The moment I was put in the cell, the head guard removed the ring from my horn, but warned me that the cell was made of the same material so my magic wouldn’t work.
The first thing I tried was to remove the magic suppression ring on my horn, but the moment I tried pulling it off it tightened around my horn, causing me to let go.
Thanks again Morbius for another awesome chapter. I have to say this chapter was quite a twist with the Cadence reveal and I'm really curious to see how these dark portals are in involved with this bat pony society and their queen. I wish you the best of luck writing your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
11714927 it more likely that they are an enclave set up long ago in the past by nightmare moon and are just really dug into their mindsets and hate for the rest of equestria.
This is a strange book. It's good but I was under the impression it'd be more like the show. But with all the new races and characters you've included it's a completely different universe(Zootopia). That's not bad it's a good read. Also, you need Zecora's tag and take away the main 6 tag as they've not shown up at all in 70,000 words. Many of the plot points in the earlier chapters have fallen by the wayside and outright ignored which again is fine but a bit disappointing. I feel like he is being forced into a 19th century nobles shoes and shows very little of his modern soul (like worrying more about etiquette/history then inventing cool stuff and learning runes). At this point in the book Zecora has had more screen time then Sunset. I found myself skipping half the character introductions last chapter because there was so many (that's more me then you but still feels like your just making up new characters just to make new characters without there really being a reason).
So, how long after Blueblood and Zecora are missing does Celestia start having Canterlot turned upside down to find them, thus inadvertently invading the Silver Sanctum?
Well, I’m hooked. This story is full of depth and plot, and I cannot wait for more. Sure there are minor errors here or there, but they don’t take a way from the intrigue. This is getting good, and I can’t wait for more.
11715271 Since their guards apparently didn’t fall into the hole with them and are thus presumably still in Canterlot to raise the hue and cry right away? Not long at all as far as the Canterlot part of the search goes, I’d say.
Whether whatever magical gateway effect displaced the two is even still going, though, or whether any searchers will just find an empty hole with perhaps some wisps of fading magic still hanging around...that may be a different question. I can’t quite shake the feeling that the inhabitants of Silver Sanctum might just be directly responsible for both this portal and the one that Cadance fell through -- not necessarily with the best of intentions as far as Equestria is concerned, either, since I agree with Professor Litmus in getting a certain potential Nightmare follower vibe from these particular eutherians --, and that they may just still be working out some last bugs with the targeting of that magic before proceeding with whatever the next step of their actual plan is. All of which would then point towards those connections probably being strictly temporary on purpose because their creators specifically wouldn’t want them to be easily followed back to their source...and that brings us to the point where Celestia and the best experts she can muster might well be able to eventually figure out that Blueblood and Zecora were in fact teleported or shifted through the Umbral or whatever, but not necessarily where to.
Mind, this is so far just my imagination latching onto the first scenario it could come up with.
You’re gonna have to explain why Cadence is here n not on the surface becoming an alicorn like she’s supposed to be. Not to mention this new Silver Sanctum empire which may be concerning considering Nightmare Moon is not released yet n that we’re supposed to not derail this world from its canon. Update soon.
To make a very famous quote. "I hope you realize, this means war."
He is so worried about being a hostage, but neither he or Zecora are hostages. They are royals. Its war.........Military is coming to break things and burn shit. A country can not risk shit like this becoming Ok. It does not matter if they kill him, or if they kill Z. Countries can't allow things like this to go. They HAVE TO GO TO WAR.
Period.
Whoever these ponies are, they done seriously fucked up. (My bet is that it is actually a changeling kingdom)
Monk "I took another sip of my coffee." -Star Dawn
Ahh shit things just got kicked up a notch if Cadence is here. And im glad to see this update once more.
More good
JOY!!! ITS BACK!!! Cady is here huh? Hmm... Pegasus to Alicorn conversion imminent. Should be gooooooooood.
huh so in this reality Cadance didn't reunite a town in love after defeating a witch, interesting
Can't wait for more of this story!
