Ok, I’m getting a feeling that this is a infamous 2 thing. It makes sense on account of the crystal arm. The power to heal himself and others is also nice. But fighting a creature called a demon wall add weirdness up to 11 in my opinion. That, and are we going to get to the point what the human tends to do? Just asking.😐👐

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Im not sure I understand the question. The Demon Wall was something I pulled from final fantasy, and believed for it to be a cool test for Mitch to overcome. If you want to know more, look up stuff about it.

If you are asking when are we going to get to what is goal in the story is, then that point had already passed. Mitch wants to find the guy who forced him there and get back home...of course, things are never that simple and he will end up fulfilling his contract to D one way or another.

Hi my friend! Yes, I noticed your new chapter. To be honest, I expected it to be more, 5-6 thousand words.

"Cow-ish pony, what was that noise?" He asked as Zephyr looked down the mountain path, only to see a cloud of snow dust being kicked up by whatever was coming towards them.

I've never seen this before.

Aha... So you decided to give your main character a magical ability! Well, that's a good move! But try not to overdo it. Remember, brother, you have to pay for everything in this life, which you were able to show in the plot. That's right, you need to keep a balance.

Brother, I swear to you, I liked this chapter, especially the second half! Perhaps I will repeat myself, but you really draw conclusions and increase your experience when writing a plot. You're just missing one thing... write your chapters at least 10 thousand words or more. I understand that this step is still a challenge for you, but look at me! Yes, I don't release a new chapter every week, but when reading a chapter, it won't feel like it's just a small piece of cake.

If you can feel confident in yourself, then you can write 2-3 thousand words in one evening. Thus, you write only one scene, after that, you gather your courage and close your eyes, a picture of the world and the whole plot that you describe will appear in front of you. You know your plan, and you feel inspired. Besides, I will always support you! And you will not have time to open your eyes, and you already have a new chapter for 15 thousand words ready.😉

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Yeah, I kinda made up Cow-ish. Oh well, lol.

Believe me, no ones getting powers here without earning them in some way. There shall be no Gsry sues in this story, I swear!

Thanks for the comment and kind words, brother! And don't worry, I'm slowly building up to those bog word chapters!

Besides, I literally just fought a Demon Wall. What could be worse than that?

Crippling College debt

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I mean, Mitch already conquered that, can't say the same about me though.

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En Argentina es pública, pero no somos top 5 como las privadas. Igualmente, se puede graduar de esta universidad y continuar en otra privada salteando algunos cursos.
Y esperaba ver mas de la copa D.

Wait, so is this new crystal arm like a bludgeon? Or does it still look like an arm, but made of crystal??

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So, it looks exactly like a normal arm, but made from crystal. Think of it as a prosthetic for the recently armless section of his body