Its so good but... Aheeaah!

Even if I don't like the idea of rape (to certain extent). I do like the way Pinkie Pie protected the babies.

They better caught the fucker.
Also keep up the good work my good sir.

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I liked this story. Will defiantly be on the lookout for more. Found some grammatical errors, but beside that...

And to top it off, one song played in my head while I read the "sex" scene.

Is there something wrong with me? Yessss...

People shouldn't read things with the dark tag if they don't like the genre, especially a combination dark/sex tags. Your grammar and spelling and even syntax are good, which puts it a far cry above most violence-as-dark fics. No thumb yet from me, not enough story just yet, but I'll keep watching it, I'm interested in how this goes.

I'll watch this but I do have to hold my thumb until I have read more of this story.

Ill thumbs up but because I think I might have a slight hint of where this is going

IF I owned a country rape would be legalWhat's wrong with me

i am watching this story for updates and that stallion should be fairly easy to find since pinkie broke his snout and he left his DNA on her... he won't get away with it... and another sad thing is pinkie pie knows everybony in ponyville so she probably knows him

Fuck sake! This better not be what I think it is (Pinkie being raped by a burglar).
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Good grammar, nice writing style. Didn't get through even a fourth of the fic.

Why, man. Just why. D: You made me cry today.

...........Wh-....I dont even...Not Pinkie! i think thid shows my emotions well for what happends to Pinkie.

....Damn androids, j/k but that was pretty good and well writen but man i'd destroy that burgular.

Sorry for long comment, I felt I had a lot to say about this story.
This wasn't bad, execution-wise. I very much like the idea of responsibility despite horrible circumstances, and think that that's an interesting way to use the subject matter, rather than solely for shock value.
A couple of grammatical errors:

It made thing look a little funny, but it definitely put everypony's nerves at ease.

Should be 'things', I assume.

She relight the candle.

'Relit'
There are a few things I think could have been done better.
I think more tension could have been built before the burglar broke in, and slower pacing overall. I think it would work better if we had more insight on Pinkie's thoughts or reactions to the events as they occur, beyond the physical reactions (crying, pleading, etc) or at least an idea of the sheer amount of shock she's being put through, or the immense amount of courage it took for her to stand up immediately after the event. There's some chillingly powerful emotion there I think you could have tapped into. I did not really 'feel' for her as much as I think I should have, especially given her situation. You established that you are using omniscient third person for this story (we see both Pinkie's and Twilight's thoughts), so I think you should utilize that.
The use of the word "evil" bothered me. I don't know, the readers can assume that for themselves based on his actions, rather than the narrator telling them that. But those are mostly preference-based.
Overall, rape being something very difficult to write about, I do think you have something here, and I'm interested to see how this pans out.

1323251 Well let us hope that you'll never be in charge of the legal system of any country then.

Wow...that was actually pretty well written, if not extremely messed up during "that" part.
Can't wait to hear the conclusion.

1323251 Remember that it would also be legal for people to rape you.

1323328 Yes, Twilight sure will love taking semen from Pinkie's vagina.

Thumbs up!

Oh god, i hated reading this. i mean, its an alright story, but... Pinkie.... pls no.

All my rustles are jimmied.

I'm going to track this one. It could use some editing, but the story's got potential, if it's handled properly.

Poor Pinkie though. Honestly, for the rapist's sake, I almost hope he gets struck by lightning or something. It'll probably hurt less than what Twi and the others (to say nothing of PINKIE) would do to him after a tracking spell traces the link between him and the blood and semen.

1324448
Hm. Maybe that's the whole point...

1324448No I wouldn't be raped, ya know why because Iwould be the DICTATORIFYOUKNOWWHATIMEAN

1332722 When I take over the world, I will have all people with ugly feet chop them off. . . I hate ugly feet, so gross.

he should've raped the foals too

P...Pinkie pie? Raped? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

That seriously might be the saddest thing I've ever experienced in my life.

1423766 what in the name of god???

*shiver*