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This was a pretty good little story. Simple premise, and simple execution. Sickle was cute; always glad to see antler-mares getting some love and attention. As with most porn stories, this one probably could have benefited from slightly slower pacing and a bit more detail of the sex. I would have liked to see a little bit more buildup as well, maybe give the two a little more time to bond before jumping into the lewd stuff.