How far would you go to return to the life you once had?
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Oh cool, a story that's so far sounding good... here's 3 hopes that it don't turn into a dead story!
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Have no worries, friend! Even with me being a college student, I was able to finish my last story pretty well, so this one shouldn't go dead unless I die first.
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The main thing is not to die from sex! Especially when it's Celestia.🤣
Heh... yeah... I certainly laughed in this chapter. But I have one question!
When will we be able to see the mare!? Lightning Dust. Honestly, I would really like to see something romantic, and of course... you know, my preferences.
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Thanks for the comments, my friend. And don't worry! Romance is going to happen, but these things cant be rushed, and if they are then I take the risk of ruining the flow I have going right now...and I'd rather not do that.
And Lightning dust will be appearing later, not too much later but not right now either
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Of course my friend! I just expressed my expectations of the plot. I perfectly notice your changes in the text. However, I still have a request for you:
Try to write more reflections on behalf of the main character. Give him more adult manners in behavior. For example, trying to make fun of these dogs. Try to make fun of Zephyr Breeze by pointing out his idiotic behavior.
I, hehe, honestly, thought that this Bertha would press him with her udder, for his compliment, and after that she would start kissing him in the hickey! It would be truly funny, and the level of humor would correspond to a mature rating.
By the way, I still remember your promise perfectly! It was in the middle of Harmony Era. You promised me to write at least one chapter, co-authored with me. To get from this experiment, the opportunity to see the plot from a different angle.
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Isn't she beautiful?
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Ah yes! I remember the promise! And don't worry, Mitch himself, as you've noticed, finds hi.self lost in thought at times. Once he gets comfortable and stops being so stressed about his current predicament he's sure to notice and mess with the dogs flaws.
Oh, and when you do co-write a chapter with me, high chance it will be a romantic scene, for that is easily your Forte.
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I also assume that it will be a romantic scene.
Loved this mate! Ye definitely have my interest on this one! :D
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Thanks! Glad to hear it!
Yeah, I better see some action. Cause I planned ahead in case you want to hear me later on. When you PM me that is.
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Action is going to happen, but that stuff doesn't just happen.
That, and the kingdom building stuff happens alongside the main plot of the story.
Zephyr is totally the type to get captured and forced into hard labor, and no one notices he’s missing.
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One of the reasons why I decided to use him, other than the fact I think he's severely underdeveloped by stories on the site (I think I've only seen him on Clop stories, never in any legitimate novel style reads).
Poor guy just wants to exist