• Member Since 26th Apr, 2023
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Golden-Gale


YO! Read my stories broskies! I gotz the good stuffz, ye! :)

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I am redoing everything, some of you may not know why but it is within valid reasoning I assure you. The chapters I deleted will come back but better than ever as I had gotten the realization that it just simply wasn't right and what I mean by that is the fact that I was leading the paragraphs in the wrong direction when it came to writing them. I either made them too long or made the sentences within them too long. I either added to much detail or not enough detail. I transitioned from one thing to another way to quickly. There was a lot of screw ups but I've realized a shit ton of them and Im here to fix them. Expect all the chapters to return by tomorrow but better than ever or well...improved and definitely different the story is going to be completely revamped and changed.

ermagerd it's back

Try listening to it with the robot voice AI narrator. Sounded pretty good to me but thats just me saying that.

Comment posted by Golden-Gale deleted Oct 3rd, 2023

Sorry my boy but you've lost me. It was already great and now I can't even progress in the story... It was so good....how could you :moustache:

Uh, not sure how I lost you but alright.

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I didn't mean stop reading I'm just lost why you deleted it all, it was such a good story so far!

It was because I had picked up on some helpful insight. The story was all over the place to say the least. It needing fixing. I'm doing a better version of it. These new chapters will be much more refined.

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