Thanks again MG for another amazing chapter. Lots of great content this chapter. You did a great job including and describing some new OC'S into this story such as with Crystal Moon and I'm curious to see how her character influences the story in the future. I also enjoyed the fact that you are going the extra mile in effort to add some world building into this story, such as with the thinly veiled discrimination of Bat ponies and the equestrian Calander and language differences compared to earths own. I don't know about other readers, but I find stories whose authors have gone to the effort to add lots of details, lore and world building into their fanfics tend to generally be a step above in standard to the usual stories we often see posted and much more memorable in my mind. Little sprinkles of lore or facts during a chapter, none of which have to be in great length, help build a unique world in which the reader can immerse themselves with interest. Anyway, I can already see that this story is heading towards the right direction and I am very excited to see where you take it in the future. I thank you again for all the time and effort you have given to bring us these great chapters, and I wish you the best of luck writing your next one. Cheers!
11434522 For the months, I looked up a bunch of Middle English words and used them or variations/combinations of them for the months. For example, the first month just means beginning, the last month means end. Midsomar and Summerstar were exceptions. A lot of the months with End in them signify the ending of one season or another, as well.
As for the days, well the first two are easy enough. Sun's Day and Moon's Day. Platday was named after Princess Platinum, Hurday was named after Commander Hurricane, and Pudday was named after Chancellor Puddinghead. Nerday just means Near Day, like the end of the week is near, and Endday is just the End Day of the week.
11433912 Between his name and as a bit of payback for the whole “bat pony lover” label, I could actually see that happen. Though at the same time he probably wouldn’t want to fall into the trap of just playing to the whole anti-eutherian prejudice, so that’d be a bit of a balancing act...but nice to watch if he could pull it off.
Hope he decide to dress up as a vampire one time cause, with a birthname such as his, who would resist?
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I am seriously loving the story so far! The momentum and build of the story great!
I love the slow but incredible development you did. Especially an anthropomorphic story no less!
Hard to find one that doesn't involve smut. Got nothing against it
I enjoy the pacing and world building of this story. Keep up the good work.
This be a pretty sweet chapter
Great new chapter, but did you have to end on such a cliffhanger
Loving this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter
Thanks again MG for another amazing chapter. Lots of great content this chapter. You did a great job including and describing some new OC'S into this story such as with Crystal Moon and I'm curious to see how her character influences the story in the future. I also enjoyed the fact that you are going the extra mile in effort to add some world building into this story, such as with the thinly veiled discrimination of Bat ponies and the equestrian Calander and language differences compared to earths own. I don't know about other readers, but I find stories whose authors have gone to the effort to add lots of details, lore and world building into their fanfics tend to generally be a step above in standard to the usual stories we often see posted and much more memorable in my mind. Little sprinkles of lore or facts during a chapter, none of which have to be in great length, help build a unique world in which the reader can immerse themselves with interest. Anyway, I can already see that this story is heading towards the right direction and I am very excited to see where you take it in the future. I thank you again for all the time and effort you have given to bring us these great chapters, and I wish you the best of luck writing your next one. Cheers!
The story is a gem, don't give up !
That was very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
cant wait for the main story to start!!!!
keep it up!!!~
So far, this is a great story. I am curious how you came up with the names for the days and months. I look forward to reading more of this.
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For the months, I looked up a bunch of Middle English words and used them or variations/combinations of them for the months. For example, the first month just means beginning, the last month means end. Midsomar and Summerstar were exceptions. A lot of the months with End in them signify the ending of one season or another, as well.
As for the days, well the first two are easy enough. Sun's Day and Moon's Day. Platday was named after Princess Platinum, Hurday was named after Commander Hurricane, and Pudday was named after Chancellor Puddinghead. Nerday just means Near Day, like the end of the week is near, and Endday is just the End Day of the week.
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Between his name and as a bit of payback for the whole “bat pony lover” label, I could actually see that happen. Though at the same time he probably wouldn’t want to fall into the trap of just playing to the whole anti-eutherian prejudice, so that’d be a bit of a balancing act...but nice to watch if he could pull it off.
Well, somepony is getting a "good boy!" Medal of honor from the princess when he wakes up.
Well this story definitely has my attention. Consider it liked and favorited.
I hope that when Blueblood is officially recognized as a prince. He uses his newly acquired resources to reunite with Crystal Moon.
Love it and good luck
I require more of this cake that is this story.
A delicious chapter, bitter yet sweet. Where will destiny and human nature bond or conflict.
I hope Crystal Moon will come back in the future
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Better she returns as a night guard and becomes his personal guard at some point. Maybe even something more the friend.
That was heartbreaking see Chrystal leaving her best friends. l hope we see her in future chapters