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NaviNautical


Just chilling working on stories :)

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Christopher Pierson is a great student, but doesn't see the value of friendship. When his father takes him on a train ride gone wrong, Chris finds himself in Ponyville. Together with Twilight and some other students, Chris will learn the magic of friendship and discover not only his place in the world, but of the human who was in Equestria before him. Rated T for themes/swearing.

Cover art made by myself, link to high res version: https://www.deviantart.com/navinautical/art/Blep-965287171

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 4 )

Nice enough exposition, and a dad who knows Spike's scroll-sending trick. Okay, you have my interest. :moustache:

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Thank you very much! Honestly, for a long time the exposition and pacing were my biggest problems. Having these grandeur ideas and not knowing how to properly implement them was a nightmare. But I appreciate you reading!

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Truth be known, I have much the same dilemma in my stories, so don't feel alone! :rainbowkiss:

This is an interesting premise, I look forward to seeing where you take this story next!

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