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The English kind of broke down halfway through this chapter.
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I agree, this chapter was a hard read. I absolutely love the concept - a human living as Nightmare Moon! I don't want to disparage the translators, as I'm sure they've done a lot of work to get the text to its current level. But many parts still feel like they've been mangled by Google Translate. The problem is, to fix these translation issues would almost require an entire rewrite of the text.
One quick correction here. In the English version of MLP, Pinkie calls Nightmare Moon "Black Snooty", not "the Black Smug". The word "smug" is a synonym for "snooty", so it's an easy translation mistake to make.
Very much love this concept and the intro, sure this might have been a rough read but it was good.
My only problem really is once it left the MC (nightmare) I sort of lost some interest? I mean the MC just passes out, only has 2 injuries (one of which is likely a punctured lung) after being "almost obliterated," it's kinda just weird.
That and it was generally just odd to me, then of course there's pinkie pie who uhh, exists and that 4th wall break at the end really kinda kills it.
With both guilt trip material from memorires of nightmare and technical knowledge of human's technology. I hope this protaganist will get out off this situation without revealing his human origin. Otherwise it will be yet another generic human turned Nightmare story.
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Thanks.
Needs a dedicated English speaking editor to go over the story and modify the English translation, but it is an interesting concept I am willing to read through.
Is that a reference to Tuman song? If yes, there is a better translation of that line, song received an English cover.
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It's not.
The sentence structure, and grammar, make this really hard to understand for an American reader.
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Tl;Dr - I tried. Really.