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11339472
Man, it hasn't been even a minute, but you already texted a comment. That's some speed you've got there.
For someone who claims to want to give her a chance she doesn't act it. She doing everything but facing how they got into this mess and a lot of it lies on her shoulders because she couldn't keep a simple promise.
Не "drooling", а, скорее, "dripping", если по смыслу, как мне кажется.
PS Кстати, обратил внимание, что тут переведена не окончательная версия главы. На фикбуке несколько моментов было добавлено/переделано. Концовка вот этого абзаца:
- точно, из наиболее значительного.
11339782
Ну или так.
"Необходима" в оригинале трактуется несколько иначе) Примерно как в анекдоте: "'Это неописуемо!' - сказала собака, глядя на баобаб". Очередная игра слов :)
11339845
Я это понял и так, просто тут её никак не переведёшь.
11339877
А так, как есть, кмк, непонятно вообще, к чему слово и зачем.
These are some very interesting phrases I've never heard before. I'm not sure if they are common phrases in Russian that are being literally translated or are unique to this story.
There should always be the word "the" when referring to a specific unicorn/alicorn/princess/etc.
11340443
Nope, the phrases are all the author's wild imagination. Thanks for the pointing at the mistakes.
11339782
Если прям уж так нужно, то я могу добавить то, что было изменено.
11341221
Хорошо бы. Там, всё-таки, определённый подвод итогов присутствует...
11341473
А вы именно какие-то определённые моменты хотите поменять или всю главу? Если первое, то просто покажите моменты.
11341598
Достаточно абзаца, начинающегося с
- я его до/переделывал, из мало-мальски значительного.
11341679
Сделано.
Potatoes are poisonous to horses, which is why "hay fries" were introduced in cannon on the TV show.
11344726
All blame is on author's shoulder.
11344726
I'm afraid this fact was simply unknown to me :(
I did not expect any pitfalls in such a simple moment...
11345138
Well, apparently, we will have to proceed from the fact that Equestrian ponies are not Earth horses after all :)
11345138
Yeah. They were thorough in setting up the original cannon. Kinda neat, isn't it?
11345887
When you write a book, sometimes you have to dive into nuances that you didn't even think about before. I have to look for some information, like, for example, a lot of what I was looking for about horses and their features (Unfortunately, I was unlucky to find information about potatoes : ( ), and something is just to think about and justify, like that idea with the ceiling height described in chapter 44. This is also why writing is very interesting and, quite often, quite educational :)
11345924
Yup, that's for sure.
Celestia, for once in your life SHUT UP! Nightmare had her chance to kil Luna that night. While Nightmare may hate her she will not kill her
Estrus in this world is worse than most being monthly and yearly! Damn, MC. Maybe take Tia up on that changing spell after you fix her?
11534044
I'm not quite sure what you mean?..
11534044
When it came to this topic, I started reading about horse biology. I was surprised myself, because I also thought that estrus came once a year. It turned out to be like this.
Hey! Females are no different in that respect and those accidents happen. Most sensitive parts are outside, not inside, despite what males think of it.
bat-winged. Bats are "flying mice" in Eastern Slavic and German language, but not in English. And technically, not related. Flying mouse in English is a different creature, similar to flying squirrel, no wings included.
11534377
Most of ungulates and some other mammals, yeah. It's even always roughly around 20 days, strangely. The season part is a different factor and related to day length or something else... and here is a thought that ponies had lost daylight cycle reference over centuries thanks to some sleeping-in Princess.
11549939
За исправления спасибо, жалко только, что таких раньше не было.
Воман талкинг.
(100%----->0%)
11549939
Ну, я не женщина, так что могу только за мужчин говорить. А вот моя гамма - женщина, и она на этом моменте удивлена была, что "А что, так можно что ли?.." Делаю вывод, что даже если женщинам и прилетает таким образом, то явно реже :)
Везёт.