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Thanks.
that was really great!
A little constructive criticism: I would recommend going over your story with some sort of spell and grammar checking program, such as Grammarly (unless the first two chapters are supposed to be that way, in which case more power to you)
Nice story. Just read through the whole thing and dang, MC developed some PTSD in those memories. It is kind of interesting to see cannon progressing without it being the main focus as well. Cant wait to see more.
I feel quite sad that Nightmare Moon didn't get any closure by seeing the Traitor bleed out at her hooves.
I'm hoping that Luna gets her comeuppance and maybe that the death tag will be added at some point!
Other than this small disappointment at seeing her "Be ThE BeTtEr PeRsOn", which I'll never understand why people dislike revenge so much, the fic is good...
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Upon taking a revenge - dig two graves, eye for an eye makes the whole world blind, etc.
Revenge does nothing at all.
It's like from Judas Priest - The Sentinel - Sworn to revenge, condemned to hell.
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Changed form of something like a proverb.
"Every joke has a grain of truth."
Truly a masterfully wrriten story this one, I read tell I couldn't on day one and then once more came out read and rad until my shift was over at work. I had to pick wth six chapters left and man were they great works an inspirations
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Glad to make someone's day.
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The opposite.
The joke contents more real information than something just for a laugh.
Come for clickbait. Left with emotional damage happily.
LOL. Wow... I love this quote.
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I'm mystified here.
Long time ago I was in same situation emotionally. And came up with same conclusion. Even worded like that sometime later(yes, in Russian).
How odd to see this phrasing again.