Equestrias Canterlot has mistreated them so long until they are forced to be the enemy.
Very sad.
Intriguing
Interesting sequence ...
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Ah that’s an error. Lemme fix that.
Thanks again Morbius for another awesome chapter. I have to say this chapter was quite a twist with the Cadence reveal and I'm really curious to see how these dark portals are in involved with this bat pony society and their queen. I wish you the best of luck writing your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
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After they removed the first ring they added a new one for whatever reason...
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it more likely that they are an enclave set up long ago in the past by nightmare moon and are just really dug into their mindsets and hate for the rest of equestria.
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Would be a nice subplot to follow.
I wonder if Cadance is a Alicorn yet?
This is a strange book. It's good but I was under the impression it'd be more like the show. But with all the new races and characters you've included it's a completely different universe(Zootopia). That's not bad it's a good read. Also, you need Zecora's tag and take away the main 6 tag as they've not shown up at all in 70,000 words. Many of the plot points in the earlier chapters have fallen by the wayside and outright ignored which again is fine but a bit disappointing. I feel like he is being forced into a 19th century nobles shoes and shows very little of his modern soul (like worrying more about etiquette/history then inventing cool stuff and learning runes). At this point in the book Zecora has had more screen time then Sunset. I found myself skipping half the character introductions last chapter because there was so many (that's more me then you but still feels like your just making up new characters just to make new characters without there really being a reason).
So, how long after Blueblood and Zecora are missing does Celestia start having Canterlot turned upside down to find them, thus inadvertently invading the Silver Sanctum?
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I caught up!!!!!
Well, I’m hooked. This story is full of depth and plot, and I cannot wait for more. Sure there are minor errors here or there, but they don’t take a way from the intrigue. This is getting good, and I can’t wait for more.
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Since their guards apparently didn’t fall into the hole with them and are thus presumably still in Canterlot to raise the hue and cry right away? Not long at all as far as the Canterlot part of the search goes, I’d say.
Whether whatever magical gateway effect displaced the two is even still going, though, or whether any searchers will just find an empty hole with perhaps some wisps of fading magic still hanging around...that may be a different question. I can’t quite shake the feeling that the inhabitants of Silver Sanctum might just be directly responsible for both this portal and the one that Cadance fell through -- not necessarily with the best of intentions as far as Equestria is concerned, either, since I agree with Professor Litmus in getting a certain potential Nightmare follower vibe from these particular eutherians --, and that they may just still be working out some last bugs with the targeting of that magic before proceeding with whatever the next step of their actual plan is. All of which would then point towards those connections probably being strictly temporary on purpose because their creators specifically wouldn’t want them to be easily followed back to their source...and that brings us to the point where Celestia and the best experts she can muster might well be able to eventually figure out that Blueblood and Zecora were in fact teleported or shifted through the Umbral or whatever, but not necessarily where to.
Mind, this is so far just my imagination latching onto the first scenario it could come up with.
A wild Cadence has entered the story!
Excellent story thus far. Good to see it has returned. I look forward to future chapters.
You’re gonna have to explain why Cadence is here n not on the surface becoming an alicorn like she’s supposed to be. Not to mention this new Silver Sanctum empire which may be concerning considering Nightmare Moon is not released yet n that we’re supposed to not derail this world from its canon. Update soon.
Fascinating.
To make a very famous quote.
"I hope you realize, this means war."
He is so worried about being a hostage, but neither he or Zecora are hostages. They are royals. Its war.........Military is coming to break things and burn shit. A country can not risk shit like this becoming Ok. It does not matter if they kill him, or if they kill Z. Countries can't allow things like this to go. They HAVE TO GO TO WAR.
Period.
Whoever these ponies are, they done seriously fucked up. (My bet is that it is actually a changeling kingdom)
Monk
"I took another sip of my coffee." -Star Dawn
Sweet update but shit gonna be fun going forward
No new chapters yet?