the dark side of (,,) What about Rainbow Dash and Applejack? oh wait, I forgot *sigh*
Best stinking thing I've ever read
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Jus' sayin. it could happen...there are enough writer here and there to do that...
Oh, and RD and AJ are too stable to crack like that. Instead of pushing down their pain/fear/anxiety they usually push it on everybody quickly--wait, Applejack has her huge fear of failure (especially when not doing things herself) which she usually deals with by isolating herself from her friends, and Dash has an irrational fear of losing*...But they are already kinda violent, so they most they would do is crawl up in a corner and cry *Ep. 16 (sonic rainboom)*
That's why no dark side!
--</^\>
*pft, totally not the same things
65302
Rainbow dash?
Let's just say she wasn't too happy with being made into cupcakes in the other dimension. "Fractured Loyalty".
And Applejack?
DRUNK.
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I have an account now!
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I'm not a guest any more... and thanks for the explanation that I was asking Taiyon for....
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This is silly talk! I can't even understand what this means!
when i read the first part of this i was first like: FUCK, ANOTHER CUPCAKES STORY
but now i just feal depressed that derpy has a fake eye
At first I thought I'd made a mistake getting interested in this story till it got less and less like Cupcakes and did that gruesome spoon part. This was detter then I expected.