So, a named second person fic. I can keep immersion perfectly. Many authors will use anon, which disconnects the character from the story., And for me I am no longer immersed as that character. But a character named after an aerial maneuver is good stuff. I know you picked this one up, so praise must be to the original author Dustchu, who will be getting some of my love.
I suppose those other chapters will be great. This was a worthy one.
11235965 Thank you very much. Writing Second Person was a challenge, but you presented me with it packaged inside an opportunity too good to ignore any longer. I'm glad you are pleased with the result. I hope it reignites your pony writing spirit. Elsewise, I look forward to completing this story personally.
Whaaaaaat, after all these (few?) years a sequel (and the story line got more and more chaotic pfffff)? It's been so long that even me is a year into digital drawing so I am not sure if I should draw Ailly once
I am honestly Surprised that Apogee or Aileron haven't gotten so frustrated at how disgusting the trailer is at this point that they just clean it our of irritation. Aileron out of a desire to irritate his mother.
11236314 I did one with pencil and Pony Town back then, slightly lighter coat and longer mane since he probably would‘t want it to be short like the rest of his family as a rebel, and the CM with a boomerang considering his name and Apogee probably inherited most of the space talents.
Shoot. For a moment there, during the couch scene, I thought that you were using my mother in place of Delta. I mean, I could hear my mother talk like that, swearing like a drunken Irish sailor. Yeah, I had to grow up in that kind of situation...
11743099 I think the line can still work here. Yes the date ended badly, but maybe those were just his initial reactions to how the date ended, then he calmed down after a day or 2. Not uncommon for people to assume the worst of a bad situation. Not like people are rational all the time.
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Damn Shakes, you are pumping them out recently.
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Yooooo, I was wondering if this was ever being picked up again. Let's fucking go!
You're on a roll!
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This was great! Wondering if you are going to leave it at that or have a bonus chapter or something where he does his sister too?
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Is this supposed to have the exact same description as A Volatile Mixture?
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Yes.
A Volatile Mixture is fucking great, and I’m so glad to see this as a continuation of sorts!
Not normally a second person pov person, but its you so ill have a look
Christ, you know, I expected this to be good, but I didn't expect you to rock it so goddamn well.
Like holy fuck, Shakes, I'm envious, that was fucking... good, really good.
Nicely done man, fucking nicely done!
Well...that was Juicy.
I wonder what drama further awaits.
So, a named second person fic. I can keep immersion perfectly. Many authors will use anon, which disconnects the character from the story., And for me I am no longer immersed as that character. But a character named after an aerial maneuver is good stuff. I know you picked this one up, so praise must be to the original author Dustchu, who will be getting some of my love.
I suppose those other chapters will be great. This was a worthy one.
Estrus is a scary thing.
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Thank you very much.
Writing Second Person was a challenge, but you presented me with it packaged inside an opportunity too good to ignore any longer. I'm glad you are pleased with the result. I hope it reignites your pony writing spirit. Elsewise, I look forward to completing this story personally.
Whaaaaaat, after all these (few?) years a sequel (and the story line got more and more chaotic pfffff)? It's been so long that even me is a year into digital drawing so I am not sure if I should draw Ailly once
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My understanding is he basically looks like R63 Delta, with a different cutie mark.
I am honestly Surprised that Apogee or Aileron haven't gotten so frustrated at how disgusting the trailer is at this point that they just clean it our of irritation. Aileron out of a desire to irritate his mother.
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I did one with pencil and Pony Town back then, slightly lighter coat and longer mane since he probably would‘t want it to be short like the rest of his family as a rebel, and the CM with a boomerang considering his name and Apogee probably inherited most of the space talents.
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they did say this happens quite alot so mabey they did in the begining but lost moral when it kept getting dirty
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Hey Shakes, is this story dead? I rather like it, would be cool if it gets an update or something
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okay
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Ayyy, thanks!
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This needs another chapter!
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It's on my to-do list.
Ohhh so good, I need more of this! Any chance of it making a comeback?
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Yes.
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Whooooo! You da man!
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is it a good chance or are the odds bad enough I'd make a killing betting on it.
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Well that is 1 of the 2 mares taken care off.
Next up is sweet twin sister Apogee's turn i hope.
Shoot. For a moment there, during the couch scene, I thought that you were using my mother in place of Delta. I mean, I could hear my mother talk like that, swearing like a drunken Irish sailor. Yeah, I had to grow up in that kind of situation...
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That is a interesting way to bond with her son
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In the previous story, the last we hear of Rose is:
> She just left you, after everything… she just ended your relationship like it was nothing!
So, I guess you're declining to incorporate that line into this story's continuity?
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I think the line can still work here. Yes the date ended badly, but maybe those were just his initial reactions to how the date ended, then he calmed down after a day or 2. Not uncommon for people to assume the worst of a bad situation. Not like people are rational all the time.