THIS STORY TAKES PLACE PRE SEASON 5
Diamond Tiara invites the Cutie Mark Crusaders to her Nightmare Night party. Her house gets struck by lightning and the crusaders somehow end up in another dimension where everypony is acting strange.
This isn't a horror story or anything, the title is a reference to the Disney World ride [which also has a building get struck by lightning on Halloween. ]
The cover is probably a placeholder, I might draw an actual cover. Right now i'm using an edit i made over a year ago for a scrapped story idea i had then, but I used the same costumes for this story.
[this is my first time writing a fanfic, i usually only write scripts, but i've been wanting to get into writing fanfics. so i thought why not start with a short cheesy nightmare night story. i actually had a lot of ideas for nightmare night stories but i think this will be the only one i can actually write before halloween :(
this actually started out as a completely different idea and then turned into this, i was kinda just making everything up as i went along so it might be a bit clunky. the grammar also might be wrong because i've never written anything like this before.]
Pretty funny. Kinda lost me at first with the whole "another dimension thing" but I didn't mind it that much. You got your first like.
OMG YOU'RE EVERYWHERE! 😭 I LOVE THIS AND HAPPY NIGHTMARE NIGHT
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am i everywhere? haha
You would, Scootaloo.
I can picture this so well.
He's so good at it!
Pfffff. I don't think a lot of people are gonna catch this joke.
Damn, Sweetie Belle, that's a little harsh. Do ponies not have a right to their own personalities anymore?
I know this awesome CMC voice actor who could totally do a reading of this fic.
I also know this awesome artist known for drawing the CMCs who could make a great cover art.
I wonder if you know them.
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hmm no i don't think i know them but they do sound pretty cool
This part is really sad. Like I know DT is a jerk and whatnot, but seeing who she became after the fact really makes it sad.
So I'm a bit confused. Was the alt dimension just DT trying to play a prank? I assumed that at least.
Anyway, Sweetie Belle always the kind one, that's why she's my favorite Crusader.
Fun little short. Would've like to see more.
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idk honestly i was just making this up as i went along, i had the disney world tower of terror ride on my mind, where people get struck by lightning in an elevator and end up in the twilight zone.
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I see. Well, I look forward to your next fic.