Je well that just happen I suppose Spike no longer would break the wall of the school when he hatch, Twilight would not be the apprentice of Celestia, and she would not turn her parents into plants momentarily.
This is a brand new world, with a brand new aptitude, but Blueblood will have to catch them all.
I wonder if Blueblood give Spike his dream of becoming a honorable dragon knight. We see him dreaming of it when he try rescue Rarity from the Diamond Dogs for example.
I will protect and cherish him , I thought to myself, cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye .
The first Pinkie Promise Blue & Pinkie will be best of random buddys 👍
Spotted a few typos along the way, no complaints about the quality as such.
Penned and I were hastily packed into a covered horse drawn wagon carriage with nobody seeing us from the outside. We then returned to the palace while Penned told me that the Princess herself had promised to explain everything the moment the two of us arrived at the palace. The two of us didn’t really speak much during the ride there, and it was a rather awkward trip.
Should be Penny, of course, as in the rest of the text.
The room had an amazing view of Canterlot through the massive window on the second level. There were plenty of book on the shelves on the second level already,
One book, two book? Or maybe that’s supposed to be one truly massive tome. Either way, I think you’d want the plural.
11486749 Meh, the timeline was already a bit fubar'd with all the differences anyway. Timeline or not it is still his life to live of course but Destiny/Harmony is probably railroading all of that a bit anyways.
Weirdly, this also makes Spike a bit older, and quasi-royalty for when he eventually meets Rarity.
11489405 Hello Author! Since this version of Blueblood can't use magic with his horn, are you going to make him learn martial arts to use magic? One of the best parts of Avatar is that they use forms and movements to bend elements, making the fight dynamic instead of standing still shooting beams.
It also highlights Blueblood's struggle because he needs to study and perform these proper movements to manipulate his magic, which requires stamina. Unlike, a regular unicorn who can easily cast spells with his horn with no movements required
11503566 Oh damn, I hadn’t considered that. I mean earlier I did show that he could cast magic without martial arts. But maybe I can come up with something.
11503623 You could also make him learn Unicorn, Earth Pony, Pegasus, and Bat Pony martial arts to use the elements. For example, Earth Pony for Earth manipulation.
Plus, you can use Star Wars Lightsaber Styles to replace Avatar Martial Arts. For example, Ataru's fast paced attacks and parkour makes sense as a Pegasus/Bat Pony style except of the circular footwork of Aang's Baguazhang
I hadn’t forgotten my first friend Crystal Moon, and I had asked Aunt Celestia if there was a way to track her down. She promised that she would have her investigative team look into it. A week later, however, she came back with some upsetting news. The family who had adopted Crystal had vanished without a trace about a month after they’d adopted her. The parents had been in their Canterlot house one day with their daughter, and gone the very next day. All of their belongings were gone as well.
Imagine if the Order of The Sun was responsible and planned to finish the job a long time ago but Princess Celestia found him. Sounds crazy I know
Why is there an adventure tag? The story synopsis makes it sound like it sound more like a slice of life story.
More good
Hope you get over the COVID. Rooting for you.
Also, do they not have movable type printing????
“ The timelines will fix themselves!” From the man who gave Rosa Parks in 1911 so she can change the Underground Railroad
yes I know those two events have nothing to do with each other but the man did say that
Je well that just happen I suppose Spike no longer would break the wall of the school when he hatch, Twilight would not be the apprentice of Celestia, and she would not turn her parents into plants momentarily.
This is a brand new world, with a brand new aptitude, but Blueblood will have to catch them all.
The rating still hasn't changed. Does this mean there will be no sex? Update soon.
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I think in the next couple of days I will change it depending on my future plans.
I actually think these chapters have turned out amazing. Hope you get over covid soon so that we can get more amazing work.
Somewhere, somehow, a certain pink ponie wakes up knowing that a promise was made.
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If she's been born, yet.
Yes, loved this chapter, so glad to have spike in the story
You realize what you just did, right? And before she was even born? Dude, you're insane, certifiable.
Discordia not Eris? Huh
I wonder if Blueblood give Spike his dream of becoming a honorable dragon knight. We see him dreaming of it when he try rescue Rarity from the Diamond Dogs for example.
The first Pinkie Promise
Blue & Pinkie will be best of random buddys 👍
Spotted a few typos along the way, no complaints about the quality as such.
Should be Penny, of course, as in the rest of the text.
One book, two book? Or maybe that’s supposed to be one truly massive tome. Either way, I think you’d want the plural.
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Considering who is being discussed, I would argue they know anyway, or will know.
Blueblood is exuding the same energy as Rosa from Brooklyn Nine-Nine.
"I've only had [Spike] for a day, but if anything happened to him, I would kill everyone in this room and then myself."
Welp, there goes the main timeline.
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i guess the adventure part will come later, Blue is still young so no fighting
At that moment, an alarmingly pink mote of stardust in the endless ethereum felt a disturbance in the force.
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Can’t wait to read this new chapter and sorry about your covid
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Meh, the timeline was already a bit fubar'd with all the differences anyway. Timeline or not it is still his life to live of course but Destiny/Harmony is probably railroading all of that a bit anyways.
Weirdly, this also makes Spike a bit older, and quasi-royalty for when he eventually meets Rarity.
Looks like Twilight won't have her "number one assistant". If I didn't know better, I'd swear that Blueblood is going to be the Element of Magic.
Why not use the name Eris?
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I’ve already used Eris in another story. Discordia is the Roman name for Eris anyway.
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The Humble Prince?
Thanks for the recommendation! I check it out later.
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Awesome story! Thanks for the recommendation!
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Hello Author!
Since this version of Blueblood can't use magic with his horn, are you going to make him learn martial arts to use magic? One of the best parts of Avatar is that they use forms and movements to bend elements, making the fight dynamic instead of standing still shooting beams.
It also highlights Blueblood's struggle because he needs to study and perform these proper movements to manipulate his magic, which requires stamina. Unlike, a regular unicorn who can easily cast spells with his horn with no movements required
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Oh damn, I hadn’t considered that. I mean earlier I did show that he could cast magic without martial arts. But maybe I can come up with something.
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You could make Blueblood combine Elemental and Anti-Magic with martial arts. This would make him a deadly melee fighter.
You could also make it where he channels Elemental Magic through or around his weapons.
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You could also make him learn Unicorn, Earth Pony, Pegasus, and Bat Pony martial arts to use the elements. For example, Earth Pony for Earth manipulation.
Plus, you can use Star Wars Lightsaber Styles to replace Avatar Martial Arts. For example, Ataru's fast paced attacks and parkour makes sense as a Pegasus/Bat Pony style except of the circular footwork of Aang's Baguazhang
Imagine if the Order of The Sun was responsible and planned to finish the job a long time ago but Princess Celestia found him. Sounds crazy I know
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It's like that scene where the princesses get snatched by the plunder vines...
Ive watched too much hentai....
Monk
"What are we going to do on the bed oni chan?"